"I can feel it inside me... burning... thinking. It's getting ready to make its move. No one can help...no one can hide... The pain, oh God the pain! Ugh... it's ready! It's ready to take you into its warm embrace.. let..it..take..you...."
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I like the lighting but if the character had his gun down and the massive thing on the left wasnt there, I'd give it a 5/5
but for now, 3/5 nice work