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Subject: A Progressive fan fiction by OrdinaryKronos.
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Don't down yourself dude; it just needs some work, thats all. I had a crappy fic too at one point; And I learned that writing is like a work of art; just keep practicing and practicing, and learn from your mistakes and others too. And you'll become much better at wring FF's. You may quote me on that.
~Kronos.

  • 05.10.2007 8:40 PM PDT
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Thats really good, but u need to have more detail on the surroundings

[Edited on 05.11.2007 9:24 PM PDT]

  • 05.11.2007 9:23 PM PDT
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Yeah...That is an issue.

  • 05.12.2007 9:33 AM PDT
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OOC: go easy, by far my worst chapter.

CHATER SE7EN: AUTUMN

A massive, cylindrical object had crashed on Halo about a week ago; leaving a gargantuan ravine in its wake. The object, once referred as the human vessel, Pillar of Autumn ”, was now hanging its sizable bulk precariously off the side of a cliff. The derelict vessel had been abandoned by its former inhabitants, and now belonged to the Covenant.
The sun was already beginning to set as the Spirit ‘Zurree was riding began making its slow approach, creating a beautiful affect. The fading sun caused the desert plateau that the Autumn rested upon to glow bright orange, and the blackened craft itself to glow a bright metallic steel.
The Spirit slowly made its decent, until it was a few feet away from the wreckage, and was hidden in the fading shadow created by the towering Human craft. ‘Zurree exited, along with his two body guard, and the Spirit lifted up, and headed back for the Truth and Reconciliation, and once out of eyesight, ‘Zurree decided to take a look at his surroundings.
The sun’s light was blocked by the bulk of the ship, but ‘Zurree could tell that light was fading fast, and he knew that ‘Xamutee’s wound’s needed more attention or they could become infected. He turned to ‘Mijuree, worry stamped on his features.
“Brother, do you know your way through this derelict?”
He asked, scratching his neck.
‘Mijuree looked at the towering vessel resting before him, and then back to ‘Xamutee, who using him as a support beam of some sorts. Then he turned to ‘Zurree.
“Yes, Although it is no larger then The Truth and Reconciliation, it becomes quite easy to become lost in its halls; it is imperative, your Excellency, that you stay close to me while in this vessel.”
‘Zurree nodded to his subordinate, and ask the other Sangheili hobbled toward the vessel, he couldn’t help but wonder, “ What could be happening at The Truth and Reconciliation?.. Probably curious about the assault…Will they blame me?
He nearly tripped on a rock, but remained stable thanks to his digitrate feet.
What if they have meexecuted for ‘Putumee’s mistake?
His heart became heavier and heavier with every step he took at the thought of wrongful execution…He entered the Autumn through a gaping hole caused by the impact, the other two elites still rather far inside the sub-terranean craft.
It was rather cool inside of the human vessel, but dark, and very cramped, limiting mobilization. He had to weave his considerable bulk through small hallways, past smashed computer screens, and occasionally under doors and through maintenance halls, some of them even too dark for his eyes to see. But he continued following the pair of Sangheili, through derelict cafeterias, a large auditorium sized room labeled ‘Cryo-tubes’, and from there to a small armory. A flood light flickered on, causing ‘Zurree temporary blindness.

