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Here we go, a part in the book, this will be changed in the book though, so don't be dissapointed, this is just hands-on wrting.
Sivart sat back in the boat heading to the Greakard's nation, they were closing on what looked as a beach, but they all knew it was just a start to the huge dessert of Ennu, named after the god they worshiped, which signaled they landed west on their continent. Sivart looked around and saw the aqua green colored mist that floated midair, they new it wasn't poison, just magic remnaints of an ancient war before their time, at the dawn of Icreith.
He looked to his side and saw the captain standing strait, folding the Icrethian flag, which was red cloth with golden ivy shaped lines across it, which was also the color of each captain's cape, until he or she ranked higher like Sivart, who weared a plain red cape. The boat neared land, and stopped. Sivart got up and summoned his men, as did the captain, and they parted their paths for a while.
The captain headed east toward the Docks located on a river that goes out to the ocean. They needed to stop the attacks being done in the Icrethian woods of judeac, located in southeast Icreith. Doing so would put them on the offensive, and cripple the other army.
Sivart chose his men wisely, only high ranks, but this time he made an exception. One man, who refused to wear the armor and weaponry given to him by the sargent, he instead wore a black cape, black shirt, black pants, black shoes, and had a black sword made from material used by an exctinct enemy, black steel, only requirable from pirates. But it wasn't his distinct assasin look, it was that he wore no helmet, which Sivart did the same, only a fool would do that, or a powerful man. Sivart looked towards him and said "You, Liton! You're with me." Liton said nothing, he just walked away from the captain and toward sivart.
Sivart's group traveled southeast, toward what was expected to be the enemie's castle. Once they reached it the group stared at it, It was made of black rock, and red windows, a cloud covered the castle giving it a evil gloomy look. Liton walked forward and glimsed at the castle, but kept walking as if he wasn't intimidated. He turned around and looked at the men "Don't slow me down, either follow or fall back." Liton said catching Sivart's attention. Sivart walked toward Liton and grabbed his neck and lifted him from the ground "Know you're place Liton, we need more men, and you will follow us, I doubt even we can handle this place." Sivart said angrily. Liton breathed normaly, not feeling pain from being held by the neck, since his hand didn't even squeeze his skin. Liton grabbed his wrist and tightened it, Sivart felt an abnormal pain and let go, actually scared, Liton threw him to the ground and glared in his eyes, then said "You can leave if you want, but don't bother getting more men, this place will be empty by the time you get back. Like I said, follow or fall back, either way I'm going in."
Liton walked towards the castle, then jumped up and flew to the entrance. Sivart stared in amazement, looked down at his wrist and whispered to himself "What the hell?". His men looked at him, waiting for orders. "Fall back to the captain, and tell him I'm coming back." Sivart said as he stood up. They ran back the way they came and Sivart ran to the castle.
[Edited on 1/31/2005 3:01:44 PM]