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Subject: Short, Scary Stories!
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Posted by: manomanom1
What the hell he's been blacklisted.
what the hell is up with that?

  • 07.02.2008 5:38 AM PDT
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An old man who lived out in the country was short on food.So off he goes on a hunting trip with his three dogs.As he's walking he sees a fox-like creature,so he pulls out his old rifle and shoots its tail off.???So he decides to eat the tail.???He goes to sleep happy with his dinner but, just as he's falling asleep he hears scratching and somthing saying "tailypo I want my tailypo"????And the fox thing comes in through a hole in the wall.The old man grabs a knife and tells the demon to GET OUT YOU LITTLE -blam!-.The demon leaves and later the old man seals up the hole.Later that night he hears scratching and the words agian.He calls one of his dogs to go and attack it,he hears whines and then silence.And then something moving he smiles thinking of how his dog dealt with the demon,but.....he hears "tailypo give me MY TAILYPO!!!!"He craps his pants and calls one of his dogs to attack and the other to come inside.The first dog dies but the other dog gets in safely.Now he is scared so he tries to close his eyes and go to sleep.He feels movement on his bed ,he opens his eyes and sees blood,organs,and dog fur.He starts crying and the demon crawls toward him saying"tailypo,tailypo,tailypo,GIVE IT TO ME!!!!"Old man says "I dont have it please,please."the demon stares at the mans stomach bares its teeth and rips into the poor guys belly. To this day no one knows if the demon got its tail back.

  • 07.03.2008 9:12 PM PDT

Ok guys, this is my first attempt at a short scary novel. Please tell me how I did.

Bright red eyes
Four men went on a hike in the woods. They went deep in the woods, and one guy kept telling the others he keeps seeing red eyes in the distance. The others are thinking he's just trying to scare them. Hours past and the guy keeps telling them he's seeing red eyes, and again they think he's lying. As they set a tent later that night, the three guys were joking about the red eyes. When they were in their tent, they heard rustling outside, and were scared. They kept volunteering for each other to go outside. The rustling stopped, and bright red eyes stared at the men through the tent. Scared, the men finally believed their friend talking about the red eyes. They turned to him to say what they thought their final words would be, only to be stared at by bright red eyes.

  • 07.03.2008 9:46 PM PDT
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it isnt that smart to read these at 1:00 a.m. when all of the lights are off and i have to walk all the way across the house to get to my room

  • 07.03.2008 9:56 PM PDT
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Nearly 3 months and the thread is still alive. Congrats

  • 07.03.2008 10:05 PM PDT

Thanks : ).... Yes!! I'm un-blacklisted!

  • 07.04.2008 8:26 AM PDT
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the statue one and the hotel ones were the scariest, some of the other ones kinda didnt seem to get to me

  • 07.04.2008 9:58 AM PDT
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the end

  • 07.04.2008 10:45 AM PDT

Drifting away like a feather in air.....

Holy $#!+ these stories were creepy, specially The Watcher, and The Statue.

  • 07.04.2008 2:36 PM PDT
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Posted by: GOWSam
What dya think of my story on the last page <--- thought of it on the spot lol.
What? No you didn't...the one about the dead dog and hand-licker? People have been telling that one for years...

  • 07.04.2008 2:57 PM PDT

"Die? Didn't you know? Spartans never die.."

Posted by: doctor woot
I seriously think that women were put on earth for the sole purpose of screwing over the balance of everything and giving logic the finger.


-owndizzld

Posted by: Truth of TX
2nd one FTS.
I got a real scary short story!

Here it goes. "Hilary Clinton in a two-peice Bikini" Duh-du-dun!!!


AHHHHHHHHHH!!!

  • 07.04.2008 3:03 PM PDT

ya, I've heard it before too.

  • 07.04.2008 3:06 PM PDT
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hahaha,

but did that really happen?

  • 07.04.2008 3:18 PM PDT

Opinions on my story!
It's on this page!

  • 07.04.2008 5:51 PM PDT

Posted by: YoungFastSnip3r
The Cemetery Mimic
There's a defiled cemetery in the outskirts of Ciudad Juarez, Mexico, the city I was born in. People who can't afford to pay funerary services often bury their loved ones here. In Mexico, there's no such thing as medical aid for low income workers. People that come from out of town are not used to the ever changing weather and as consequence, many children die in the winter and end up buried in the old, defiled cemetery.



When I was about ten years old, four older friends and I decided to check it out. We walked for hours and when we finally arrived, it was almost dark. We started walking around and nothing seemed out of place. The air was getting very heavy and we heard a strange noise from an old, rotted tree. As we got near it, the tree started shaking. We all got really scared and ran. Later on, we found out that it was one of our friends playing a prank on us.



