- last post: 01.01.0001 12:00 AM PDT
Pretty much everything has been discussed here, but I'll give my say anyway.
There seems to be a bit of an identity crisis here. All the soldiers look exactly the same, you don't really get attached to any of them; there doesn't seem to be any real personality.
* The dude on the turret was clearly sniped by the Human Sniper, yet later, the Elite holding the rifle was holding a Beam Rifle
* What's the point of whispering "covering fire"? You're in a battlefield, deliver a sense of epic. If that made any sense :P
* Again, I'm having a lack of personal attachment to anyone here, and the voices just don't feel "right".
I don't really want to critique anymore than this, but great work nontheless =] It just lacks a bit of personal attachment, and suffers from a bit of an identity crisis.
Pretty good work =D
EDIT: I'm wasn't me. I'm tired now, so I won't hold back, and I'll be honest: It sucked. It was boring. Had to slog through it just to watch it. Try again, bud.
[Edited on 12.30.2007 7:16 AM PST]