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Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War (Chapter 19 Delayed? Details pg. 93)
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That was by far the best chapter i have ever read. it was emotional how jhonson had to leave the medic to die at the hands of the flood. and how Lord Hood made it clear there was nothing anyone could do to stop the flood. i cant wait for the new chapter... Nor can i stress enough how incredible your story is.

  • 07.18.2005 11:26 PM PDT
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yesss first post, score....

  • 07.18.2005 11:27 PM PDT
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Why does Sydney (my home) have to be the first area to fall to the flood?

  • 07.19.2005 1:30 AM PDT
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Nice...

  • 07.19.2005 2:30 AM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War
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Bad name for the carrrier ship, why does Gerbles have to be here?


[Edited on 7/19/2005]

  • 07.19.2005 2:32 AM PDT
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Heh...

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Is there no end to this rabbit hole? Deeper and deeper we go with no light as of yet at the end of the tunnel.

  • 07.19.2005 7:04 AM PDT
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Awesome chapter. Finally! Halsey and Kelly. I have my suspicions of what they are doing but there is so much going on in this chater that it's hard to take it all in at once. The wait was worth it (even if it wasn't needed.) Still can't wait for 20. Wow. 20 chapters. Time goes so slow/quickly.

  • 07.19.2005 7:09 AM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War (Chapter 19 FINALLY Released! Pg.102)
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hey guys i've went to a place far from civilization for like 3 weeks now im back but i still wont post that much since most my time wil be on watchin tv and doin sports and playing games... its summer!!

  • 07.19.2005 7:38 AM PDT
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I will always place the mission first.
I will never accept defeat.
I will never quit.
I will never leave a fallen comrade.

Awesome chapter Mr. Clark, I think I know what Kelly and Dr. Halsey are doing, and what intstillation is that monitor from again?

  • 07.19.2005 8:15 AM PDT
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Bungie Crossword Solver.
UNSCDF Supreme Commander

★★★★★
In terms of FPS Games:
PC > Xbox360, PC > PS3.

YESS!!!! Finally!!!!

one of the best chapters yet! Kinda sucks they are going to abandon earth

Cant wait for the next one! keep up the good work

  • 07.19.2005 8:42 AM PDT
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Hmmm...One Instalation 01, eh? We know that the Flood has been released there, so Hasley is probably doing something related to the Flood? What would be significant of the first ring....I would think that since the Flood were released early and so, the instalation has no Covenant contamination, maybe there are Forerunner artifacts left over from the constructiun. Perhaps a Mark XII....

  • 07.19.2005 8:50 AM PDT
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This was probably the most exciting chapter ive ever read and every story, but you know what really makes me mad? Is that Sir.Brilliants story got stickied and Mr.Clarks Didnt. I wonder why? is it because Sir.Brilliants story is finished?

  • 07.19.2005 10:40 AM PDT
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Sir Brilliant's did and Mr. Clark's didn't? Thats Capital B.S.!!! And that was a very good chapter, as always. And it does kinda stink that there going to abandon earth, well s*** happens.

  • 07.19.2005 11:02 AM PDT

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awsome chapter Mr_Clark. Loving ur story man its awsome.

  • 07.19.2005 11:13 AM PDT
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I would so love to play Mr.Clarks story, the first half of the game would be fighting on earth, coming oh so close to saving it. Then all hope is lost and you spend the rest of the game is spent running from earth and the flood.

  • 07.19.2005 11:37 AM PDT
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That would be a virtual chapter on a X-box cartridge, not a game.

  • 07.19.2005 12:23 PM PDT
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yeah mr clarck good story although i think you shoudln't have spwitched scenes so much in it. like going from 1 group to another.