We were laughing when suddenly the old grave keeper showed up. He said "Boys, I know you are all just here to have fun and fool around, but please understand that horrible things happen here! I live in that house over there (about 100 feet from the cemetery), and every night that those high school punks come and drink and make their mess, weird things begin to happen. Last time there were loud voices and someone was knocking on my door at 2:00 am. I thought it was those punks, but no one was there. I am very tired and I really would like to sleep tonight, so if you have no business here, please leave." We felt bad for the poor old guy and left.



We never returned to that place until I was seventeen. I was with my high school punk friends in a truck, and we were looking for the old cemetery. After ten years, the place had really changed and we were having trouble finding the cemetery. The trail was wet and muddy and there were so many of us that the truck got stuck in the mud. When we got out of the truck, we soon found out that we were inside the cemetery.



My friend left the truck in neutral so we could push it, when suddenly the truck began moving by itself. After we saw that, we were so scared that we just got in the truck and drove off. When we finally decided to stop, we noticed that the truck was marked with tiny foot and hand prints all over. Then the grave keeper showed up and said "I remember you, you don't understand what is going on, do you?" The spirits will chase you for a long time."



I really didn't pay much attention to what he said until I later learned that there hadn't been any grave keeper there for years. I got really freaked out when my friends started telling me that I looked different. The said they would run into me and I would have a disturbing, "evil" look in my eyes. The weird part is that I was never even at the place and time they would tell me they saw me.



One of my friends said he chased me all the way into a dead-end alley, and that I would just disappear without a trace. Even my girlfriend said she would sometimes see me near her house, dressed in black, with a disturbing glare, when I was actually out somewhere drinking, with someone else.



My sister says that sometimes she hears me when I get home, and watches me open the door and go into the living room with the light turned off. She would see me lay down on the sofa from across the hall, and suddenly I would begin ripping my clothes off like some wild animal. When she turns the light on, there's no one there. Hours later, I would arrive home, leave my keys on the table and go to my room. All of this happens as if someone, or something was imitating me -- like a mimic.


Creepy story man. 5/5

  • 07.04.2008 6:07 PM PDT

Posted by: Brazilian_Rider
The Clown and Hotel ones scarred the -blam!- outta me... I went and turned on every light in the adjacent three rooms.


*Grabs Shotgun and waits for Clown/ Albino Lady*


Same. Can you imagine staring into a ghosts red eyes without knowing it? And clown is just...disturbing....

  • 07.04.2008 8:14 PM PDT
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the one about the clown statue gave me goose bumps at the end for some reason.it was cool=]

  • 07.04.2008 8:35 PM PDT

Posted by: Element Leaf
Hey, it's that dickwibbler who sent me a broken group invite!
Posted by: Nedus
You go ahead and google it. Find a pic of what I was looking for. If you can't find one, feel free to fist yourself instead.
Posted by: RustyBeardMan
extreme hockey: the puck is a land mine and the hockey sticks are chainsaws

how I rank these stories.

not scary, but narly.

kinda dumb.

dumb.

ok, not that scary.

if it HAPPENED!!!!!!!

  • 07.04.2008 8:43 PM PDT

Posted by: Element Leaf
Hey, it's that dickwibbler who sent me a broken group invite!
Posted by: Nedus
You go ahead and google it. Find a pic of what I was looking for. If you can't find one, feel free to fist yourself instead.
Posted by: RustyBeardMan
extreme hockey: the puck is a land mine and the hockey sticks are chainsaws

Posted by: kyle67676
the one about the clown statue gave me goose bumps at the end for some reason.it was cool=]


same here, which is even more scary......

  • 07.04.2008 8:43 PM PDT

The Clown justs wants to say hiiiii!!

  • 07.05.2008 9:38 AM PDT

-Pneumono­ultramicroscopicsilicovolca (a lung disease contracted by breathing in volcanic dust and coal dust)
-When Procedure becomes a normality, we shun what we're not used to.
The power of the mods. FEAR THEM
-Hippopotomons trosesquippedaliophobia- Fear of long words.
MAXZERO33 ~ thanks to ballistick for the sig.

There was once a corpse in the middle of a town. They left it there. The end.

  • 07.05.2008 9:43 AM PDT

Hey baby, its all Kool and the Gang.

A jarring account...

  • 07.05.2008 10:04 AM PDT


Posted by: LedKashmir
A jarring account...

What's the link? I'm not clicking it....

  • 07.05.2008 10:07 AM PDT

Hey baby, its all Kool and the Gang.

It's a story about a guy who enters some cave and the effect it has on him in his daily life. I saved it in my favorites from a thread on this forum a long time ago.

http://www.angelfire.com/trek/caver/page10.html

[Edited on 07.05.2008 10:10 AM PDT]

  • 07.05.2008 10:10 AM PDT