- last post: 01.01.0001 12:00 AM PDT
Posted by: Mooman1014
Posted by: jbSPINE
blah blah blah, everyones a poet, everyone can play drums, everyone can sing, blah blah blah, you asked opinions I voted its horrible, cause it is, if your a creative person (which i see no proof of) do something with it other than stupid poetry, write a song (with music),
if you had some clue as to WHY i wrote this, then you'd probably think otherwise. i know i'm not very good. i just write this stuff when i'm mad and most people think its pretty good. and then there's -blam!-tards like you who don't even offer any sort of constructive critisism. that is an exact recount of my thoughts and feelings at the time i wrote it. i'm not even going to call it a poem. more like "other writing".
well go to a Better place!!! I somehow dont think I would think otherwise If i had a clue, you want some constructive critizim, STOP. Im betting you spend a lot of time mad dont you, and its all my fault right people just like me, who bash your retarded "other writing" grow up, stop blaming the world for your problems, find something better to do than write in you DIARY about how horrible the world is,
[Edited on 1/10/2005 6:14:42 PM]