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Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War
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Posted by: halo2stu
Posted by: Elite 44
Yes, all Spartans have olive green armour.


nope wrong. fred has red armor. and so does kelly. and lee had blue armor.

sorry incorrect, they have the same armor, because in the books it said that the spartans where annoyed that Dr. Hasley could distinguish them, if they all had different armor especially if they had such obviuse color difference it would be easy to tell them apart. and also it would be increadably hard to have any kind of camo if your freaken red!

[Edited on 8/12/2005]

  • 08.12.2005 8:29 AM PDT

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Posted by: s14p5mm
Posted by: halo2stu
Posted by: Elite 44
Yes, all Spartans have olive green armour.


nope wrong. fred has red armor. and so does kelly. and lee had blue armor.

sorry incorrect, they have the same armor, because in the books it said that the spartans where annoyed that Dr. Hasley could distinguish them, if they all had different armor especially if they had such obviuse color difference it would be easy to tell them apart. and also it would be increadably hard to have any kind of camo if your freaken red!


Damn Straight. They are just part of different teams - Red team, Blue team and Green team. (well most of the time.)

  • 08.12.2005 3:25 PM PDT

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By the way Mr.Clark, are you happy with the decision where you post a link for your story into that new stickied thread?

I think it will reduce the need for people to bump alot more. = good thing.

  • 08.12.2005 4:02 PM PDT
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i guess its my fault that this armor colored madness started so im here to say sorry

  • 08.12.2005 10:09 PM PDT

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dont worry about it. just a misconception. anyways cant wait for chapter, -blam!- what was it 22 or 23?? i do know the date just cant remember the chapter for some reason. Maybe its too late in the night.

  • 08.12.2005 10:38 PM PDT

I share pies.

When you say Monday do you mean 2 days from now?
Because it's SAturday and i thought we were a week overdue lol.

  • 08.13.2005 7:36 AM PDT
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I will always place the mission first.
I will never accept defeat.
I will never quit.
I will never leave a fallen comrade.

all the spartans had the same color armor, look at the cover of the Fall of Reach

  • 08.13.2005 10:08 AM PDT
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*grumble* *grumble*

Because of a certain someone who decided to end their latest chapter in a certain manner, I have been forced to push myself ahead and add a fair bit of my planned stuff for Chapter 21, and put it into Chapter 20.

The ending of said person's latest chapter was in such an amazingly similarity to how I planned mine, when I read the end of it, I sat there and wondered if I was dreaming.

Anyways, now I'm reworking things, looking around and trying to come up with a better way to end this chapter. As such I'll be throwing in at least the first seven or so pages of what I planned for Chapter 21. This of course means I'm gonna have to delay releasing Chapter 20, only till Wednesday I'd imagine.

I'm doing this mainly because I do not like to copy anybodies story. Even though I had planned for my chapter to end in this manner before I knew of this other person's ending, I would still feel like a dirty cheat who was ripping off this other person's story. So to keep this story fresh and original, while there will obviously be a small similarity between the instance occurring in the chapter and this other person's chapter, I will do my best to make it nearly original.

I won't say who it is, mainly because I want to keep you all locked into suspense, and hey, maybe you'll branch out and read some other fics floating around just to try and see if you might find the chapter I'm talking about.

All I'll say is that this person doesn't get the attention they deserve, and I greatly respect them as a writer! Haha, considering I am barely able to keep up with everyone's stories you're gonna be hard pressed finding who I'm talking about. It doesn't matter if I've written in this person's thread either, it doesn't mean I don't watch them. It just means I'm super lazy and never actually post.

So, whatever, it means a two day delay at the least while I figure out exactly how I'll be restructuring everything. Check back on Wednesday and I should have it all wrapped up. Remember, this is a Master Chief/Arbiter intensive chapter, with plenty of dialogue. PLENTY! They're my favorite to write, but also the hardest!

  • 08.13.2005 4:13 PM PDT
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i love delays!

  • 08.13.2005 7:23 PM PDT
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As much as i would love to be a Spartan, the concept is a bit farfetched, though not unreachable even today.
And democratic proceedings can really be a double edged sword.
On the proper topic, delays, hurray, they make things better.
Hunger is the best sauce.

  • 08.13.2005 7:55 PM PDT

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I got his sarcasm...one person has to implement sarcasm and then you get a pile of terrorist chipmunks crashing your party, not fun at all..

That means we have more time to ponder of what will happen next. Oh well.

  • 08.13.2005 8:20 PM PDT
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as long as you mr clark think you did a good job on the chapter the it will be great and i say u take as long as you need to

  • 08.13.2005 8:28 PM PDT

He watches every Hodgetwin video they put up...on ALL their channels. He calls them the Hodge Triplets, and considers himself the 3rd triplet. He's started talking and acting like them now. Every other line out of his mouth "Thaaas some BULLLLLL**** maaayne" or "Gotta make dem gainzzzz". He calls his biceps "gains". When he eats post-workout, he talks to his biceps, "Don't worry gains, I'm feeding you. Daddys gonna feed you, gainz *kisses biceps*".

