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Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War

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man i hate the subject English. But yo clark when is the Chapter 20 comming out?? any leeds or hints.

  • 08.01.2005 1:28 PM PDT

I share pies.

The 6 th HP book was very disappointing in my opinion, you knew everything that was gonna happen.

  • 08.01.2005 1:51 PM PDT
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Posted by: Scorptank
I don't know about that. The consonances (did I use that word correctly?) in English are very much different from German ones. For example, if you say 'straße' (street) in German, the way you pronounce the first 'S' is very different from anything you might hear in English.

Consonants. But you were very close. :D.

Anyways, isn't that to be expected? I mean, they're totally different languages afterall.

  • 08.01.2005 3:59 PM PDT
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Im Longing for new chapter.

  • 08.01.2005 5:20 PM PDT
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well from my understanding German and English are similiar by the way you say stuff. not pronouncing things but with the style of speaking. we both speak more gutoral i.e. pronouncing the whole words and such. this is unlike french that often blend words together and flows from one word to another often not pronouncing the whole word

sry if i butchered that but that was kinda how i was explained it by a guy who speaks a few languages

  • 08.02.2005 6:13 AM PDT
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Where did Atoning Deviant come from in the last Chapter(19)... I know he is a monitor but where is he in the story before 19?

  • 08.02.2005 6:48 AM PDT
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Posted by: Servant_of_Jesus
Where did Atoning Deviant come from in the last Chapter(19)... I know he is a monitor but where is he in the story before 19?


Atoning Deviant was last seen in Chapter 14, the final Covenant history chapter that covered the discovery of Halo Installation 01. Gao Kinlumee encounters the monitor after accidentally releasing the Flood.

  • 08.02.2005 10:23 AM PDT
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Thanks Clark.... also... any info on when the next chapter might be out

  • 08.02.2005 10:36 AM PDT
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DAMN.........DAMN DAMN DAMN..........i discovered this post today and it has taken me hours to read it all, i am truley impressed with this whole story and i cant wait to read the next chapters. I mean u must haved ace'd english in school, i mean u could basically work for bungie, its like u helped create the story of halo u made everything fit together perfectly.

  • 08.02.2005 1:25 PM PDT
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keep up the good work
can't wait for chapter 20

btw is the 6th book of harry potter good i am considering buying it

  • 08.02.2005 6:35 PM PDT
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I've never read the Harry Potter books, but most people I know say it was pretty good, better than Book 5 whatever that means.

I am somewhat worried that people are using the list of terms and creatures and drawing comparisons to Harry Potter. Just remember that I am writing Halo here, not mystical wizard stuff.

  • 08.02.2005 7:16 PM PDT
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lol wizerd stuff thats funny

  • 08.02.2005 7:19 PM PDT
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Thanks, Halo3plzzz ;-)

Posted by: Toco8804
Well, from my understanding German and English are similiar by the way you say stuff. not pronouncing things but with the style of speaking. we both speak more gutoral i.e. pronouncing the whole words and such. this is unlike french that often blend words together and flows from one word to another often not pronouncing the whole word.


True, but I find French the most elegant of languages. Like you said; it blends words together and flows from one word to the other. I love that. It's so... elegant.

  • 08.03.2005 7:33 AM PDT
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I will always place the mission first.
I will never accept defeat.
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Mr. Clark can you tell me what your gamertag is again, i know i have asked you 2 times before this, but my mom keeps throwing the paper away that has your gamertag on it and i can't find it in the previous pages, thanks

i can't wait until your next chapter. it's going to be awesome

Mr. Clark do you play Tom Clancy games?

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It has beeen a long time since i have posted or even been online. So chapter 19 was great mr. clark keep up the good work.

IMO the 6th harry potter was the worst of the series. It had a bunch of romance and -blam!-. I was like c'mon their is a war where is the death and destruction. I would wait and borrow it from a friend and not waste 15-20 bucks on it.

  • 08.03.2005 11:36 AM PDT

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ok guys back on topic. enough Harry pot head talk. So what do u think will happen in the next chapter. What do u guys think will happenm to the remaining spartans?

[Edited on 8/3/2005]

  • 08.03.2005 12:00 PM PDT
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well i would beat there will be a huge space battle and some more large ground battles where the cheif help out the elites on there home world

  • 08.03.2005 2:18 PM PDT
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Posted by: lexy_1849
I always thought English related to Latin, but English is actually closer to the German lanuage, when you think about it the german and English language is sharper than maybe French. - The words are slurred if you get what i mean.

English is a Gemanic language.The languages French,Romanian,Italian,Portugese and Spanish are Romance languages,and are heavily based on Latin.

Sorry about jumping off topic, just could'nt resist.

[Edited on 8/3/2005]

  • 08.03.2005 3:49 PM PDT
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Posted by: Master Chief 719
Mr. Clark can you tell me what your gamertag is again, i know i have asked you 2 times before this, but my mom keeps throwing the paper away that has your gamertag on it and i can't find it in the previous pages, thanks

i can't wait until your next chapter. it's going to be awesome

Mr. Clark do you play Tom Clancy games?


My GamerTag = Tatewaki Kuno

I play a lot of Splinter Cell: Chaos Theory. Mostly co-op though. I'm waiting for the new co-op maps to drop before I get back into it. A couple friends and I played the game almost religiously.

Chapter 20 is moving along nicely I'd say. There's going to be a tiny tiny tiny tiny return to Earth, covering the departure of Keyes and the rest of the Marines aboard the Lewis Puller. Mostly though, this chapter will have an extreme focus on the Master Chief and the Arbiter, with momentary looks at Dr. Halsey's group, the Prophet of Truth and the Forerunner.

  • 08.03.2005 5:42 PM PDT
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good to know! cant wait for it

  • 08.03.2005 5:45 PM PDT
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yay cant wait.

  • 08.03.2005 7:24 PM PDT
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This is good where did you find it.

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Posted by: TWINK21
It has beeen a long time since i have posted or even been online. So chapter 19 was great mr. clark keep up the good work.

IMO the 6th harry potter was the worst of the series. It had a bunch of romance and -blam!-. I was like c'mon their is a war where is the death and destruction. I would wait and borrow it from a friend and not waste 15-20 bucks on it.

Apparently you've never been 16. Either that, or your hormones were wack. Teenagers fall in love, that's how it works. I think Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione was needed to make the story more realistic. You're too used to Halo.

Anyways, back on topic. I can't wait for the next chapter. Good ol' MC/Arbiter goodness. I wonder what the Forerunner will do to the Prophet of Truth. Oh yeah, and I still think that the Grand High Prophet of Law was a lab experiment by the Forerunners. I am curious as to how they survived the Halo explosion though. I guess I'll just wait and see.

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  • 08.03.2005 7:44 PM PDT

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nice, so more focus on the forerunners eh. that is awsome. cant wait.

  • 08.03.2005 10:49 PM PDT