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Subject: DeTOUR V.2 -Racetrack(With Youtube Video)(250+ DL's)

Reachhhhhhhh

-DeTOUR V.2-

The Idea-
This racetrack is based on my idea of having small shortcuts that only help when used at the rigght time. I also tried to make it so that it takes skill to get through them and maintain speed.

Youtube Link-
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7uqBgxb9JLw

- I just want to mention, the first 5 rating of this track, 4 on bungie and one on youtube, they have all been 5/5.

SLAYER-
-SWAT Tower The last team standing wins.

RACING-
-Snak3 Run An amazing map with basically all of it floating in mid-air and beautifully merged together.
-DeTOUR V.2 A racing map where the choice is up to you.
-Motocross 3 A map with a motocross feel.

INFECTION-
-Lab Escape Hold off the zombies untll you gain access to the next room. Will anyone survive?



[Edited on 07.07.2008 6:59 PM PDT]

  • 06.02.2008 4:22 PM PDT
Subject: DeTOUR V.2 - A Foundry Racetrack(With Youtube Video)

-Delta0Medusa-

Looks cool!

  • 06.02.2008 4:25 PM PDT

is there a game type for it

  • 06.02.2008 4:27 PM PDT
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can you put pics cuz i have slow internet

  • 06.02.2008 4:50 PM PDT

Forgetacular Contest Winner (Race Category)

hello fellow HT Map Maker! great video! cool idea! i like those overtakes in the vid by people taking the shortcuts. gonna DL this now. i really liked your motocross map too. i still have it actually and dont plan on deleting it

  • 06.02.2008 4:50 PM PDT

Reachhhhhhhh

Halotracks

http://www.halotracks.org/gametype.htm-
the gametype(SORRY)

  • 06.02.2008 4:57 PM PDT

Awesome raceing map! Me and my friends loved it!
Too bad it'll be lost after leaving the first page..

  • 06.02.2008 5:20 PM PDT

Add I sp00ner I if u wana find a way to get recon and help me get on bungie favorits

sweet map one of my favorits next to my own....

to bad it got stolen and the only credit i have is haveing it saved 1 moth befor the guy who stole it dose but still no1 believes me but oh well nice track

  • 06.02.2008 7:29 PM PDT
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its awsome

  • 06.02.2008 7:36 PM PDT

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good map man,,,,ive saved you its on the front page!

  • 06.03.2008 8:27 PM PDT

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DeTOUR V.2 on Foundry by purpledinosaur0

Minor Errors:
-If you jump onto the window at the start, you can jump onto the boxes and then through the objective from there. This means that the track is not 100% cheat proof.
-The turn after the stairs is difficult. If you go too fast you hit the wall and the part where the pallets are can knock you over.
-The pallets help with the uneven floor but it is still very bumpy. I often flipped.
-There are bridges poking out in the cone short cut and there is a wall sticking out in the second short cut. This is bad because you can get stuck if you hit them.

Impressions:
-I really liked the short cuts idea. They require skill but are shorter than the track and skip the jumps so they work perfectly.
-The mongooses are nicely out of the way from the racers and they are easy to reach if you lose your mongoose.
-The objective is uncheatable except for error 1.
-The jumps are good. They help make the short cuts more of a short cut because they slow down people going through the normal track.
-If you fall you always land further back on the track. This is good because you can’t land outside of the map.

Suggestions:
-Put another box on top of the box next to the fence box by the objective so that you can’t jump through the objective.
-Change the turn after the stairs into a grav lift or shield door assisted turn.
-Make the floor flat so you don’t have to use pallets and it will be less bumpy.
-Make the walls of the shortcuts smoother so you can’t get stuck.

Final Thoughts:
Again I have to say I really like this idea. I wish I’d thought of it. It is very creative and fun. The name really suits the track. Well done! I hope to see more great ideas like this in future tracks.

Final Rating:
Difficulty - Medium
Rating:
Creativity - 5
Flow - 4
Race-Ability - 4
Clarity - 4
Entertainment - 4
Overall: 4/5


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  • 06.06.2008 7:22 PM PDT

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