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Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War

"It's like a cake filled with pies." -Pete "Mango" Parsons

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every 1 has their own oppinion. u cant go and say that so and so fanfic sucks because that is ur oppinion. Oppinions doesnt make something suck or makes some else's story better then the other person. it totally depends on a person and what type of story he or she likes. I started reading uberdawgs fanfic but then i ran out of time reading it. i just dont have that much time anymore because i work now and that takes a lot of time off my hands. Thats why i only have time to read only 1 fanfic. sorry uberdawg for not reading ur fanfic anymore but its just that i dont have much time anymore. o and Mr_Clark take ur time.

  • 08.18.2005 11:00 AM PDT
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every 1 has their own oppinion. u cant go and say that so and so fanfic sucks because that is ur oppinion. Oppinions doesnt make something suck or makes some else's story better then the other person

no really? my whole post was my opinion smart one. i wasnt trying to make it fact or anything. i wasnt trying to say " o my opinion is that the other fanfics suck, so you guys have to all think that too".

  • 08.18.2005 11:10 AM PDT

"It's like a cake filled with pies." -Pete "Mango" Parsons

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dude dont get smart with me. i never pointed that post to a specific person. so dont take it personally.

  • 08.18.2005 7:44 PM PDT
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Well, Mr Bojanglez, I suppose everyone's entitled to give their opinions, and no one is being forced to like every piece of fanfiction. But I suppose that bringing an opinion in an intelligent and mature way is something you should consider.

And if you post an opinion, you can expect a reply to it, don't be mad at ODST1125 because he replies to opinions in general.

  • 08.19.2005 6:11 AM PDT
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Hey man thats really good, as someone said earlier its cool how you use some of Eric's references and stuff. just make sure u get the chief to fight with the spartans later on, cuz i don't want another game where the other spartans are still alive and there are no signs of them

  • 08.19.2005 6:30 AM PDT
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But I suppose that bringing an opinion in an intelligent and mature way is something you should consider.

really? all i said was that the only fanfictions that are worth reading are clarks and uberdawgs. i stated my opinion. i dont see how you find it as unintelligent and immature.

o, my bad, the only reason i was "smart" with you is because your whole post was just stating the obvious.

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  • 08.19.2005 7:35 AM PDT

I share pies.

I've just finished reading Uberdawg's fanfic and it's very good.
I think he set it where no other fanfic has ventured before, an Elite sqaud during the start of the backstabbing.

  • 08.19.2005 7:49 AM PDT

He watches every Hodgetwin video they put up...on ALL their channels. He calls them the Hodge Triplets, and considers himself the 3rd triplet. He's started talking and acting like them now. Every other line out of his mouth "Thaaas some BULLLLLL**** maaayne" or "Gotta make dem gainzzzz". He calls his biceps "gains". When he eats post-workout, he talks to his biceps, "Don't worry gains, I'm feeding you. Daddys gonna feed you, gainz *kisses biceps*".

Well if ya just read it, Lexy, then by golly, post!

However, this topic isn't about my fanfiction, it's about Mr. Clark's. And if I don't get Mr. Clark's soon... things will break. I'm fixin' to die over here.

Clark, I want you to take your time, but I also want you to hurry up. So do both. Somehow. Don't ask.

  • 08.19.2005 5:00 PM PDT

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Posted by: Uberdawg

Clark, I want you to take your time, but I also want you to hurry up. So do both. Somehow. Don't ask.


couldn't have said it better myself ;)

  • 08.19.2005 8:28 PM PDT
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yes im going to exploid if i dont get some sort of news and or story sone but i im shere it will be worth it

  • 08.19.2005 8:43 PM PDT

"It's like a cake filled with pies." -Pete "Mango" Parsons

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haha am i the only 1 with patience. well like i have said million times b4 take ur time.

  • 08.20.2005 10:56 AM PDT
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well then you should have to wait for ever then hahahahahahahahahahahaahah above poster would then go insaine

  • 08.20.2005 12:49 PM PDT

"It's like a cake filled with pies." -Pete "Mango" Parsons

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nahh dude, its just the more u wait the better the anticipation there will be.

