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Subject: MARINES (a Halo Fan- Fic)
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A story about what a group of helljumpers have to deal
with while the chief KICKS ASS!!!!!

  • 08.02.2007 7:59 AM PDT
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Chapter 1 Cyro station

A group of helljumpers sat around whatching T.V.
while drinking beer and talking. Suddenly they felt a large shake.
What the hell said Rick.
Shut it men grab your weapons and suit up an alert has broke out.said the squad leader.
the all grabbed their gear and went to where they heard gunshots.
eventually they rounded a corner to covenant borders slaughtering weapon less marines.
They moved in to the killing and fired
thier weapons thebullets pierced the grunts flesh and armor an elite reacted and charged towds jim
a sword drawn then one of the marines in the bachk grabed a plasma pistol charged it and hit the elite
in the back the helljumper's reaction was so fast the the Elite was dead before he hit the ground!

  • 08.02.2007 8:18 AM PDT
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Posted by: halo12NINE7
Chapter 1 Cyro station

A group of helljumpers sat around watching T.V.
while drinking beer and talking. Suddenly they felt a large shake.
"What the hell said." Rick.
"Shut it men, grab your weapons and suit up an alert has broke out."said the squad leader.
They all grabbed their gear and went to where they heard gunshots.
Eventually they rounded a corner to covenant borders slaughtering weapon less marines.
They moved in to the killing and fired
Their weapons bullets pierced the grunts flesh and armor an elite reacted and charged towards Jim
a sword drawn, then one of the marines in the back grabbed a plasma pistol, charged it and hit the elite
in the back. The helljumper's reaction was so fast the the Elite was dead before he hit the ground!

  • 08.02.2007 8:26 AM PDT

Greatest of all time

to short. No quotations. Why is it a line per sentence? No quotations. Capitilaziation. Grammar.

FIX IT NOW

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Posted by: nickyfour92
to short. No quotations. Why is it a line per sentence? No quotations. Capitilaziation. Grammar.

FIX IT NOW

look above your post

  • 08.02.2007 8:28 AM PDT

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There is still a lot missing and messed up.

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Sorry I'm new I don't care about grammer unless I'm in school really

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Posted by: nickyfour92
There is still a lot missing and messed up.

if your complaining so much just fix it your self

  • 08.02.2007 8:30 AM PDT
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Maybe I will in the mean time I will look at other crap

  • 08.02.2007 8:31 AM PDT

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Posted by: halo12NINE7
Chapter 1 Cyro station

A group of helljumpers sat around whatching T.V. While drinking beer and talking, suddenly they felt a large shake. "What the hell?" said Rick. "Shut it men grab your weapons and suit up an alert has broke out!" said the squad leader. They all grabbed their gear and went to where they heard gunshots.
Eventually, they rounded a corner to covenant borders slaughtering unarmed marines. They moved in to the battle and opened fire.
Their weapons thebullets pierced the grunts flesh and armor an elite reacted and charged towds jim
a sword drawn then one of the marines in the bachk grabed a plasma pistol charged it and hit the elite
in the back the helljumper's reaction was so fast the the Elite was dead before he hit the ground!


i gtg so i only fixed half of it

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Chapter 1 Cyro station

A group of helljumpers sat around whatching T.V. While drinking beer and talking, suddenly they felt a large shake. "What the hell?" said Rick. "Shut it men grab your weapons and suit up an alert has broke out!" said the squad leader. They all grabbed their gear and went to where they heard gunshots. Eventually, they rounded a corner to covenant borders slaughtering unarmed marines. They moved in to the battle and opened fire. Their weapon's bullets pierced the grunts flesh and armor. An elite reacted and charged towards Jim with a sword drawn, then one of the marines in the back grabbed a plasma pistol, charged it and hit the elite in the back. The helljumper's reaction was so fast the the Elite was dead before he hit the ground!




[Edited on 08.02.2007 8:39 AM PDT]

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thanks I guess I have a bad typ so I hooked up a new one it's better

  • 08.02.2007 8:38 AM PDT
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that story sounds kick ass it sounds really cool nice one

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Chapter 2 banshes

The squad gathered ammo and headed into 2 pelicans and headed towards a covanent ship along with a bunch of other pelicans suddenly the covenant ship launched banshes from every side. The squad leader yelled EVASOVE ACTION the 2 pelicans responded and evaded the plasma bullets heading for them then the pilot of one of the banshes saw his oppertunity and shot. the bullet pierced the glass and blasted threw the squad leader blood flew to the ground the two members of their unit gasped the pilot hurried back to the fleet and and asked a vessel for permison to land acces granted said Miranda Keyes on the small panel above their heads. The pelican flew in the remaing pelicans fell back to their ships then a small figure leaped from Cyro station what is that said Gus as he wached in aw. Moments later the ship exploded. 5 mins. The 6 remaining helljumpers went with the Master Chief to Earth then they sit sight at a large spider like weopen it fired a Blue Beam and hit the their pelican Everything went black.

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let me now if you like chapter 2

  • 08.02.2007 9:09 AM PDT
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Thanks elite you are the only fully positive person who has replied

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chapter 3- More Blood

The time the men finally regained consousness they reported the where fine but ther pilots where dead suddenly they here whempers suddenly an a invisible glob jumps from nowhere. Fire said sarge the glob was hit and reaveled a covenant Eliet . the creature quickly grabed Ben one of the squad members Rick grabbed a plasma pistol and charged it.
Just kill it .said Ben Rick fired a shot hitting the Eliet in the face he was blinded. the sargent saw his oppertunity and shot the Eliot in the Head. Ben dropped to the grownd gasping for air.
Your fine c'mon.said Rick. About an hour later they set there eyes on something horrible a nother halo. seconds later they where sent herling towards the ground Master Chif with them. suddenly plasma bolts shot at the sky . When they landed Rick told Chief that the need to take out the turrents. The chif agreed and fired his rockets. Locking on to the turrents and pulling the metal triggar. Jackals came rushing across the path Kyle fired behind his pod suddenly a small purple beam hit threw his hillmet Kyle lay did between Ricks feet. A beam shot is fired the scream of Carl dose not last long. then out of the corner of his eye Rick sees a Jackal with a beam rifel he quickle aims and fires amd hit the jackal. then an Eliet jumps onto Mitch.The Eliot fires his Plasma rifel blood pours from Mitche's chest he screams with pain. then Ben runs at the Eliot and fires an entire round at the Eliot. Then grunts rush at Ben and Mitch. Ben is hit in the arm. and kills a grunt. Bullets fire piercing the grunts weak armor. blood splatters on the ground. Then a wounded grunt throws a plasme grenaded that is the last thing that Ben sees. Rick rushes to the seen before the explosion. he leans over Mitch and takes his helmet of. MItch is dead. The battel field grows silent.

  • 08.26.2007 7:32 AM PDT
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Sorry for all the spelling errors

  • 08.26.2007 7:34 AM PDT