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I got your back I can pay the fine,
how bad could it be? your ryhme wasent worth a dime,
not to say that you havent been trying,
Its hard to rap over all that crying

  • 01.23.2005 7:49 PM PDT
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jbSPINE may think he's hot
but really hes not
I don't want to make fun of him
I just like doing that to him.

  • 01.23.2005 7:51 PM PDT
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I dont think Im all that hot,
Its not my fault I got the top spot,
If you need it I can help you,
you know what, just for you Ill open a school,

  • 01.23.2005 7:53 PM PDT
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i think ive had enough,
of ryhmes,and words,and all that other stuff,
so with one final ryhme ill leave,
wait a minute i hate rymes (breaks ryhme here)5H!FT+1!!!!!!

  • 01.23.2005 7:53 PM PDT
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gamming freak is gone, and that is so sad,
cause his ryhmes were just so f'n bad,
If I had to read another one, I think id go blind
but I needed him around, his lack of talent made mine shine:)

  • 01.23.2005 7:56 PM PDT
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(i'm back)

my rhymes aren't that good.....
but i'm back in the hood....
did anyone quit yet...
if so that is bull-blam-....
y do i even try....
your rhymes are so much better than mine....
i'll rhyme with you some other time...

  • 01.24.2005 3:55 AM PDT
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if you want to hear a weird song, then add whackyprune to your xbox live friends list, and ask him to sing the transex.ual song.
I'll rap in a bit,
my throat feel like a big pile o -blam!-.
give me bout an hour,
In the motha -blam!- shower.
but til then keep rappin
and make this place happnin.

P.S. i kno, i suck.

[Edited on 1/24/2005 11:45:30 AM]

  • 01.24.2005 10:04 AM PDT
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2nd day 3rd page
back to show these MCs the way.
Im just busting a few ryhmes
but its up to wolf to save the day

  • 01.24.2005 11:23 AM PDT
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You are such an f'n poser
Why dont you take off you hoser
Uh oh now I'm rhyming too
In no small part due to you
I cant rhyme all that good
Although its not like I should
Cause I'm not in the hood
Ok now Im not making much sense
Why did I have to stick in my 2 cents?
Ok this thread's wasted enough of my time
You'll have to suffer the next line without a rhyme

P.S. try to think of an English word that rhymes with orange, month, silver, purple or wicked.

  • 01.24.2005 12:59 PM PDT
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Wicked all my words seem twisted,
I missed it, the oppritunity to be gifed and lifted,
just my way, even a broken clock is right twice a day
I do it for attention whats wrong with that,
this attitude is all I got to watch my back,
grab your battle axe, Ill wait right here,
it all seems to be so sincere

  • 01.24.2005 1:06 PM PDT
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Posted by: jbSPINE
Wicked all my words seem twisted,
I missed it, the oppritunity to be gifed and lifted,
just my way, even a broken clock is right twice a day
I do it for attention whats wrong with that,
this attitude is all I got to watch my back,
grab your battle axe, Ill wait right here,
it all seems to be so sincere
most of that didnt ryhme.

  • 01.24.2005 1:23 PM PDT
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it ryhmed when I recorded it, its actually on one of my songs,

  • 01.24.2005 1:32 PM PDT
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around me all I see is this cracked foundation
used and abused makes a bad situation
worst now every day pass to fast,
were the last to retreat from the falling glass,

  • 01.24.2005 1:34 PM PDT
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apologize for whats in my eyes?
no compramize as we break the ties
stop the lies, wait just stay!
if im not the person you wanted why did you make me this way?

  • 01.24.2005 1:36 PM PDT
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sharp rain drops fall from the heavens,
look this microphone cords been severed
whatever, you hear me cause im in your head,
now listen to every F'n word ive said,

  • 01.24.2005 1:40 PM PDT
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Mr. Spine,calm down
it's just a game
you tried so hard
and won some fame
those other guys
they wanted to
live it up
just like you
you skills, they can't be overrun
maybe only overdone
so far things have been real cool
and dare I say?
you have been schooled!

j/k jb

  • 01.24.2005 1:48 PM PDT
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I liked that, good job DB

DB came and I got scorched
I guess its time to pass the torch
Wolf and coheed, DB and freak,
funny how we all should meet
but it seems to me this thread has peaked,
our collective ryhmes have made a pool.
DB came, and I got schooled,

  • 01.24.2005 2:04 PM PDT
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lol

LOL'ED!!!

  • 01.24.2005 2:10 PM PDT
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Follow me down the road
To the realms of the rhyme
People of the rock come and rock one time
When we bring the sound
You know the light of God shine
Poeple of the rock come and rock one time
Anyone thirst there's plenty of new wine
People of the rock come and rock one time
Make me feel so fine all of but all the time
People of the rock and the father
To come and fill us

P.S: I didn't write that! I give you a link to the guys that did in a sec.

