- prometheus25
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Old school Bungie, born and raised,
In the Septagon is where I spend most of my days.
Relaxin', maxin', posting all cool,
Talking about Halo, life and some school.
Got in one little argument, and the mods got scared,
they said "You're gonna get banned and your member title'll be bare!"
Camera is way too jerky. You don't want the audience to have to constantly readjust where they have their focus centered. Also, too long of pauses between some important part and a mood-breaking shenanigan. For instance, the ancors were killed, their assailants entered the scene, and nothing was said for about three to four seconds. While this may not seem like much, when you are following the story in a linear fashion, flashing naked pictures would have distracted the viewers and taken away the focus no more or no less.
Overall, it was good, but not great. Some good ideas, but the camera smoothness and continuity needed working.
[Edited on 11.25.2007 6:17 PM PST]