All I'll say is that this person doesn't get the attention they deserve, and I greatly respect them as a writer! Haha, considering I am barely able to keep up with everyone's stories you're gonna be hard pressed finding who I'm talking about. It doesn't matter if I've written in this person's thread either, it doesn't mean I don't watch them. It just means I'm super lazy and never actually post.

Care to take guesses? If Clark respects the person who is writing and they don't get the attention they deserve, and he likely hasn't posted in their topic then it's gotta be one of the smaller fanfictions (since Sir Brilliant's is so freakin' gigantic). I PMed Clark a while back asking him to read my fanfiction... And my fanfiction isn't too big... But I certainly doubt it's mine. I can't imagine it ending in the same way. I would doubt that it's Kilroy's, because his is about the Forerunners. Hellslayer's, perhaps? Any other suggestions?

But if it was me... I weep for all of us, because of my silliness Mr. Clark is delaying his great chapter 20... many apologies if it was me. Oh well, I can't wait for Chapter 20, Mr. Clark! I'm dyin' for it! Oh, and Truth is still screwed :P

  • 08.13.2005 9:05 PM PDT

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i think it was brilliant. but who knows. well Mr_Clark take ur time.

  • 08.13.2005 9:38 PM PDT
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My guess is the part of Uberdawgs when the Arbiter and the Master Chief walk down a hall and it goes completely silent.

  • 08.13.2005 10:04 PM PDT

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holy crud, soulguard or scorptank. ok i will stop taking guesses. well i cant wait for ur chapter but i have no other choice so all i can say is take ur time and make it the best as possible.

  • 08.13.2005 10:49 PM PDT
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too many fanfics anyways but for some reason on bungie.net for me everything is all big and chunky, u know like the word sizing . i wonder whuts wrong with my computer though

but *chuckles* this computer of mine has had a virus two time already and i had to completely kill the system to restart the whole thingy if anyone can help me tell me if im screwed tell me that too

o yeah mr clark i dont want to be nosy but what are the colors of the spartans armor in your opinion???

  • 08.14.2005 3:50 AM PDT
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I will always place the mission first.
I will never accept defeat.
I will never quit.
I will never leave a fallen comrade.

i don't think it is Brilliant's because he hasn't released a new chapter in a while and he is really popular for his fan fic like Mr. Clark and Mr. Clark said it was some one that isn't really known for their fan fic

Mr.Clark is sent you a friend request a few days ago.

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  • 08.14.2005 10:31 AM PDT
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It's Soulguards story because his latest chapter came out Friday and Mr.Clark doesn't post in it much. Another thing that supports my theory is that Soulguards chapter talks about the Elite home world and two special people arriving that are not expected. I won't go into much detail about the chapter but that I have a feeling how Clarks story will be.

If you don't believe me go read the latest chapter of Soulguard and compare it to how Mr.Clarks story is heading.

P.S. I can't wait till the next chapter :)

  • 08.14.2005 10:56 AM PDT
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Mr_clark

It's so obvious its Scorptanks or Soulguards.
*Thinks more...*
Wait no way you mean you were going to have it like The Silky Carp's ending OMFG!?!?

  • 08.14.2005 11:08 AM PDT
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Soulguard, Scorptank or Silky Carp.
Those are damn fine writers, and are less advertised than i.e Sir_B's, but then again, they've included their storys later, but will eventually rise like phoenixs'!!!

Go and read...

i doubt col, that Clark is taking similar ending with Silky. Nope, it would left our heros without any kind of good battles and plot twists. (but then again...)

I'll wait. PM when it's out, Mr_Clark.


-HaloXenon-

  • 08.14.2005 11:47 AM PDT

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I wonder whose ending is simular.........yet another riddle for us to ponder over!

  • 08.14.2005 3:47 PM PDT
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i would bet ten $$$$$$ its scorpian tank becouse there storys are simaler i think

  • 08.14.2005 7:41 PM PDT
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I doubt it is Scorptank he has a lot of people posting in his thread and he only wrote 13 chapters I think it is SoulGuard because the next chapter they are going to elite homeworld and the Arbiter, Chief, and that other elite are probably going to the Inner Sanctum, probably to have trails just like in SoulGuards except that was a grunt and a marine

  • 08.15.2005 4:25 AM PDT
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I agree, Ripfang. Scorptank's story ends with the Spartan-IIIs and the Flood etc. And his story is beginning to center around Halo 01, while Mr_Clark's story (and Soulguard's) are beginning to center around Dorenth/Jogrennilee (name it the way you want) so... Scorptank sounds highly unlikely... but... wait... some things do seem similar. I dunno... go read them yourself....

  • 08.15.2005 6:23 AM PDT