  • 01.24.2005 2:13 PM PDT
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Earthsuit link

  • 01.24.2005 2:21 PM PDT
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jb spine, still on the top
all those others
and I did rock
this “song” has become
more of a book
defiantly worth a second look
with all these rhymers
in one place
each of us
keeping a straight face
adding more and more
with each post
jb spine,
our graceful host
now come out come out
nobody hide
we’re all friends here
no need to be shy
we want to hear
all you other bloaks
there’s gotta be some rhyming folk
finishing up
little left to say
I wish I had a fish filay
sinking back
I take my bows
time to make a little vow
I will be back
and you’ll all say “wow”


  • 01.24.2005 2:28 PM PDT
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Well, I don't know why I came here tonight
I got the feeling that something ain't right
I'm so scared cause I dont think I can rhyme
And this thread is really wasting my time
Spine to the left of me, Douglas to the right
Here I am, stuck in this forum with you

Yes, I'm stuck in this forum with you.
And I'm wondering what it is I should do
It's so hard to keep up this stupid rhythm
I'm slowly losing all my precision
Spine to the left of me, Douglas to the Right
Here I am, stuck in this forum with you.

Well, you started off with prompting
And you're proud that you're a rhyming man
And the other users got a stomping
From your nonstop rhyming sche-e-eme

Tryin' to make some sense of this all
But I can see it makes no sense at all
Is it cool to post these rhymes in this thread?
Cause I know now it seems pretty dead
Spine to the left of me, Douglas to the right
Here I am, stuck in this forum with you.
Yes, I'm stuck in this forum with you.







[Edited on 1/24/2005 2:35:43 PM]

  • 01.24.2005 2:33 PM PDT
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This is a poem my brother, master h. It was originally by Edgar Allen Poe, but my brother tweaked it. You can find his other stories here. With out futher adue (sp?)

Ten or eleven years ago,
In the kingdom by the sea,
There lived a cutie that I dated a while
By the name of Annabelle Lee
And this maiden I'd take out to dinner
If I could "buy one and get one free."

We dated maybe a year or so
In the kingdom by the sea
And were happier than two doped-up drunks
Myself and Annabelle Lee
When she caught some sort of fatal disease
And died, quite suddenly.

"Bummer," I said, and got take-out Chinese
Without my Annabelle Lee
I sat around in my underwear
And watched a little T.V.
But little did I know that a deadly space virus
Turned my love into a zombie.

So late that night, she knocked on my door
My beautiful Annabelle Lee
"Who is it?" I cried, and reached for my gat
Which was sitting right beside me
(I had to watch out for thugs and punks
In my kingdom by the sea.)

All I heard was a choked grunt
And a scratching that sounded eerie
"Hang on," I yelled, and holding my gun,
I opened the door slowly
Mumbling "I don't have any -blam!- today,"
Figuring it was just some junkie
Imagine the look of surprise in my eyes
To see my Annabelle Lee.

"-blam!-, you dead!" I protested, a little aggrieved
As she murmured and fumbled at me
There was dirt in her hair and an unbalanced stare
In the eyes of my Annabelle Lee
"Fresh brains," she expelled, as I suddenly smelled
The embalmed corpse now clawing at me.

Without a clear thought, I aimed off a shot
At the beautiful Annabelle Lee
And she jerked to the side but kept coming along
Drooling quite cannibal-ly
I tried to remember the lessons I'd learned
From Romero and Lucio Fulci

I ran to the shed and threw open the door
Looking around frantically
I noticed the machete, all iron and heavy
And grabbed it with fervent glee
With my machete, I was finally ready
To take on my Annabelle Lee.

For the moon shines above and I wait for my love
My beautiful Annabelle Lee
My biceps will strain as I destroy the brain
Of the zombified Annabelle Lee
And so I shall wait for my now ex-girlfriend
And wish I was watching MacGyver again
In my apartment there by the sea
Without zombies gnawing at me.


[Edited on 1/24/2005 2:47:18 PM]

  • 01.24.2005 2:40 PM PDT
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The United States of America-- STILL more rights than North Korea!
--New official U.S. motto.

Cronin's Law----The New Flood Drinking Game

UGGGHHHNNNHH!
IM RAPPIN ON B.NET -blam!-!
YEAHHHH!
B.NET
UGGGGHHHHNNN
-blam!- MY -blam!-ES ON B.NET!
YEAHHH
UGH UGH UGH!
-blam!- MY B.NET HO SLUTTY -blam!-ES!
YEAHHH!

  • 01.24.2005 2:46 PM PDT
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Posted by: Texas Ben
UGGGHHHNNNHH!
IM RAPPIN ON B.NET -blam!-!
YEAHHHH!
B.NET
UGGGGHHHHNNN
-blam!- MY -blam!-ES ON B.NET!
YEAHHH
UGH UGH UGH!
-blam!- MY B.NET HO SLUTTY -blam!-ES!
YEAHHH!


cough . . . loser . . . cough.

  • 01.24.2005 2:49 PM PDT

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