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well i dont mean to flame but we told you soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

sir brilliont got stickied yes dont worry you might get stickied to

  • 07.25.2005 7:34 AM PDT
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Uh, what?

I'd pretend to understand, but I just can't manage to sink myself down to that level.

As for everyone else, I'm throwing down the freaking gauntlet right now. Anyone that responds to this guys post in any kind of flaming quality, I'll be delaying Chapter 20's release by one day for every flame post.

I'm really goddamn tired of this.

  • 07.25.2005 8:18 AM PDT
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I'm 100% that Prophets are half-bloods. It practically says that. Mr.Clark specificaly says that the High Prophet of Law is one of the orignal experiments of the Forerunner. In fact this explains everything. Humans are pure-bloods (a.k.a. Reclaimers), and Prophets are half-bloods. Half-bloods of what though? The Flood of course (thank you Uberdawg). The Flood, as we know, are extremely able to keep a host alive for a very long time (i.e. Gravemind). This explains why Prophets are not accepting Humans as part of the Covenant. The Prophets are jealous. As human-forerunner relations, it could be that humans=forerunner or just that humans are a genetic creation like the Flood. As for why Hasely and Kelly are at 01, I'm guessing thats it's.....I don't know... That limits my extent of my ranting. Oh, and if I ruined the story in anyway, sorry.

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  • 07.25.2005 8:39 AM PDT
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Posted by: Mr_Clark
As for everyone else, I'm throwing down the freaking gauntlet right now. Anyone that responds to this guys post in any kind of flaming quality, I'll be delaying Chapter 20's release by one day for every flame post.

I'm really goddamn tired of this.


Eeeek! *Crawls under desk and hides there*

Ok but, Mr_C, I hope you wont kill Arbiter as I assumed in my last post. It would suck, if he'd died that way, nothing sucks more than to die by guy that was supposed to be dead for last 100.000 years.

-HaloXenon-

  • 07.25.2005 8:41 AM PDT

He watches every Hodgetwin video they put up...on ALL their channels. He calls them the Hodge Triplets, and considers himself the 3rd triplet. He's started talking and acting like them now. Every other line out of his mouth "Thaaas some BULLLLLL**** maaayne" or "Gotta make dem gainzzzz". He calls his biceps "gains". When he eats post-workout, he talks to his biceps, "Don't worry gains, I'm feeding you. Daddys gonna feed you, gainz *kisses biceps*".

"Uh, what?

I'd pretend to understand, but I just can't manage to sink myself down to that level.

As for everyone else, I'm throwing down the freaking gauntlet right now. Anyone that responds to this guys post in any kind of flaming quality, I'll be delaying Chapter 20's release by one day for every flame post.

I'm really goddamn tired of this. "

*Natural reaction stemmed*

Yes, sir.

Doesn't Ackerson know his fellas are completely screwed? I mean, a Super MAC round through a UNSC frigate? That thing is dead meat.... I just can't bring myself to believe that he couldn't accept the fact that they're dead.

  • 07.25.2005 8:41 AM PDT
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i personally hope the arbiter dies :) i hate him.
anyways, heres my thoughts.
Forunners, humans, prophets, all lived in an alliance way back whenever.
The forunners where the strongest and taught humanity and the prophets what they knew. The prophets wanting to be the forunners favorite did things to make it seem as though humanity was going to betray them, so the forunner then shunned them and forgot about us. Then the prophets seized control of forunner ships and unleashed a barage of plasma upon the forunner homeworld, killing almost all of them. Then the prophets went out and tried to control the galaxy, thinking that the forunner where dead. I know this is crazy but hey, with mr. clark you never know whats gonna happen.

  • 07.25.2005 8:44 AM PDT

He watches every Hodgetwin video they put up...on ALL their channels. He calls them the Hodge Triplets, and considers himself the 3rd triplet. He's started talking and acting like them now. Every other line out of his mouth "Thaaas some BULLLLLL**** maaayne" or "Gotta make dem gainzzzz". He calls his biceps "gains". When he eats post-workout, he talks to his biceps, "Don't worry gains, I'm feeding you. Daddys gonna feed you, gainz *kisses biceps*".

Since it appears folks posted before me without knowing it, I'll post again.

"I'm 100% that Prophets are half-bloods. It practically says that. Mr.Clark specificaly says that the High Prophet of Law is one of the orignal experiments of the Forerunner. In fact this explains everything. Humans are pure-bloods (a.k.a. Reclaimers), and Prophets are half-bloods. Half-bloods of what though? The Flood of course (thank you Uberdog). The Flood, as we know, are extremely able to keep a host alive for a very long time (i.e. Gravemind). This explains why Prophets are not accepting Humans as part of the Covenant. The Prophets are jealous. As human-forerunner relations, it could be that humans=forerunner or just that humans are a genetic creation like the Flood. As for why Hasely and Kelly are at 01, I'm guessing thats it's.....I don't know... That limits my extent of my ranting. Oh, and if I ruined the story in anyway, sorry."

