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Subject: more oblivious poetry from me
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life can be so -blam!- sometimes. Worse than just the regular "Lifes tough, get over it." why does our society revolve around other peoples failures? why do we enjoy putting others in pain? why do we like war? why do we take lives?

Optimism is bull-blam!-. it all comes to an end.
Wage wars on those who care less.
feed off the results.
force the followers.



GUESS WHOS BACK!?!?!? hehe sugar and radiohead AGAIN!

  • 01.01.2005 8:29 PM PDT
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While you make pretty speeches,
I'm being cut to shreds.
You feed me to the lions,
a delicate balance

When this just feels like spinning plates.
I'm living in cloud cuckoo land.
And this just feels like spinning plates
Our bodies floating down the muddy river.


EDIT: sorry if that seemed like a bump. it wasnt. And its a radiohead song, not my stuff.

[Edited on 1/1/2005 9:06:06 PM]

  • 01.01.2005 8:40 PM PDT
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fear leads to anger

anger leads to hate

hate leads to suffering

any guess were that from




[Edited on 1/1/2005 8:51:32 PM]

  • 01.01.2005 8:50 PM PDT

._____Metal
/..}-/-{..\
I.X....X.I..... Jets: Check
.T_V_T......Chargers: Check
...****........Colts: -blam!- them....

It's a long one, so sit back and don't hold your breath.

"How do we stand
on this barren land
are we hand-in-hand?
or are just damned.
Cause I'd hate
to release my fate
to a stupid fake
I thought was great.

I thought we were on the fast lane
thought we were on track for fame.
Was I insane?
you were alsways ready to wane.
Now you've left your stain--
a permenent mark of pain.
Can i try to claim
my life back from your chain?
Or will it end in vain
with me burning in the flame.

I tried to see the light
it was almost in sight
but with all your might
you knocked me back in smite.
Now all I see is night,
and to you that's right.

You've got all the nerve--
you curve and swerve,
while I try to conserve
and cut the final curve.

You used to be my dream,
lean, clean, and keen
but then you ripped through the seams
and acted like a beam.

Always found when I'd crack
never gave me any slack,
tied me in a black sack
and threw me into the back.

There i fell
just a cell
tried to yell
but deeper into hell
I fell.

Now i rust
in the dust
ready to bust
through the crust.
Now I must
break the lust
and findthe key
to be free.
What's the fee?
Wait and see."

Gimmi feedback if you like it, it took a long time (maybe 2 days?) to write.

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Know, I do.

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Devil is Double is Deuce and Joker always trumps Deuce.

Sometimes life gives you a lemon
Sometimes it gives you a mom
Whatever it gives
Pick up a shiv
And beat the -blam!- out of a bomb

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Posted by: amazedsatsuma
fear leads to anger

anger leads to hate

hate leads to suffering

any guess were that from



I know it was from a Star Wars movie but I know it was in FF9 as well.

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star wars ?-nvm beaten to it ,why do i never read the following threads?
Posted by: amazedsatsuma
fear leads to anger

anger leads to hate

hate leads to suffering

any guess were that from




[Edited on 1/1/2005 8:58:42 PM]

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Devil is Double is Deuce and Joker always trumps Deuce.

Posted by: gamingfreak200
star wars ?
Posted by: amazedsatsuma
fear leads to anger

anger leads to hate

hate leads to suffering

any guess were that from




Empire Strikes Back, actually.

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Posted by: amazedsatsuma
fear leads to anger

anger leads to hate

hate leads to suffering

any guess were that from



Posted by: KayJay
Know, I do.


talking to me were you,

if so were is it from, what movie

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Posted by: MCs Brother
Posted by: gamingfreak200
star wars ?
Posted by: amazedsatsuma
fear leads to anger

anger leads to hate

hate leads to suffering

any guess were that from




Empire Strikes Back, actually.


wrong move only four left

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Cronin's Law----The New Flood Drinking Game

You're all too depressing. Hell, I like that kind of thing too, but I like it when it's put to music and not written by me.

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That was Star Wars. I believe it was in Episode 1. That or Empire Strikes Back.

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That there
That's not me
I go
Where I please
I walk through walls
I float down the Liffey
I'm not here
This isn't happening
I'm not here
I'm not here

In a little while
I'll be gone
The moment's already passed
Yeah it's gone
And I'm not here
This isn't happening
I'm not here
I'm not here

Strobe lights and blown speakers
Fireworks and hurricanes
I'm not here
This isn't happening
I'm not here
I'm not here



those are the lyrics of one of the most beutiful song ever. Its called "How to Dissapear Completely" by Radiohead. now if youll excuse me, im gunna write another one of my own.

