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Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War (Chapter 19 Delayed? Details pg. 93)
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nice chapter clark, keep em coming

  • 07.23.2005 6:44 AM PDT
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Super-Ultra-Mega-Important Chapter/Story News Below!


After moving things around, checking outlines and whatnot, I think I have a pretty good idea of how Chapter 20 and 21 are going to look like.

Basically these two are going to set up the huge, giant, crazily insane Chapter 22, where I finally open up and bare all, putting almost everything on display. I'm not talking about a strip-show here, I mean storyline wise. Everything. Here's a short list of some of the things you'll come to understand and/or see come Chapter 22:

Forerunner(s)
Prophet(s)
Humanity
Ark(s)
Sanctuary(s)
Flood
Pure Blood(s)
Half-Breed(s)
Halo(s)
Reclaimer(s)
Danrun
Silone
Prophet's Betrayal
Humanity's Betrayal
Gravemind(s) Purpose
Spartan(s) Fate
Forerunner Identity


Some of the terms used above should be familiar, while some may not. Speculate as much as you'd like.

  • 07.23.2005 6:46 AM PDT
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This answers a few questions, but raises so many more. When other people catch a whiff of this... oh dear.

[Edited on 7/23/2005]

  • 07.23.2005 7:52 AM PDT
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I got his sarcasm...one person has to implement sarcasm and then you get a pile of terrorist chipmunks crashing your party, not fun at all..

Mr clark, i would like to thank you, FOR GIVING ME A HEART ATTACK!!!

  • 07.23.2005 8:29 AM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War (Chapter 19 Delayed? Details pg. 93)
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I will always place the mission first.
I will never accept defeat.
I will never quit.
I will never leave a fallen comrade.

Sanctuary(s)? Pure Blood(s)? Half Breed(s)?

  • 07.23.2005 9:47 AM PDT

He watches every Hodgetwin video they put up...on ALL their channels. He calls them the Hodge Triplets, and considers himself the 3rd triplet. He's started talking and acting like them now. Every other line out of his mouth "Thaaas some BULLLLLL**** maaayne" or "Gotta make dem gainzzzz". He calls his biceps "gains". When he eats post-workout, he talks to his biceps, "Don't worry gains, I'm feeding you. Daddys gonna feed you, gainz *kisses biceps*".

"Forerunner(s)
Prophet(s)
Humanity
Ark(s)
Sanctuary(s)
Flood
Pure Blood(s)
Half-Breed(s)
Halo(s)
Reclaimer(s)
Danrun
Silone
Prophet's Betrayal
Humanity's Betrayal
Gravemind(s) Purpose
Spartan(s) Fate
Forerunner Identity"

It's obvious now. Humans are either pure bloods or half breeds with Forerunners. The pure bloods are the reclaimers (Halsey, Kelly, John, Johnson, Keyes and probably some others). The Sanctuarys are the areas where any life forms may seal themself off to survive the Halo's blast, that is how the Forerunners survived.


BTW Clark: Thanks for the great info! Can't wait for chapter 20!

  • 07.23.2005 10:00 AM PDT
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Do you think like this all the time? But, more than likely your right, and with this much stuff he's given us, prepare for the speculation of a life-time.

[Edited on 7/23/2005]

  • 07.23.2005 11:24 AM PDT
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Wow. That's cool. I too have my ideas about what happens but there in my head right now. Seeing as you said you were going to lay your cards on the table, can we expect anymore after 22? Or is that just an important chpater to lead up to the climactic finish? Either way is good.

  • 07.23.2005 12:08 PM PDT

He watches every Hodgetwin video they put up...on ALL their channels. He calls them the Hodge Triplets, and considers himself the 3rd triplet. He's started talking and acting like them now. Every other line out of his mouth "Thaaas some BULLLLLL**** maaayne" or "Gotta make dem gainzzzz". He calls his biceps "gains". When he eats post-workout, he talks to his biceps, "Don't worry gains, I'm feeding you. Daddys gonna feed you, gainz *kisses biceps*".

Y'all know the map Sanctuary, right? Well, if you look around the edges, there are strange totem-poll like stone structures coming out of the ground. Go have a look for yourself, I think I know what Mr. Clark thinks Sanctuary is...

  • 07.23.2005 3:36 PM PDT
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I will always place the mission first.
I will never accept defeat.
I will never quit.
I will never leave a fallen comrade.

you have some good ideas uberdawg

  • 07.23.2005 6:01 PM PDT
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Sanctuary(s)? Pure Blood(s)? Half Breed(s)?


