- Deno458
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"Do you think it's because we're awesome? I think it's because we're awesome."
"Man, you're camping my only spawn point? Who made this "Infection" gametype? I'm like a fricken ant someone threw into a spider farm! Except one of the spiders has a tank!"
Posted by: Bungie Jumping
Posted by: Deno458
#1: i have very few mistakes with my grammar, try pointing five out.
and #2: you quote three different things that different people have said, in one response. then we'll talk. how the hell would you know what my clan is like? tell me, have you ever actually played against them? btw, mediocre
For #1, I will point out five grammar errors. There are obviously more, but for the sake of time, five is all I will do.
I. In your PM to me: why do you think your so smart?
--The "why" needs to be capitalized. The "your" needs to be "you're," as you are not describing ownership, but rather using a contraction between "you" and "are." I will count that as only one ;-)
II. In your first post: "hey, my clan is recruiting for halo pc, i believe we have 4 positions left for the main team. i do lead the Rogues, although the name will probably be changed, we still have to fix the site up, and also make a clan video, but we need people for it."
--Comma splices galore.
III. In your first post of this thread, you spelt miscellaneous wrong (Mr. Miscelaneous).
IV. In your second post: "lol, nice man, except, i already told you, we can play halo pc really quick to see if you want to join, i also said that we are currently making many of those things, but for that you would need members." -- another comma splice.
V. In your third post: "i HIGHLY doubt that dude. youve never played against the actual Ace, or weaslex. your way too full of yourself man. i doubt youve ever gone against someone that i would give a 6/10." -- You need to put an apostrophe between "you" and "ve," as it is a contraction of the words you and have. Also, though I won't count it towards one of your five, you put the incorrect form of "you're" in (your-->you're).
Come on man, that was only the first few posts. Give me a break...
As for #2: I can do you one better: quoting four. Also, if you read my post, you will notice that I said your clan sounds like a major POS. I never said it was. No, I have not played against them. Do you have a server that will allow me to? With the thousands of Halo players, it's unlikely that I will be able to, or try to, find your clan-mates. And yes, you found my intentionally incorrect spelling of mediocre. Congratulations.
BTW: capitalization is a part of grammar. If I were to count all of your capitalizaiton errors, the number would probably be well over 100.
Cheers.
thats right, sorry for the PM, too, man. as a comprimise, i will try to work on my grammar. no offense, but i don't get it. would you say these forums were formal? once again, no offense meant. also, not to be noobish but i have only been on here for about five days. so anyway, we have a friends list?
[Edited on 04.30.2007 1:47 PM PDT]