Hmmmmmm... I think you're right. What is also possible is that the Prophets were the Forerunner's experiments to see if they could be fused with the Flood.

Here's the excerpt: "The Prophet of Law had been an experimental project by the Forerunners, shortly before the destruction on their home planet, and the activation of the Halo’s.

  • 07.25.2005 9:00 AM PDT
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Posted by: Uberdawg
Doesn't Ackerson know his fellas are completely screwed? I mean, a Super MAC round through a UNSC frigate? That thing is dead meat.... I just can't bring myself to believe that he couldn't accept the fact that they're dead.
we (except mr. clark) dont know if all of them were on that ship, maybe some made it to delta halo

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  • 07.25.2005 9:10 AM PDT
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"we (except mr. clark) dont know if all of them were on that ship, maybe some made it to delta halo" posted by- ahdinh2

But didn't Ackerson just send one frigate? And if that one frigate is blown out of the sky, ( that was so elonquently put by Uberdawg ), then wouldn't any of the ordinance be flash frozen, or even caught up in a blast caused by the nuclear core going critical? ( if it did.) And if they fell to delta Halo, wouldn't they have been burned up in Halo's atmosphere?

But yet again, we can't be positivly sure.




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  • 07.25.2005 12:52 PM PDT

He watches every Hodgetwin video they put up...on ALL their channels. He calls them the Hodge Triplets, and considers himself the 3rd triplet. He's started talking and acting like them now. Every other line out of his mouth "Thaaas some BULLLLLL**** maaayne" or "Gotta make dem gainzzzz". He calls his biceps "gains". When he eats post-workout, he talks to his biceps, "Don't worry gains, I'm feeding you. Daddys gonna feed you, gainz *kisses biceps*".

"we (except mr. clark) dont know if all of them were on that ship, maybe some made it to delta halo"

That's a possibility... but Ackerson certainly acted like they were all dead and he believed it. I am quite positive he'll have a run in with Halsey, though.

  • 07.25.2005 1:16 PM PDT
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Posted by: MC gold
"we (except mr. clark) dont know if all of them were on that ship, maybe some made it to delta halo" posted by- ahdinh2

But didn't Ackerson just send one frigate? And if that one frigate is blown out of the sky, ( that was so elonquently put by Uberdawg ), then wouldn't any of the ordinance be flash frozen, or even caught up in a blast caused by the nuclear core going critical? ( if it did.) And if they fell to delta Halo, wouldn't they have been burned up in Halo's atmosphere?

But yet again, we can't be positivly sure.




well, lets think.... how did MC get on halo in Halo: CE then? huh? see...? I know there are escape pods on amost every ship. Or even, how the MC get to Delta Halo? Maybe they landed by the orbital drop pod thing. (You should THINK before you post) Thats why I am saying that Ackerson possibly (keyword: Possibly) want to run to delta halo to see if his spartan's are still alive. But i like Uberdawg's idea on how he may run into Dr. Halsey

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  • 07.25.2005 2:51 PM PDT

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i think you are better then SIR, if u keep posting ur chapters. so far u have been an amazing writer.


I think Mr Clark that Sir's story only is stickied because its bigger. I bet when you reach the 4000 post mark you'll be stickied too. As said up there by some Random person you are a better writer. So guys I think its time for some bumping

Edit: whoops did i say bumping, i meant tpplstrr frumpy. Please dont ban me mods, I love you guys.


man i said that quote long as time ago. I dont even remember when i said it. But i am right though. For the bumping part, hell no. Do not bump, even though i think u were just joking but still. I dont think Mr_Clark cares if this thread gets stickied or not, i sure as hell dont.

  • 07.25.2005 3:46 PM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War (Chapter 19 Delayed? Details pg. 93)

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Posted by: Mr_Clark
Super-Ultra-Mega-Important Chapter/Story News Below!



Forerunner(s)
Prophet(s)
Ark(s)
Pure Blood(s)
Half-Breed(s)
Halo(s)
Humanity's Betrayal
Forerunner Identity


ok, this is very interesting. So i know now that there will have to be more then jst 1 forerunner. I dont thik Mr_Clark will only put 1 badass forerunner, or will he? Right now i only know 1 prophet, and thats the Prophet of Truth. Will there be more?? I sure hope so. Where are the ARK, I think 1 is in or on earth. Maybe its on moon. But if there is more then 1 then where could be the other ARK, on Covenant Home world maybe?? I think i know who the pure bloods are, They are the forerunners, and the Half Blood could be the Humans. We know there are only 7 Halos, But are they gona get activated if the covenant arrive there, or is some 1 gona come and kill off all the covenant forces near the ARK b4 they get time to activate it. HMMMM Humanity's Betrayal. Now what the heck does that mean. Who betrays the Humanity. Does Ackerson betray them?? Forerunners identity. Interesting indeed. What are they gona look like. Like the Humans??

