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I was not able to find the old one made by Excommunicado so here is a new one.

This poem I made for a assignment in English class, we had to choose from a list of headlines. The one I choosed was "Possessed by His own Tattoo!" The tattoo in this poem is a Succubi, and is of the man speaking with the tattoo.

Demon!!!
All I have ever touched all I ever knew is dead.
Demon!!! You did this,
You demon, you damn fiend grafted to my skin and mind.
Like lambs to the slaughter you lead them.
I watched like a distant figure,
As my hands tore at their soft skin.
A seductress of the mind,
You led me unabashed.
Your words of heresy,
A venom of my mind and body.
My life before was empty,
But now it is full.
Full of sorrow, full of rage, full of hatred.
I feel your hands hold me,
They are not ones to save me,
They drag me deeper in.
Your image on my mind, and body,
Those hollow eyes reflect my own.
You led me here laughing,
You love my hatred, my desire.
I won’t be tormented, I won’t sell my soul!
You see them lying there, you see the room.
A drenched room, viscous with hell’s torment.
I feel myself drowning,
I have drown in their blood.
You will drown in mine!

[Edited on 12/27/2004 10:34:58 AM]

  • 12.27.2004 10:28 AM PDT

Hail the SI. Keep It Clean

Vampire!!
At last your day is done,
For the last you teeth are done,
Your hunger for blood finished,
Your vengince for a Demon denied,
Your long last you death is sastified.
Vampire!!

Can't think of a good one.

  • 12.27.2004 10:32 AM PDT
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Its a special poem, I like it.

  • 12.27.2004 10:32 AM PDT