- last post: 01.01.0001 12:00 AM PDT
So you wrote a poem about yourself being a miserable, anti-social dumbass, who has given up on their own life and is so envious they eventually, it seems, is going to comit suicide. Seriously, this isn't a poem, it's one huge crap-a-splat of self-criticism. Write something with a little spirit man.
...Unless you're gothic, then most of it makes sence, including how you've almost achieved scaring off two friends. Just to go along with this, I'd like to say that I think goths are arrogant.