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Poll: Is this good?  [closed]
That was awesome:  16%
(3 Votes)
that was pretty good:  16%
(3 Votes)
that was OK:  11%
(2 Votes)
it was kinda bad:  16%
(3 Votes)
horrible:  42%
(8 Votes)
Total Votes: 19

screw this. i'm just going to get a mod to lock this. seems like no one in here is reasonable anymore.

[Edited on 1/10/2005 8:16:16 PM]

  • 01.10.2005 5:40 PM PDT
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are you committing suicide? I think I have lost most of my sympathy for you if you are...I just get sick of telling people there is more to life...they never seem to listen to reason.

  • 01.10.2005 5:42 PM PDT

If I could describe it in one word, that word would be "Depressing".

I have a feeling that was what you were going for.

  • 01.10.2005 5:43 PM PDT
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Don't go on suicidal rampages because of xbox live!

By the way, nice poem.. Of course by nice I mean happy hoppy bunnies prancing in the sunny meadow nice.

It isn't even a poem, It's the epitome of attention whoreness

[Edited on 1/10/2005 7:30:20 PM]

  • 01.10.2005 5:43 PM PDT
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The United States of America-- STILL more rights than North Korea!
--New official U.S. motto.

Cronin's Law----The New Flood Drinking Game

That's when I really hate online forums... when they're full of whiny angst. I hate whiny angst! I'm whiny and angsty enough without listening to your whiny angst!

  • 01.10.2005 5:45 PM PDT
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ya depressing

  • 01.10.2005 5:45 PM PDT
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if i was seriously planning suicide, would i have tried to help with the Xeroh incident? i'm not a hypocrite. i just hate life. and no, i'm not a goth.

  • 01.10.2005 5:48 PM PDT
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Posted by: Mooman1014
if i was seriously planning suicide, would i have tried to help with the Xeroh incident? i'm not a hypocrite. i just hate life. and no, i'm not a goth.

Oh...well in that case, it was pretty good.

  • 01.10.2005 5:53 PM PDT
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blah blah blah, everyones a poet, everyone can play drums, everyone can sing, blah blah blah, you asked opinions I voted its horrible, cause it is, if your a creative person (which i see no proof of) do something with it other than stupid poetry, write a song (with music),

  • 01.10.2005 5:57 PM PDT
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Posted by: jbSPINE
blah blah blah, everyones a poet, everyone can play drums, everyone can sing, blah blah blah, you asked opinions I voted its horrible, cause it is, if your a creative person (which i see no proof of) do something with it other than stupid poetry, write a song (with music),

if you had some clue as to WHY i wrote this, then you'd probably think otherwise. i know i'm not very good. i just write this stuff when i'm mad and most people think its pretty good. and then there's -blam!-tards like you who don't even offer any sort of constructive critisism. that is an exact recount of my thoughts and feelings at the time i wrote it. i'm not even going to call it a poem. more like "other writing".

[Edited on 1/10/2005 6:05:23 PM]

  • 01.10.2005 6:03 PM PDT
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In one word: Abysmal.

That really was terrible. I often pretend to be critical and harsh in a joking manner, but this I can hardly believe. Out of all the poetry attempts I have ever read, this was, without a doubt, the worst.

  • 01.10.2005 6:04 PM PDT
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Posted by: ObbiQuiet
In one word: Abysmal.

That really was terrible. I often pretend to be critical and harsh in a joking manner, but this I can hardly believe. Out of all the poetry attempts I have ever read, this was, without a doubt, the worst.

again: not an attempt at poetry. just something to help me vent my anger. i'm not at a very "fun" stage in life right now.

  • 01.10.2005 6:06 PM PDT
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Posted by: Mooman1014
if you had some clue as to WHY i wrote this, then you'd probably think otherwise. .


Enlighten us. Your... "other writing"... showed that you have a lot of inner-angst. Care to reveal what it is that's made you so unhappy?

  • 01.10.2005 6:08 PM PDT
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Posted by: Mooman1014
Posted by: jbSPINE
blah blah blah, everyones a poet, everyone can play drums, everyone can sing, blah blah blah, you asked opinions I voted its horrible, cause it is, if your a creative person (which i see no proof of) do something with it other than stupid poetry, write a song (with music),

if you had some clue as to WHY i wrote this, then you'd probably think otherwise. i know i'm not very good. i just write this stuff when i'm mad and most people think its pretty good. and then there's -blam!-tards like you who don't even offer any sort of constructive critisism. that is an exact recount of my thoughts and feelings at the time i wrote it. i'm not even going to call it a poem. more like "other writing".


well go to a Better place!!! I somehow dont think I would think otherwise If i had a clue, you want some constructive critizim, STOP. Im betting you spend a lot of time mad dont you, and its all my fault right people just like me, who bash your retarded "other writing" grow up, stop blaming the world for your problems, find something better to do than write in you DIARY about how horrible the world is,

[Edited on 1/10/2005 6:14:42 PM]

  • 01.10.2005 6:13 PM PDT
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Posted by: ObbiQuiet
Posted by: Mooman1014
if you had some clue as to WHY i wrote this, then you'd probably think otherwise. .


