- GothGuy
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- Exalted Mythic Member
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I.X....X.I..... Jets: Check
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...****........Colts: -blam!- them....
It's a long one, so sit back and don't hold your breath.
"How do we stand
on this barren land
are we hand-in-hand?
or are just damned.
Cause I'd hate
to release my fate
to a stupid fake
I thought was great.
I thought we were on the fast lane
thought we were on track for fame.
Was I insane?
you were alsways ready to wane.
Now you've left your stain--
a permenent mark of pain.
Can i try to claim
my life back from your chain?
Or will it end in vain
with me burning in the flame.
I tried to see the light
it was almost in sight
but with all your might
you knocked me back in smite.
Now all I see is night,
and to you that's right.
You've got all the nerve--
you curve and swerve,
while I try to conserve
and cut the final curve.
You used to be my dream,
lean, clean, and keen
but then you ripped through the seams
and acted like a beam.
Always found when I'd crack
never gave me any slack,
tied me in a black sack
and threw me into the back.
There i fell
just a cell
tried to yell
but deeper into hell
I fell.
Now i rust
in the dust
ready to bust
through the crust.
Now I must
break the lust
and findthe key
to be free.
What's the fee?
Wait and see."
Gimmi feedback if you like it, it took a long time (maybe 2 days?) to write.