“Greetings brothers; I am Gomo ‘Wasulee. Welcome!”
A Stout Sangheili in steel armor stepped into the light, followed by a few others of a multitude of colors. ‘Wasulee noticed the injured ‘Xamutee, looking at him as if he saw him for the first time.
“We will take care of your injured for you, brother. Although we are short of medical supplies.”
There was disdain in his voice as he spoke, his eyes burning holes into the exhausted ‘Mijuree.
Disgusting! By our Holy Lords, why must we have to care for such vermin? We barely have supplies for ourselves let alone for them[/i].”
He thought, making swift and aggressive, but hardly noticeable mandible movements. Two green elites stepped forward from the shadows, and relinquished the now unconscious ‘Xamutee from ‘Mijuree. ‘Wasulee nodded to ‘Zurree, whose eyes still burned from the intense light.
“Ah, Excellency, welcome to the base. Shall I show you about?”
He asked humbly, grabbing the disoriented Field Master by the proffered hand, he guided him past the light, and into the actual armory itself.
A dim, flickering light was hanging above, but most of the room was shrouded in darkness. The inhabitants had brought some chairs in, and some communication equipment. But, they still hadn’t removed the human weapons, which lined the walls and lay on the floor.
“What the matter? Need more supplies? What your coordinates?...”
In the far right corner, behind a barrier was a rather annoyed Unggoy. He had hooked himself up to one of the numerous communications ‘boxes’ located in all four corners of the room.
“This, is our forward base….for now. Communications are relayed to areas all over the Holy Ring, even to The Truth and Reconciliation, although nothing from the [i]Truth and Reconciliation has come for over ten units..”
‘Wasulee said, talking as if it were a basic protocol to inform new comers of every little function of the ‘base’. ‘Zurree noticed the two empty shade turrets next to the blackened door they had just passed through, and couldn’t help but wonder…
Why is it that no new communications have arrived from The Truth and Reconciliation? What could be so important that would cause them to cease all communications?..
He had a bad feeling grow in his gut as he followed Gomo, the feeling growing into a rock hard lump…What could have gone wrong?

Bodies. Mangled corpses. Ripe. Fresh. All delicious. Piled so high, you couldn’t see the floor. The halls of the Truth and Reconciliation were littered with them. Two Lekgolo slammed into the blackened purple walls, spraying orange blood onto the cadavers under them. Two perfectly round holes of about a three foot diameter in their midriffs.
Nothing can stop me!!
The massive Juggernaught cackled, decapitating a bold Sangheili that stood in his path. He had escaped, reeking havoc on the populace of the Covenant craft. A platoon of Jackals was marching down the bloodied halls, in a perfect phalanx, right for the behemoth that stood in their path. They all fired in unison, striking their target, searing his flesh, making his skin cry green, acidic blood.
The beast wailed, and was about to lash back when two smaller beasts leapt out from behind him, and fired upon the Kig-Yar, assimilating them with ease.
The two were at one point brothers, now transformed by the parasite; they obeyed and served their shambling master.
what have I told you my Brothers?! Behold, none can stand before us!
It roared, extending its tentacles up, it pulled the very ceiling down. Blue explosions followed as the Juggernaught leapt onto the next level, where fires were already beginning to start.
Welcome to hell!

  • 05.12.2007 1:48 PM PDT

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chillax? definantly a floodian.
-onyx spartan

Loooooove it kronos, this is awesome!!! Keep it up, i would die if you didn't!!!!!! Keep writin this!!! It is NOT crap!!!!!!!!

  • 05.13.2007 2:10 PM PDT
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Really?

  • 05.13.2007 5:33 PM PDT

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chillax? definantly a floodian.
-onyx spartan

how could it not?

  • 05.25.2007 6:57 PM PDT
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CHAPTER EIGHT: FATE


Flames erupted from loosened wall panels, blood sprayed the walls, as countless numbers of Covenant soldiers fell to the three parasite fodder that invaded with ease...The halls were empty, only death lingered. The Parasite had found their way on somehow. And they were already beginning to reproduce. Large blobs of flood excrement were beginning to gather, blocking entire hallways at times. All of the blobs, however, big or small served the same purpose; excreting Infection forms.
After about a unit, over one million Flood Infection forms had been spawned, and now they were running amok in the once glorified ship.
The effect was working to the three ‘Leading Flood’s’ advantage. Hundreds of Combat forms flooded the ghostly hallways of the Reconciliation, only to be pushed back by the Covenant security teams, who were quickly snuffed out by the over whelming forces of the Parasite in an almost repetitive manner…