Enlighten us. Your... "other writing"... showed that you have a lot of inner-angst. Care to reveal what it is that's made you so unhappy?

I believe he is trying to unload his problems through poetry. People rarely actually tell someone their problems.

  • 01.10.2005 6:13 PM PDT
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OMFG, im totaly sick of all tis -blam!- im going thru, i must end ma life rite here and rite now, theres no other solution... i have food water shelter money and everythign, bhut my case and life is much touffer then evertyones elses, i mnust vcommit fsiuicide!!111!11one

  • 01.10.2005 6:26 PM PDT
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Posted by: Stickman Army
OMFG, im totaly sick of all tis -blam!- im going thru, i must end ma life rite here and rite now, theres no other solution... i have food water shelter money and everythign, bhut my case and life is much touffer then evertyones elses, i mnust vcommit fsiuicide!!111!11one


ha ha ha, lmao. too funny, end it all!!!!!

  • 01.10.2005 6:33 PM PDT
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Posted by: Stickman Army
OMFG, im totaly sick of all tis -blam!- im going thru, i must end ma life rite here and rite now, theres no other solution... i have food water shelter money and everythign, bhut my case and life is much touffer then evertyones elses, i mnust vcommit fsiuicide!!111!11one


oh em gee itz liek u no me!!11!!1!1five!!!!!11

  • 01.10.2005 6:37 PM PDT
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I think it was pretty good, but I also think you have no real problems, and you are whining too much. But everyone goes through a stage where they're like that. I did too.......Then I turned 12, and got over myself. (No, I'm not 12 now.)

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dear GOD people. do you people listen to anything anyone tells you?

1) i'm NOT commiting suicide.
2) i'm "blaming" the world for my problems because the world IS most of the problem (there are a few other factors in there).
3) the main reason i write this is because of a lot of personal and family problems i have in the real world. i just don't normally express stuff like this. and its looking like i shouldn't anymore if people are going to be complete jackasses about it.
4) i do write this stuff down. i have several different "other writings" written down in a journal.

if you knew me well enough you would understand why i write this stuff.

  • 01.10.2005 6:40 PM PDT
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Posted by: Mooman1014
dear GOD people. do you people listen to anything anyone tells you?

1) i'm NOT commiting suicide.
2) i'm "blaming" the world for my problems because the world IS most of the problem (there are a few other factors in there).
3) the main reason i write this is because of a lot of personal and family problems i have in the real world. i just don't normally express stuff like this. and its looking like i shouldn't anymore if people are going to be complete jackasses about it.
4) i do write this stuff down. i have several different "other writings" written down in a journal.

if you knew me well enough you would understand why i write this stuff.


What's your worst problem?

Just tell us, no one cares.

WARNING: DO NOT CLICK

[Edited on 1/10/2005 6:54:26 PM]

  • 01.10.2005 6:42 PM PDT
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Posted by: Color Printer
I think it was pretty good, but I also think you have no real problems, and you are whining too much. But everyone goes through a stage where they're like that. I did too.......Then I turned 12, and got over myself. (No, I'm not 12 now.)

i'm 15.

i'm not going into any details. i'm just going to leave it at "a lot of personal and family problems". especially with all the jackasses in here.

[Edited on 1/10/2005 6:47:04 PM]

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Posted by: Color Printer
Posted by: Mooman1014
dear GOD people. do you people listen to anything anyone tells you?

1) i'm NOT commiting suicide.
2) i'm "blaming" the world for my problems because the world IS most of the problem (there are a few other factors in there).
3) the main reason i write this is because of a lot of personal and family problems i have in the real world. i just don't normally express stuff like this. and its looking like i shouldn't anymore if people are going to be complete jackasses about it.
4) i do write this stuff down. i have several different "other writings" written down in a journal.

if you knew me well enough you would understand why i write this stuff.


What's your worst problem?

Just tell us, no one cares.


his worst problem is, he asked for our opinion, stupid!

  • 01.10.2005 6:46 PM PDT
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Posted by: Mooman1014
dear GOD people. do you people listen to anything anyone tells you?

1) i'm NOT commiting suicide.
2) i'm "blaming" the world for my problems because the world IS most of the problem (there are a few other factors in there).
3) the main reason i write this is because of a lot of personal and family problems i have in the real world. i just don't normally express stuff like this. and its looking like i shouldn't anymore if people are going to be complete jackasses about it.
4) i do write this stuff down. i have several different "other writings" written down in a journal.

if you knew me well enough you would understand why i write this stuff.


Share it with us. What's the main thing that's bugging you? Or were the problems expressed in your poetry?

I really am curious.

  • 01.10.2005 6:49 PM PDT

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