Well you see, because of irregular mating between the Covenant troops, we now have pure blood elites and Half-brute half-elites aliens. Some of the wierder ones include the grunts and hunters...but thats not to be spoken of. The sanctuary is where this half breeds go to share their love/lust for each other, away from the persecution of the other covenant troops.

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Get your mind out of the gutter, perv.
j/k

  • 07.24.2005 9:45 AM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War
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OOH-RAH! awesome read. pretty well written.

  • 07.24.2005 11:10 AM PDT
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cant wait!

  • 07.24.2005 11:35 AM PDT
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lot's of interesting stuff coming up, can't wait!

  • 07.24.2005 1:28 PM PDT
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Since the vast majority of the PM's addressed to me all seem to have a current theme, I'll just go ahead and answer them here in a large comprehensive rant.

Why don't you talk to me anymore you jerk!

First off, I dunno how long ago it was, but at one point I posted the e-mail address I use for messenger purposes. Unbeknownst to me, in the matter of about a month, my contact list went from having 20 or so friends that I talked to regularily, to about (*checks*) 134 contacts.

Needless to say that's a tad crazy, and seeing as how I can barely handle more than three conversations online at once, I've been feeling a bit swamped lately whenever I sign in. Because of this I've grown more dependant on using physical means of communication with people that I live with, or others I've grown accustomed to talking to over the years. That and using my cell phone, as demonstrated by Konoka_chan's messages awhile ago.

So if I'm not online much anymore, its because you guys scared me away...j/k

Where the hell is Ackerson going? Another Halo? The Moon? To kill the Master Chief?

Well, nothing so weird as the moon, but he is going somewhere in particular, so don't worry, he'll pop back into the story sooner or later. That's all I can give you though.

If Dr. Halsey and Kelly went to Installation 01, how eactly did they find it, and why the hell did they go there in the first place?

My response to that question is to curiously shift my eyes back and forth and then chuckle nervously.

The Forerunners are dead you moron!

Look at Chapter 18 and 19, they most definitely are not.

Whatever happened to that research station that was in the second Covenant History chapter? You said everything happened in those chapters for a reason...

I most certainly did! Er...yeah that's all.

So do the Spartans all look the same with their armor on?

Well, Master Chief is the only one currently inhabiting the upgraded version of the MJOLNIR battle suit, so he will look different than Kelly, who is wearing that old unstylish, unshiny armor from Reach.

What's going on!? Dr. Halsey? Returning from somewhere? Who is she?

Go and buy the Halo books, they shall answer your questions better than I ever could.

If you don't want to buy them, find a friend who has them and beat them over the head with a blunt object and steal them. Either that or ask them nicely, both work the same i'd say.

You expect us to blindly follow your story when you never read anyone elses? Your such a megalomaniac!

Hey, that hurts you know. I like to think I'm more of an ordinary maniac.

Seriously, I try my best to read as much as I can, but there's this thing called time. See, time is often against me, continuously moving forward instead of say, standing still, or even going backwards. With that, I can only do so much in so little a time frame.

If you'd rather I not dedicate my small amount of free time to writing, and instead read and comment on other people's stuff, sure I'll do it, but then there's this screaming horde of fans behind me that will rip me to shreds for neglecting my writing again.

In short, I find it best to get a large chunk of free time secured before I try reading the other fanfic stories. As it is I have fallen terribly behind, so I'm not sure if there's any actual completed stories or whatnot, but if you are a fanfic writer here, don't hesitate to send me a PM. I'll eventually get around to reading the stuff, it'll just take me an incredibly long time.

Well okay, you make some good points, but your still a jerk! And why isn't this story stickied? Did you somehow piss off the forum ninja's?

Well there was that one time I made a thread where I had the secret naked photo of all of them together, and that sure didn't help my popularity with them.

Seriously though, no I haven't done anything to the forum ninja's, in fact I don't think I've ever actually had any indirect/direct contact with any of them ever.

As for the sticky thing, don't expect one, and please don't pester the mods to give this thread one. Its not a big deal to me, its not even a little deal to me. I know I've got a fanbase, an incredibly large one at that. I c'mon, over a thousand people reading it on fanfiction.net? That's pretty darn good I'd say.


Phew, think that about covers everything....






  • 07.24.2005 4:03 PM PDT
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cannot wait for next capter when your done you should write a little story to tell what happend like ten years from now

  • 07.24.2005 4:22 PM PDT

Posted by: LIME31
I got his sarcasm...one person has to implement sarcasm and then you get a pile of terrorist chipmunks crashing your party, not fun at all..

