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I was talking on zanzibar and after a while I looked outside to see the sunset. At first I didn't care but then I focused, I ssaw it's beauty, it's perfect mix of blue, orange, white and red. I saw the rays of sunshine creasing over the clouds, as if it were scars. It is incredibly beautiful. Then I looked at the people I hated, posting complaints about the pistol and other stuff. And right now I'm thinking, why did man build things? Anything.. it just seems so hopeless and vain. As if we weren't satsfied with this unmeasurable beauty. How evil things are, we have rappers discrasing women by making them look like sluts. We have murderers, terrorists, theives. Why? Is it to escape this corrupted society doomed to fail at it's purpose? I see we make things to fix a problem another thing we made cuased to the earth only to find out it too is haserdous. Everything we make is a link to a chain. Everything we do is i vain, even when it's not for you. Like, buying a present for your friend, you may think highly of yourself, but it's truly to make them like you more.

I see the trees too. They supply us with the air we breathe, and we rpay them by using them for our houses and an outside toilet. How can we think that we are good poeple? The sunset is almost ending, It's massive beauty fading into darkness. I might add to this later, but I don't want to miss another second of this beautiful sunset. Post your thoughts, or don't. Maybe you could do something for someone, not in vain, with absolutely no thought of yourself, including feeling good because you did something good. Or, if you live in the same timezone, you can watch this sunset too, before it goes away.

  • 11.16.2004 1:53 PM PDT
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*sniff* ...beautiful.... *sniff*


I couldn't have put it better myself. Come to think of it, you should write philosophy books.

  • 11.16.2004 1:56 PM PDT
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thank you, In fact I am becoming a writer fantasy, sience fiction, and normal fiction. The sunset is almost gone, all I can see is a vast redness on the horrizen, but now I see more beatiful blue. It's now all a mix of sky blue and violet. but I may be able to see at most 36,500 more in my lifetime. But I should still cherish every moment about this.

[Edited on 11/16/2004 2:02:53 PM]

  • 11.16.2004 2:02 PM PDT
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nice yet another to admire on these forums of ours with the number of stupid increasing the bright ones pop out like a ketchup stain on a white shirt

  • 11.16.2004 2:07 PM PDT
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You should read some stuff by Henery David Thoreau. One of the best Philisophers ever, in my opinion. Of course, you probably already have.

Anyway, that was really good.

  • 11.16.2004 2:08 PM PDT
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Education too, all it is is making us fit in their world, why have education, it's like giving us spoilers to life's great mistery, but if we don't here them we get arrested. Learning is more fun if you do it on your own. You think I learned all this from highschool?

Oh, and animals are a perfect example of how we should live. I'm not saying we should be agressive to others, I'm talking about nature-wise. People tell you if it weren't for this technology, we woudn't be able to survive, when the truth is, if it weren't for that technology, we wouldn't need technology at all. Animals have no technolgy and still live. Animals may be the most vain creatures, but a least are one with nature.

the sunset is completly gone now. this part of the world is in darkness, which it deserves to be, for man discrases it.
We ruined the world wit polution, then try to fix it, but give up and end up added more polution with the solution (hehe, that rhymed). I'm done for now. I'll add later.

[Edited on 11/16/2004 2:13:28 PM]

  • 11.16.2004 2:11 PM PDT
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Posted by: Banshee Barron
As I see it, the sun is setting in more that one respect.


and as i see it, you've been reading too much JOHN GRISHAM!!!!!

way to plagiarize, man!

  • 11.16.2004 2:13 PM PDT

Posted by: triggerhapysyco
Posted by: Banshee Barron
As I see it, the sun is setting in more that one respect.


and as i see it, you've been reading too much JOHN GRISHAM!!!!!

way to plagiarize, man!


What?

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As man creates more polution, we scar the earth's ozone layer and cause global warming, when we realize it, a group of people try to fix it but poloticians won't let them. Because they are greedy and vain, They could easily save our future and the earths future, but choose not to, man are a deadly plague on the earth, ruining nature, while animals suffer.

Ok, I'm finished completley for today. I'm glad I got that out, thanks for listening to me preach. and thank you for the compliments.

  • 11.16.2004 2:19 PM PDT
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Posted by: Banshee Barron
Posted by: triggerhapysyco
Posted by: Banshee Barron
As I see it, the sun is setting in more that one respect.


and as i see it, you've been reading too much JOHN GRISHAM!!!!!

way to plagiarize, man!


What?


Yes, I know it's a commonly used phrase, but it was used in that exact respect by Mr. Grisham. Maby it is a coincidence, and you don't know what you're saying, or maby you really are smart.

Sorry to accuse you. I will now go back to my hole, before you kill me.

Viva la REVOLOUTION!!!

[Edited on 11/16/2004 2:34:17 PM]

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You just took a change in my life Liton. Thank you. Have a good life

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Posted by: Banshee Barron
I honestly didn’t know that the phrase had been used before.


Great Minds think alike;hehe eh.....

Please don't hurt me.

[Edited on 11/16/2004 3:35:08 PM]

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Finally, another decent writer. I compliment you on your beautiful prose.

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Posted by: Dave Ender
You just took a change in my life Liton. Thank you. Have a good life


Don't thank me, I was just expressing myself, I should thank you, I love to see people enjoy my writing, I hope you have a good life too.

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Posted by: DaedalusMJ12
Finally, another decent writer. I compliment you on your beautiful prose.

thank you, I hope I become a writer (my dream). I love getting compliments.

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that was a very good piece, but witha life like this, religion can make things not seem in vain and hopeless. only selfish peopel give others presents just so that person will like you more. if it is a true gift, than it will be purely to make that person happy.

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Ah, at last, I have wandered through the Desert of Spam for many a day, and at long last, I find myself at the Oasis of Sanity.

Great post. Keep up the good work.

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I'm going to write more tomorow, so please keep this up.

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Posted by: Liton
Posted by: Dave Ender
You just took a change in my life Liton. Thank you. Have a good life


Don't thank me, I was just expressing myself, I should thank you, I love to see people enjoy my writing, I hope you have a good life too.


Thank you

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Posted by: Banshee Barron
As I see it, the sun is setting in more that one respect.


I agree, we as a human race are slowly running ourselves into the ground. Liton, that bit about the animals was exquisite. It amazes me how we have come to view ourselves with regard to the world. We claim we are more civilized than the animals. Yet take a good look at them. We mimick many of the same behaviors. Plus we even fail in a few respects. Animals have a clear-cut pecking order. Each of them knows their place and performs their duties, yet our own governments are plagued by loop holes and other types of "holes" with a political agenda for them to gain power and prestige. They neglect their duties to those who have chosen them to lead. It saddens me to think where we as a race may eventually end up. I don't know if any of you have read The Time Machine by H.G. Wells but the year 802,000 as portrayed by Wells seems just a little too plausible in our current state.

And does anyone else besides me see the idiocy of creating so many nuclear weapons and other weapons of mass destruction as to be able to destroy the entire world at least a dozen times over? What is the point? To make sure that the other side is "deader" than we are? It astounds me how low the human race has sunk. What happened to the Renassaince? That wonderful time of discovery, of revival of the arts, and literature? If only there were some way to revive that period today. It just might help our current decline.

  • 11.16.2004 6:23 PM PDT

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