The Control room at the heart of the Truth and Reconciliation had been barricaded off, the twenty Ultra Sangheili crewmen where preparing for a breaking into of the control room, and where in the process of barricading the room off from the rest of the ship.
The new ship commander, Finsea ‘Zandumee, was in a trance, staring at the ships controls as if in comatose. His black eyes widened as he read the many symbols franticly scramble across the screen; a list of all the damage the flood had done…
“By the Rings….”
‘Zandumee whispered, as he examined the overall status of the ship, the numbers fluctuating dramatically, being at twenty percent at one point and at fifty the next…the damage the Flood caused was immeasurable, the lower decks had been entirely taken over, while decks five through ten had been secured by the ragged security forces.
“Your Excellency, We need to leave, now.”
An Ultra said, as he and a few others hurriedly placed barriers in front of all the doors to the control room. ‘Zandumee was broken out of temporary stupor by the jarring sound of metal on metal coming from above him.
He quickly disabled the locks on the engine reactors, and fired up the engine, taking off as fast as he could make the Truth and Reconciliation.
With a loud clank, a vent cover fell just inches from ‘Zandumee’s face. He had just enough time to look up and see the hundreds of Infections forms fall onto his head…
Outside of the control room, the muffled screams of the doomed crew fell upon deaf ears…wild firing ensued…then silence.

The Truth and Reconciliation wasn’t even out of the atmosphere when the reactors failed, the mighty vessel reflected the light of the moon for just a brief moment, then slowly spiraled down, down into the dark, unknown depths of the canyon…

Dawn brought quite a surprise. The Truth’s emergency repulsion jets activated at the correct time before the imamate crash. The once great vessel was now wedged into a canyon, trapped. It’s been spared its destruction…for the moment. Its lower hulls had been punctured, once glorious hull tarnished, coolant spilling like blood from some wounded animal, the Truth and Reconciliation’s final resting place was only a few kilometers from its start.
What has occurred?
The massive being in the center of the control room grumbled, its massive tentacles vibrating as it took in information faster than the speed of light. The beast was much larger than the Juggernaut, much wider too, a bulbous, vile form that is truly the ugliest thing to see daylight; a Brain form.
something occurred….something occurred…
The little Infection forms chirped, skittering away, the Juggernaut and his guard approached, incidentally crushing all of the Infection forms that strayed too close to its awesome tentacles.
The vessel crashed, and soon, they will find out about it…
The Juggernaut whispered, even he was humbled by the presence of such intelligence.
…And with them, more nourishment shall come!
The two Hunter Forms added excitedly.
Tentacles shot out of the Brain form, latching onto the walls, even the beautifully inscribed support towers became covered in tentacles in a matter of minutes.
They will come..
The Brain form sighed, more tentacles combing out of its seemingly endless storage of flesh.
Soon, an entire complicated web of support tentacles had formed above their heads, all twitching, all red, and all dripping vile, vacuous fluids. And still more where coming, until finally it stopped, the last tentacle slammed into the ceiling.
And when they do, we will be prepared.

Not my favorite chater...at all.

  • 05.25.2007 7:55 PM PDT
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wow
i think i have read this somewhere else, bungie.org maybe,but this seems to be more up to date

  • 05.25.2007 9:55 PM PDT
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Yeah...I don't go on .org as much....
Posted by: The Arks Keeper
wow

I'm going to assume that 'wow' means it sucks...

  • 05.29.2007 7:05 PM PDT

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chillax? definantly a floodian.
-onyx spartan

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Yeah...I don't go on .org as much....
Posted by: The Arks Keeper
wow

I'm going to assume that 'wow' means it sucks...


What? How on earth could it possibly suck???!!!!???????!!!!! It is AMAZING! ( should have bolded, and underlined ) In fact, i wish i was such a devilishly good looking writer like you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 06.01.2007 5:22 PM PDT
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Wow, so far i have read your entire little book, and i loves it!!!
IF you have a gamertg for Xbox live, wanna be friends? or on this, i don't care :p

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  • 06.01.2007 8:17 PM PDT
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Thank you guys...And My gamertag is OrdinaryKronos...

  • 06.02.2007 9:58 AM PDT

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