  • 07.19.2005 12:31 PM PDT

He watches every Hodgetwin video they put up...on ALL their channels. He calls them the Hodge Triplets, and considers himself the 3rd triplet. He's started talking and acting like them now. Every other line out of his mouth "Thaaas some BULLLLLL**** maaayne" or "Gotta make dem gainzzzz". He calls his biceps "gains". When he eats post-workout, he talks to his biceps, "Don't worry gains, I'm feeding you. Daddys gonna feed you, gainz *kisses biceps*".

Dang... that was awesome. Too many questions, though! How did the Prophets not die in the activation of the Halos if they're that old?! How did the Forerunners not die? What the heck do Kelly and Halsey want Atoning Deviant's help with so badly that they're willing to kill all life to get it? How are the Elites going to survive? How are the Humans going to survive? When are we going to see Mr. Clark finally reveal that he believes Forerunners = Humans? "For those wondering how any Forerunner could still possibly be alive, play the games and read the books and some of the interviews with Bungie. There are subtle hints, very very very subtle, but they’re there, right beneath your nose." What the heck are the hints? All I remember is that 343 Guilty Spark said the Forerunners died in the activation! I've played both games and read all the books! I've studied and reviewed everything involving the Halo plotline! The only possibility is Humans = Forerunners that I can see. Enlighten us, Mr. Clark! Pleaseeeee!!!!

  • 07.19.2005 1:04 PM PDT

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good chapter. I am still waiting for the description of the forerunner. I love the blade he has, even though i dont know what it looks like but still is awsome to see how sharp it is. That mofo took out all those people just by himself. So Earth has fallen, well not yet but that is where everything is hinting to. Great chapter and keep up the awsome work. PCE

  • 07.19.2005 1:04 PM PDT
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The sword could be like the energy blade, but he put the blade on truths skin, so that blade might be industrial manufactured or might be an ornate piece crafted by the finest forerunner blacksmith. I dunno, get me another drink.

  • 07.19.2005 2:40 PM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War
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Posted by: Limited Edition
Is there no end to this rabbit hole? Deeper and deeper we go with no light as of yet at the end of the tunnel.


And of course I am one to extend the tunnel for as long as possible, ensuring that everyone reaches their breaking points in anticipation and then finally give them the briefest of glimpses to the truth, and then visciously tear it away and leave them in the dark once again.

Well plenty of good reaction from this latest chapter (no complaints about the sorta not long length either!).

Seems most people are wondering about the Forerunner, and whether I am one to pool my beliefs in the thought that:

Humans = Forerunner

There are a few things you can gleam from my writing so far.

1. The Forerunner originally created the Flood in an attempt to infuse themselves with the Flood's regenerative properties, essentially bestowing upon their race eternal life. This of course turned out to be a collosal mistake.

2. From Truth's mental ramblings last chapter we've discovered that the Grand High Prophet of Law was created by the Forerunner. Or better yet, he was an experiment carried out by the Forerunner. Does this mean the Forerunner created the Prophet's as a species? I can't say...

3. In Chapter 13, during the Covenant History chapters, it was revealed that the Forerunner did create some form of A.I aside from the Installation Monitors. If you'll recall Ido Naslum and Romsunee encountered an A.I that was in the form of a Forerunner.

4. Most obvious of course is the fact that the Forerunner did not kill themselves off completely when activating the Halo Installations. How did they survive however?

Lastly I'll leave you with the passing thought that, while my base ideas on the Forerunner are structured off of some common beliefs, where I go with the idea is a direction I have yet to see anyone take.

So look forward to plenty more surprises in the future.

  • 07.19.2005 3:17 PM PDT
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interesting. very well done Mr Clark. I wouldnt have put humans=forunner in that form. some people may skip over it and think you said humans are forunner not what you said.

  • 07.19.2005 7:19 PM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War (Chapter 19 Delayed? Details pg. 93)

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I got his sarcasm...one person has to implement sarcasm and then you get a pile of terrorist chipmunks crashing your party, not fun at all..

beautiful clark

  • 07.19.2005 9:26 PM PDT
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So many fan fics, so much to read! =D

  • 07.19.2005 9:45 PM PDT