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I suppose I'll write part three, if there are no objections.

  • 12.04.2004 2:45 PM PDT
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Posted by: Banshee Barron
I liken New Mombasa to a metal institute. Complete with psychopaths, erotic screaming, and a constant, ominous moaning and complaining. Quite like hell, actually.


Metal eh?!

  • 12.04.2004 2:58 PM PDT
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Posted by: MCs Brother
No he's fine. I just needed a bad guy. And Shishka just screams mob boss, don't he?


Shishka screams "Postal Worker", if anything.

  • 12.04.2004 2:59 PM PDT

Posted by: JAY132
Posted by: Banshee Barron
I liken New Mombasa to a metal institute. Complete with psychopaths, erotic screaming, and a constant, ominous moaning and complaining. Quite like hell, actually.


Metal eh?!


Bah! I have no idea what you're talking about.

;-)

  • 12.04.2004 3:18 PM PDT
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Posted by: ObbiQuiet
Posted by: MCs Brother
No he's fine. I just needed a bad guy. And Shishka just screams mob boss, don't he?


Shishka screams "Postal Worker", if anything.

Just another examptle of Obbi Toeing (sp?) the line.

  • 12.04.2004 3:23 PM PDT

Devil is Double is Deuce and Joker always trumps Deuce.

Posted by: Lt Devon
I suppose I'll write part three, if there are no objections.


Hold of til nest week. I like the suspense. Just PM your part to me and if it fits, i'll give you credit for it and include in next week's story. P.S. I'm gonna add un gato's part into the main post. He and I are the co-authors of B-NET from here on out.

  • 12.04.2004 3:29 PM PDT

Me: "OMFG, Dude... wtf!"
AbolitionofMan: "I'm sorry, I didn't mean to betray you."
Me: "That's the 4th time in this game alone!"
Chris: "Third, besides he had the flag I was trying to stop him, how was I supposed to know you were there."
Me: "I said, 'I got the Flag, don't shoot.'"
Chris: "Well those Wraith shots take a while to reach you."
Me: "You were right next to me, I had killed him and a minute passed before you decided to shoot."
Chris: "Hahahahaha, yeah... that was great."

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Posted by: Banshee Barron
I liken New Mombasa to a metal institute. Complete with psychopaths, erotic screaming, and a constant, ominous moaning and complaining. Quite like hell, actually.


Exactly... case in point Barron, here's where you heard those sounds...

Posted by: Obbi Quiet
The van rocked on during that magical night; one that Obbi and Maka would never forget.



My mind has been severely scarred.


Then my work here is done...

Achilles

  • 12.04.2004 3:49 PM PDT
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please put me in the next one...

  • 12.04.2004 4:11 PM PDT
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That is awesome.

  • 12.04.2004 4:15 PM PDT

yoo•zel- ('yoo-zhul): slang: vb.

Officium quod Fidelitas.

Pretty cool, but one too many simple sentences in the opening. It would probably flow a little better if some were combined.

  • 12.04.2004 4:52 PM PDT

We’ve watched while the stars burned
Out, and creation played in reverse.
The Universe freezing in half-light.
Once I thought to escape.
To end a master, step out of the
Path of collapse. Escape would make us God.
Yet I cannot help but remember one enigma,
A hybrid, elusive destroyer.
This is the one mystery I have not solved.
The only element unaccounted for.

Posted by: Lt Devon
I suppose I'll write part three, if there are no objections.

Sure. Everyone who wants to can write a piece, and then MC's brother (and apparently I) can pass judgement on it.

[Edited on 12/4/2004 5:15:25 PM]

  • 12.04.2004 5:13 PM PDT

Devil is Double is Deuce and Joker always trumps Deuce.

Oh yeah! w00t! Mod compliment! Happy dance!