Posted by: ODST1125
i think you are better then SIR, if u keep posting ur chapters. so far u have been an amazing writer.


I think Mr Clark that Sir's story only is stickied because its bigger. I bet when you reach the 4000 post mark you'll be stickied too. As said up there by some Random person you are a better writer. So guys I think its time for some bumping

Edit: whoops did i say bumping, i meant tpplstrr frumpy. Please dont ban me mods, I love you guys.

[Edited on 7/24/2005]

  • 07.24.2005 5:06 PM PDT

He watches every Hodgetwin video they put up...on ALL their channels. He calls them the Hodge Triplets, and considers himself the 3rd triplet. He's started talking and acting like them now. Every other line out of his mouth "Thaaas some BULLLLLL**** maaayne" or "Gotta make dem gainzzzz". He calls his biceps "gains". When he eats post-workout, he talks to his biceps, "Don't worry gains, I'm feeding you. Daddys gonna feed you, gainz *kisses biceps*".

"It's obvious now. Humans are either pure bloods or half breeds with Forerunners. The pure bloods are the reclaimers (Halsey, Kelly, John, Johnson, Keyes and probably some others). The Sanctuarys are the areas where any life forms may seal themself off to survive the Halo's blast, that is how the Forerunners survived."

Hate to quote myself, but I feel it necessary to step up and state a modification to my theory. Since we all know the Forerunners made the Flood to give themselves immortality, I would venture to conclude that some Humans are Forerunners mixed with Flood DNA. These are Half-Breeds. The Forerunners who have no Flood DNA are pure-bloods.

Good stuff, Mr. C. But I still wonder where Ackerson's going. Any ideas, Bungie community?

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probably delta halo to see if his Spartan III's are still alive

  • 07.24.2005 8:06 PM PDT

He watches every Hodgetwin video they put up...on ALL their channels. He calls them the Hodge Triplets, and considers himself the 3rd triplet. He's started talking and acting like them now. Every other line out of his mouth "Thaaas some BULLLLLL**** maaayne" or "Gotta make dem gainzzzz". He calls his biceps "gains". When he eats post-workout, he talks to his biceps, "Don't worry gains, I'm feeding you. Daddys gonna feed you, gainz *kisses biceps*".

Certainly a possibility. I have a sneaking suspicion that he's going to run into Halsey and Kelly....

  • 07.24.2005 9:00 PM PDT
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no bumping!

and wow, that is a very good theory about the fanfic. I bet ackerson gets killed by kelly and they take that ship to earth,and have a hawiian lobster party! then the flood steal the lobsters, and they crash the party!
lol.

[Edited on 7/24/2005]

  • 07.24.2005 9:10 PM PDT
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I will always place the mission first.
I will never accept defeat.
I will never quit.
I will never leave a fallen comrade.

wow people are mean to you when they PM you Mr. Clark, i think Ackerson is going to look for his spartans, but kelly and halsey are going to run in to them and find ackerson and then he is going to order his spartans to kill kelly and halsey, but they aren't going to listen to him and then kelly is going to kill him

  • 07.24.2005 9:53 PM PDT
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I am a Zombie.
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* Nope, I doubt Ackerson is goin' to die any day soon.
While he may be an -blam!-, He's still good-bad guy in the story, and in the end it will pay off. He may run to Halsey, but I think he have solution to Flood problem, but he aint telling tha until its absolutely necessary.

* I have no idea about Pure-, Half-bloods, so i just wait and see what Mr_C's has deep within his mind.

* Forerunners, as I stated earlier, You had something arabic on them (robes, desert, sandstormscene, that blade.) There will be big conversation between Truth and that man, and with that I think Arbiter is goin' to die fighting that warrior.

But I'll just wait, and see.

-HaloXenon-

  • 07.25.2005 2:01 AM PDT

He watches every Hodgetwin video they put up...on ALL their channels. He calls them the Hodge Triplets, and considers himself the 3rd triplet. He's started talking and acting like them now. Every other line out of his mouth "Thaaas some BULLLLLL**** maaayne" or "Gotta make dem gainzzzz". He calls his biceps "gains". When he eats post-workout, he talks to his biceps, "Don't worry gains, I'm feeding you. Daddys gonna feed you, gainz *kisses biceps*".

Gah, the Arbiter, die?!?!? NOOOO!!!

If either the Arbiter, the Master Chief, or Sgt. Johnson die in this story, I'm going to have a heart attack and die myself.

  • 07.25.2005 4:37 AM PDT