Sorry for the double post. I didnt have time so thats why i double posted.

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  • 07.25.2005 3:58 PM PDT
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Just to point out a few holes/new thoughts in your guy's theories.

In regards of Ackerson, who says the seven Spartan III's were the only ones in the program?

As for the one topic I said would be resolved in the coming chapter's:

Humanity's Betrayal

Who says its something that betrays humanity...and not the other way around?

  • 07.25.2005 4:46 PM PDT

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guys hi! anyway let me get to the point,plz read and understand this, in the book THE FLOOD when Gs is leadin John through the library he mentions tht the forrunners performed the flood to breed,hope u no where im going with this,b'coz when i mention this along time ago for some reason my post got blacklisted,i hope mr.clark can use this

  • 07.25.2005 5:21 PM PDT

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Humanity's Betrayal
Who says its something that betrays humanity...and not the other way around?


OH MY GOD-OH MY GOD-OH MY GOD-OH MY GOD!
I can see some fiendish plot twists coming up!

  • 07.25.2005 6:18 PM PDT
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aha! i knew humanity would be the ones doing the betrayal, hence the name humanitys betrayal

  • 07.25.2005 6:39 PM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War (Important Information Pg.106)
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nice chapter, but how could the MC be millions of light years away if the galaxy is only 100000 in diameter?

  • 07.25.2005 6:54 PM PDT
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well i wont write much becouse i cannot speel and you wont be able to read it so i think that some how earth will get saved and that truth will die after a long talking to the forruner.

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  • 07.25.2005 7:13 PM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War
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I will always place the mission first.
I will never accept defeat.
I will never quit.
I will never leave a fallen comrade.

Posted by: Uberdawg
Gah, the Arbiter, die?!?!? NOOOO!!!

If either the Arbiter, the Master Chief, or Sgt. Johnson die in this story, I'm going to have a heart attack and die myself.


then you might not want to continue reading this story uberdawg because i have a feeling one of those characters is going to die, if MC dies i will kill myself because he is the best, my favorite charcter and he is one of two spartans left, noooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Mr. Clark don't do it

oh and Mr. C is have a question from SB that he help with something, if you could pm me as soon as you can that would help, thanks

here is what i think:
forerunners=pure bloods
prophets=half breeds
humanity's betrayal=humans turn on the elites, hunters, and grunts after they both kill the flood and prophets or Dr. Halsey and Kelly are the betrayers

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  • 07.26.2005 7:38 AM PDT
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All this is amazing. And Humanity's Betrail? Well I think MC will betray the Humans I don't know why.... but you never know. PM me when the next chapter is out.

  • 07.26.2005 8:02 AM PDT
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I think:

Forerunners = Pure-Blood
Prophets = Half-Breed
Humanity = Half-Breed

Maybe in the beginning the forerunners held fights between Prophets and Humans. The Humans would always win so the prophets betrayed the forerunners. When the forerunners went and told the prophets to come back, the humans left thinking the forerunners like the prophets the most. When niether would come back, and the flood situation got out of control, they activated the Halos. They then re-made Humanity and the Prophets and sent them to Earth and to the Prophets homeworld (Respectively), unbeknowest to them Elites were already there. They split them up so they could eventually have bigger Galactic battles. The Forerunners wanted both Humans and Prophets to find the halos and learn of the ark which is on the forerunner homeworld. Either the prophets and the humans would have to come together again if they both wanted to survive, or the stronger race would make to the forerunner homeworld and survive.



Now, I know this rant is WAY off. But it was fun to do.
I thought of this up when someone mention the level Sanctuary. I thought of other levels like Warlock and it's a battle arena.

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  • 07.26.2005 8:54 AM PDT
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Kay, thats only another theory that MIGHT be discredited when the new chapter comes out, or in fact it may be the truth, and Adihn2 or however the heck you spell that, I KNOW that Unsc ships carry life pods, but does the flood actually know how to use them, they know how to opperate vehicals and fire hand-held weapons, but do they know how to key in the activation sequence that would send the pods?

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Posted by: MC gold
Kay, thats only another theory that MIGHT be discredited when the new chapter comes out, or in fact it may be the truth, and Adihn2 or however the heck you spell that, I KNOW that Unsc ships carry life pods, but does the flood actually know how to use them, they know how to opperate vehicals and fire hand-held weapons, but do they know how to key in the activation sequence that would send the pods?

I never said anything about the flood, I said ackerson may go to delta halo to see if his spartans III's may have made it on to delta halo.

  • 07.26.2005 10:08 AM PDT
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Wasn't Delta Halo destroyed? And Ackerson's S-III's flood infected?

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  • 07.26.2005 11:17 AM PDT