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"DEATH COMES TO US ALL"

  • 01.25.2005 10:56 PM PDT
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they're all in caplock, that's a gramma error.

  • 01.25.2005 11:05 PM PDT

Firstly, it's stating a fallacy. I know I won't ever die.

Secondly, it personifies Death - an abstract concept can't exactly move around, therefore "death" cannot "come" anywhere. A better way (though much less dramatic-sounding, I must say, but hey, you avoid using a cliché) would be to just simply say "We will all die", or "death is an event which will one day involve every one of us".

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  • 01.25.2005 11:18 PM PDT
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there is no full stop.

  • 01.25.2005 11:26 PM PDT
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bam!

  • 01.25.2005 11:27 PM PDT

'Home is behind, The world ahead, And there are many paths to tread, Through shadow, to the edge of night, Until the stars are all alight, Mist and shadow, Cloud and shade, All shall fade, All shall...Fade'
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Firstly, it's stating a fallacy. I know I won't ever die.

Secondly, it personifies Death - an abstract concept can't exactly move around, therefore "death" cannot "come" anywhere. A better way (though much less dramatic-sounding, I must say, but hey, you avoid using a cliché) would be to just simply say "We will all die", or "death is an event which will one day involve every one of us".

- Reiginko


Hmm all very true

  • 01.25.2005 11:39 PM PDT