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DeTOUR V.2 on Foundry by purpledinosaur0
Minor Errors:
-If you jump onto the window at the start, you can jump onto the boxes and then through the objective from there. This means that the track is not 100% cheat proof.
-The turn after the stairs is difficult. If you go too fast you hit the wall and the part where the pallets are can knock you over.
-The pallets help with the uneven floor but it is still very bumpy. I often flipped.
-There are bridges poking out in the cone short cut and there is a wall sticking out in the second short cut. This is bad because you can get stuck if you hit them.
Impressions:
-I really liked the short cuts idea. They require skill but are shorter than the track and skip the jumps so they work perfectly.
-The mongooses are nicely out of the way from the racers and they are easy to reach if you lose your mongoose.
-The objective is uncheatable except for error 1.
-The jumps are good. They help make the short cuts more of a short cut because they slow down people going through the normal track.
-If you fall you always land further back on the track. This is good because you can’t land outside of the map.
Suggestions:
-Put another box on top of the box next to the fence box by the objective so that you can’t jump through the objective.
-Change the turn after the stairs into a grav lift or shield door assisted turn.
-Make the floor flat so you don’t have to use pallets and it will be less bumpy.
-Make the walls of the shortcuts smoother so you can’t get stuck.
Final Thoughts:
Again I have to say I really like this idea. I wish I’d thought of it. It is very creative and fun. The name really suits the track. Well done! I hope to see more great ideas like this in future tracks.
Final Rating:
Difficulty - Medium
Rating:
Creativity - 5
Flow - 4
Race-Ability - 4
Clarity - 4
Entertainment - 4
Overall: 4/5
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