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Poll: What do you think of my story? [closed]
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I wrote this in 15 minutes roughly and i am not that goo at writing, will I don't think I am that good.
Here it is:
It was dark out as The Chief and two other Spartans stood guard at the base. All of a sudden the Spartans hear a crash, than multiple grenades exploding out front of the base. The Spartans pulled out there Battles Rifles and were prepared to fight. One by one the Spartans were disappearing until the only one left was the Master Chief. He stood his ground. Moments later an Elite was sneaking up behind him. The Chief turned and shot 3 bursts from his Battles Rifle. All in the Elites head making him fall to his knees. The Chief turned to the door and started to head out. As he walked out an army of Elites were surrounding the base. The Chief heard a noise in the distance to find a Pelican, Warthogs and Tanks lining up behind him.
As the war began from each side people where dying. The Chief stood there shooting with rockets and sniper bullets flying past his head. The Chief yelled out to move in. All of the UNSC started to move in picking the Elites army off one by one. All of a sudden a large group of Brutes dropped in with all new armor. These brutes did not go down easy they took more shots. The Generals with their full body armor took clips of Battles Rifles shots, so many clips that the chief ran out. He pulled the Shotgun off of his back and started to charge. The Elites and Brutes started to retreat back as they were out numbered. The UNSC followed them back in hoping to wipe them out. They walked in with the Chief leading. The Chief yelled to get back, it’s a trap. They all started to run when the base got bombed with every weapon known to man. The Elites cheered as they thought they finished the fight when the Chief walked out of the smoke and said “It’s not over yet”. An aircraft from above dropped in and the Chief heard on his COM “this is Spartan Group Omega, ready to finish the fight”
As the Spartans dropped in from every angle shooting of rounds from their Battles Rifles they all simultaneously pulled out a shotgun and rushed in. The battles lasted long but only the Brutes were left. The Brutes all shot taking out a couple of the Spartans. The Chief started to sprint away when the leader of Spartan Group Omega said “Chief where are you going” than he said “men hold your ground and keep fighting. The Chief came back seconds later and told the Spartans “Stand back; it’s time to finish the fight”. The Chief fired the Spartan laser whipping out the rest of the Brutes.