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Subject: B-Net Herecy: Part 2

We’ve watched while the stars burned
Out, and creation played in reverse.
The Universe freezing in half-light.
Once I thought to escape.
To end a master, step out of the
Path of collapse. Escape would make us God.
Yet I cannot help but remember one enigma,
A hybrid, elusive destroyer.
This is the one mystery I have not solved.
The only element unaccounted for.

Well, as most of you know, MC's brother got himself banned, leaving this week's intallment up to me. I was a bit rushed, so my apologies if it isn't quite up to the last few. Also, I didn't have MC's list of people (that's my fault though; I didn't remember until after I started), so the people who had asked to get in aren't here.

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“You can help me get to Shiska.” It wasn’t a question.
“There was a reason why I was so good before I retired. It’s always good to have, hm, connections?” Recon was grinning at my surprise. “Come with me; there’s someone you need to meet.”
“Can I bring along VII Toast, Casey, and Tanikaze? Traveling without a partner with Shiska on the loose is not a good idea. Did you hear that he got Halifax and the rookie with him?”
“Halifax? Hm, I’m not surprised. He always rushed things when I was around. Call in your deputies; we can talk on the way.”
After I whistled for Toast and the others to come out of the stickies, Recon started leading us down the forum. Turning a corner, he started to speak.
“The mods are powerful around here, certainly. But they aren’t the only ones with power. There are others, and I happen to know a few of them.”
“However powerful they are won’t help me; if they could have gotten rid of Shishka alone, they would have done so by now.”
“Oh, they know how to get rid of him. They just need a little help, from someone who’s not afraid to take a few risks. I believe you may be that person.”
Recon paused and turned to face a link. He opened it and went inside. I followed him, and my deputies followed me.

It was a small group; there was only four other people in there; Stosh, MakaVeli4Life, Blondbeard, and someone seated in a chair facing away from me. Recon went over to the chair and said “He’s here.” The chair turned around, and I could have sworn I heard thunder in the background. It was Achronos.
“I believe you know who I am, detective. And I believe we may be able to help each other.”
“What use could I be to you?”
“We both have the same goal here; stop Shishka. And we each have talents that the other lacks. I’ll go first: I can bring you back if Shiska bans you.”
“And me?”
“You're good at keeping quiet and getting close to people. That's something that the rest of the mods here can't do. I've already had to bring Yoozel back three times. All that I'll require of you is that you follow my orders.”
What else could I say? “I’m in. So, how would you like me to start?”

[Edited on 12/10/2004 5:55:47 PM]

  • 12.10.2004 5:53 PM PDT
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Not bad. :)

  • 12.10.2004 6:59 PM PDT
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Whoo Hoo!

You get a star.
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  • 12.10.2004 7:51 PM PDT
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Well done, Bravo!

Just a tip, not that i ould do better myself, that one seemed like more of a departure from the radio show, try to incorporate more inward thought and less dialogue. Much of what you've written in dialogue could have been in thought, and the more inword thought, the more it feels like Dragnet.

EDIT: MC's Brother's ban has been extended to 22 days, looks like your doing 2 more weeks of it if you want to keep it weekly. Ill help out with editing if you need it.

[Edited on 12/10/2004 8:04:51 PM]

  • 12.10.2004 7:58 PM PDT
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lol that wuz soooooooooooo good lol!!111

  • 12.10.2004 8:00 PM PDT
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MCs Brother told me to post this.


Posted by: MCs Brother
Nice job un gato. I'll try to keep giving you ideas for the next couple weeks. It's lonely here in blacklist land.

  • 12.10.2004 8:33 PM PDT
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Ten gold stars for putting me in the story.
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But, this is a cool li'l story series you and MC's Brother have going on. Hopefully Shishka will take it as humor and not unleash the wrath of ninjas on us all...

Oh! You should have a chase scene on the Information Superhighway!

  • 12.10.2004 11:01 PM PDT
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Nice. I should set some people on fire or something, that'd be awesome.

  • 12.10.2004 11:07 PM PDT
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Nice story, but there's one thing missing: the drunken antics of a certain French Canadian robot named Ruze.

[Edited on 12/10/2004 11:08:32 PM]

  • 12.10.2004 11:08 PM PDT

yoo•zel- ('yoo-zhul): slang: vb.

Officium quod Fidelitas.

Nice. Can't wait to read them all. Maybe if you get the entire collection together in one thread, then I will sticky them.

  • 12.11.2004 5:05 AM PDT
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If this gets me banned I will be pissed a lot. I think that Stosh should substitute for Shishka in it.

  • 12.11.2004 5:26 AM PDT
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Beware the forum ninjas you don't know there there untill its to aaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrggggggggggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!

  • 12.11.2004 5:34 AM PDT
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Posted by: zekeisthemc
If this gets me banned I will be pissed a lot. I think that Stosh should substitute for Shishka in it.


Hmmm....somewhat.

  • 12.11.2004 6:17 AM PDT

yoo•zel- ('yoo-zhul): slang: vb.

Officium quod Fidelitas.

Stosh shows a human side from time to time...

  • 12.11.2004 9:31 AM PDT
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And that 'human' side tends to send other humans running.

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And that 'human' side tends to send other humans running.


It hurts...

It hurts so bad.

  • 12.11.2004 9:56 AM PDT
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Posted by: Yoozel
Nice. Can't wait to read them all. Maybe if you get the entire collection together in one thread, then I will sticky them.


MCs Bro did a " *happy tap dance* " when he read that.

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hmm. I have never been a villain before...or at least, a villains henchman. Interesting.

Good story by the way.

  • 12.11.2004 11:19 AM PDT
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Posted by: Halifax
hmm. I have never been a villain before...or at least, a villains henchman. Interesting.

Good story by the way.


It's cool, you get a uniform and a gun and stuff.

  • 12.11.2004 11:21 AM PDT

Ach! Was ist los?

Why did MC's Brother get banned?

And can I be in this?

--Sgt. Smith has been known to write forum stories before. He might do another, if he can find the time.

  • 12.11.2004 12:53 PM PDT
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MC's Brother got blacklisted for the FIPA/NMST thing, I think.

  • 12.11.2004 1:23 PM PDT
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Cool story, wheres part 1?

[Edited on 12/11/2004 1:44:59 PM]

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It sunk into the abyss. It was shut down, so there's no way to bump it back up. I'd predict it's on page 5 or so...

[Edited on 12/11/2004 5:42:50 PM]

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It was a cold day near the southern base in Blood Gulch. Cortana and I were relaxing over a game of Go Fish, WHEN OUT OF NO WHERE 700 BANSHEES CAME FLYING IN!!! I GRABED MY SPARTAN LASER AND LET HELL REIGN DOWN UPON THEM. I HOPPED IN THE NEAREST WARTHOG AND TOLD CORTANA TO GET IN.

*sigh*

I guess I'll have to wait untill next week... try to remember to throw me in that one please.

Great job! Nice story.

  • 12.11.2004 5:56 PM PDT

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