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Posted by: Texas Ben
You're all too depressing. Hell, I like that kind of thing too, but I like it when it's put to music and not written by me.


im hopin to make a song out of my stuff, but for now, its poetry.

  • 01.01.2005 9:05 PM PDT

Devil is Double is Deuce and Joker always trumps Deuce.

Posted by: MCs Brother
Sometimes life gives you a lemon
Sometimes it gives you a mom
Whatever it gives
Pick up a shiv
And beat the -blam!- out of a bomb


I still think this is the best poem here.^^^^^^^

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Posted by: Tanikaze
That was Star Wars. I believe it was in Episode 1. That or Empire Strikes Back.


Episode 1 it was right you should get a cookie, but it look already died, so ill eat it instead

[Edited on 1/1/2005 9:10:41 PM]

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Posted by: MCs Brother
Posted by: MCs Brother
Sometimes life gives you a lemon
Sometimes it gives you a mom
Whatever it gives
Pick up a shiv
And beat the -blam!- out of a bomb


I still think this is the best poem here.^^^^^^^


yesterday i woke up sucking a lemon.

  • 01.01.2005 9:06 PM PDT

Devil is Double is Deuce and Joker always trumps Deuce.

Posted by: amazedsatsuma
Posted by: Tanikaze
That was Star Wars. I believe it was in Episode 1. That or Empire Strikes Back.


Episode 1 it was you should get a cookie, but it look like you already, so ill eat it instead


Dude, I know my Star Wars and that was not from one of the prequels. It's either Empire Strikes Back or Return of the Jedi.

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Posted by: MCs Brother
Posted by: MCs Brother
Sometimes life gives you a lemon
Sometimes it gives you a mom
Whatever it gives
Pick up a shiv
And beat the -blam!- out of a bomb


I still think this is the best poem here.^^^^^^^


i dunno no i seen trash better then that but you agree the author sucks, right

  • 01.01.2005 9:07 PM PDT

Devil is Double is Deuce and Joker always trumps Deuce.

Posted by: RandomlyIssued
Posted by: MCs Brother
Posted by: MCs Brother
Sometimes life gives you a lemon
Sometimes it gives you a mom
Whatever it gives
Pick up a shiv
And beat the -blam!- out of a bomb


I still think this is the best poem here.^^^^^^^


yesterday i woke up sucking a lemon.


Have you read Xeroh's motto? Heh. It talks about sucking lemons. It's really funny.

  • 01.01.2005 9:08 PM PDT

Devil is Double is Deuce and Joker always trumps Deuce.

Posted by: amazedsatsuma
Posted by: MCs Brother
Posted by: MCs Brother
Sometimes life gives you a lemon
Sometimes it gives you a mom
Whatever it gives
Pick up a shiv
And beat the -blam!- out of a bomb


I still think this is the best poem here.^^^^^^^


i dunno no i seen trash better then that but you agree the author sucks, right


Oh yeah, of course. He's such a retard.

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Cronin's Law----The New Flood Drinking Game

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Posted by: Texas Ben
You're all too depressing. Hell, I like that kind of thing too, but I like it when it's put to music and not written by me.


im hopin to make a song out of my stuff, but for now, its poetry.

It would make a really good song. Retro-style... Pink Floyd or Led Zeppelin like... Or maybe just acoustic guitar. Hell, I don't know. It would make a really cool song!

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Posted by: MCs Brother
Posted by: amazedsatsuma
Posted by: Tanikaze
That was Star Wars. I believe it was in Episode 1. That or Empire Strikes Back.


Episode 1 it was you should get a cookie, but it look like you already, so ill eat it instead


Dude, I know my Star Wars and that was not from one of the prequels. It's either Empire Strikes Back or Return of the Jedi.

Yoda also says it in Episode 1 when Anakin is at the council. Man I sound like a nerd.

  • 01.01.2005 9:12 PM PDT

Devil is Double is Deuce and Joker always trumps Deuce.

Fear to my right
Death to my left
Moaning
Groaning
Gotta stop 'em
Make it back
To where I started
Chasing me thru
Marsh and tunnel
Man of science,
Man of violence
I will win
I will live
Glad I brought this crowbar ;)

See? You can make poetry from video games.

[Edited on 1/1/2005 9:15:09 PM]

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