  • 12.04.2004 6:04 PM PDT

It was a cold day near the southern base in Blood Gulch. Cortana and I were relaxing over a game of Go Fish, WHEN OUT OF NO WHERE 700 BANSHEES CAME FLYING IN!!! I GRABED MY SPARTAN LASER AND LET HELL REIGN DOWN UPON THEM. I HOPPED IN THE NEAREST WARTHOG AND TOLD CORTANA TO GET IN.

Awesome job!

  • 12.04.2004 6:11 PM PDT
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Posted by: Yoozel
Pretty cool, but one too many simple sentences in the opening. It would probably flow a little better if some were combined.


I think it's supposed to give the feel of the spoken word of the times. I've heard one of these kinds of radio shows a while back, and they had a lot of simple sentences.

  • 12.04.2004 7:06 PM PDT

We’ve watched while the stars burned
Out, and creation played in reverse.
The Universe freezing in half-light.
Once I thought to escape.
To end a master, step out of the
Path of collapse. Escape would make us God.
Yet I cannot help but remember one enigma,
A hybrid, elusive destroyer.
This is the one mystery I have not solved.
The only element unaccounted for.

Posted by: Tanikaze
Posted by: Yoozel
Pretty cool, but one too many simple sentences in the opening. It would probably flow a little better if some were combined.


I think it's supposed to give the feel of the spoken word of the times. I've heard one of these kinds of radio shows a while back, and they had a lot of simple sentences.

Entirely correct, as usual. It wouldn't fit the mood if they talked in a Shakespearian style or something like that.

  • 12.05.2004 12:20 AM PDT

Devil is Double is Deuce and Joker always trumps Deuce.

Posted by: un gato
Posted by: Tanikaze
Posted by: Yoozel
Pretty cool, but one too many simple sentences in the opening. It would probably flow a little better if some were combined.


I think it's supposed to give the feel of the spoken word of the times. I've heard one of these kinds of radio shows a while back, and they had a lot of simple sentences.

Entirely correct, as usual. It wouldn't fit the mood if they talked in a Shakespearian style or something like that.


Yeah. If you listen to the original radio show, that's almost exactly what it sounds like.

  • 12.05.2004 6:53 AM PDT
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Posted by: Mulletman262
please put me in the next one...


Why? No one knows who you are. We might as well say, "random person #3."

  • 12.05.2004 8:10 AM PDT

Devil is Double is Deuce and Joker always trumps Deuce.

Posted by: ObbiQuiet
Posted by: Mulletman262
please put me in the next one...


Why? No one knows who you are. We might as well say, "random person #3."


Meh. Whatever. I don't wanna get picky, but I kinda have to know what the hell you're like to be able to put you in a story. So like Obbi said, you're now "random person #3".

  • 12.05.2004 10:48 AM PDT
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Posted by: MCs Brother
you're now "random person #3".


Yeah, "random person #3" sure sounds in-period. [/sarcasm]

  • 12.05.2004 11:09 AM PDT

Devil is Double is Deuce and Joker always trumps Deuce.

I'll make him "random mafia thug #3".

  • 12.05.2004 11:11 AM PDT
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You could make some great joke about me.
"We must go get Halifax!"
"wait, isn't that a city?"
"Of course not, who on earth has heard of Halifax being a city?"
"Well you just said we need to go get it..or him."
"Yes Halifax. The guy."
"oh....does he live in Halifax?"
"NO HE DOES NOT LIVE IN HALIFAX! What is freaking wrong with you? Its like you are stinking obsessed with Halifax."
"well, you are the one that wants to go get him so bad."
"GAHHH!"

Sorry, I'm a little lazy to put in names so you can sort it out yourself

  • 12.05.2004 12:24 PM PDT

yoo•zel- ('yoo-zhul): slang: vb.

Officium quod Fidelitas.

I did believe it was going for the 'detective style' from old radios, but it was just an opinion.

  • 12.05.2004 12:52 PM PDT
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Posted by: MCs Brother
I'll make him "random mafia thug #3".


Now you're thinking!

  • 12.05.2004 12:54 PM PDT
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Hmm...I thought Halifax was a band.

  • 12.05.2004 2:10 PM PDT

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