  • 08.20.2005 3:39 PM PDT
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Err, awkward hello here. Sorry for vanishing like that, but my supposed days off became nothing but full-blown nightmares filled with aggravation and other horrible depressing things. This is the first time in awhile that I've had a chance to hop on my lovely little laptop here.

Chapter 20, I haven't touched it in three days.....

Yeah I know, I'm a horrible person. Now for my excuse:

I'm not one to go into large orated versions of events (insert scoffing noise here) and I will keep the trend going. Basically my free time is literally down to about microscopic proportions. I wanted to go pick up Darkwatch the other day, I even drove by the EB that housed my copy, but I didn't have the time to stop. It was a terrible torturous event that I'm sure will stain my mind for years to come.

I'm very drowsy right now so forgive any spelling mistakes, though I'm thinking I'll be fine.

I should have some free time on Monday and hopefully I can wrap it up and post on Tuesday. I hope I hope I hope I can!

  • 08.21.2005 4:32 AM PDT
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you horrible person you!

  • 08.21.2005 6:33 AM PDT

"It's like a cake filled with pies." -Pete "Mango" Parsons

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hey man if other things are getting in the way that are more important then the fanfic then take care of them first. this is something u do for fun so dont force ur self to do something that will hurt ur health.

  • 08.21.2005 3:05 PM PDT
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IHOPEIHOPEIHOPE YOU CAN TOO! Ok, so back to business. Once again take your time, quality over quantity. If you have time, swing by EB again, Darkwatch is pretty sweet. I'll check back on Wednesday in hopes of a chapter. Maybe I'll work on my FF and post it by Weds . . . Ok, take your time! I might confuse my story with yours if I'm not careful! J/K, but can any1 refresh me real fast on whats going onin the story, no offense, but it's been just a little too long Clark . . .


(Wow, am I a hypocrite or what?)

  • 08.21.2005 3:44 PM PDT
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a lot of stuff happened but the most intresting parts are;
sarge saves jan from flood
truth is an a mysterious planet and is being interrogated by a forerunner
Dr.Halsey and kelly are talking to the first monitor in installation 01
and the biggest Arbiter and Chief are going to elite homeworld and Arbiter is going to get major elite support with all the aliance stuff
those are i think the big things that happened so far if i forgot one please tell me

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  • 08.22.2005 12:16 PM PDT
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I'm a stickler so I'll post an even bigger synopsis.

Earth has been invaded by the Flood. Another Gravemind led the Flood forces as they soon spread throughout Africa, Australia, and North and South America.

Sergeant Johnson and two squads of Marines discovered the copy of Gravemind. The Flood leader may have looked like the previous iteration of Gravemind that Johnson fought on Honor Without Mercy, but it had no knowledge of Johnson.

Jan was deployed in a local military hospital, coincidentally the same hospital that Will, Fred, and Linda were stationed at. The Flood soon attacked the hospital, and despite a valiant effort, the Marines were overrun. Jan remembered too late that the other Spartan 2.0's were stationed there, and when she went to check up on them, she was ambushed by the Flood-infected Spartans. Due to the grievous injuries suffered by their near-death experience on the Malta and Athens stations, the Spartans were weak. Jan was able to survive their ambush because of this, and later killed all three Spartans.

Sergeant Johnson received a transmission from Jan and left the wreckage of New Mombasa to assist her. Despite losing his arm for the second time, Johnson still managed to rescue Jan, despite another Flood assault. Jan had not escaped uninjured, and Johnson took her back to the Lewis Puller, the carrier that was operated by Miranda Keyes. While there Johnson filled Captain Keyes in about what happened on Earth, and before he could finish Keyes was informed that Fleet Admiral Hood was on board the ship and requesting that he speak to her.

Hood gave Captain Keyes a disc containing the coordinates of the Sangheili homeworld, as well as the Covenant home world, Danrun. He explained to her that the Flood were too numerous to stop, and it would be only a matter of time before Earth would be finished. Hood revealed an ONI plan to evacuate Earth and retreat to a corner of the galaxy to hopefully hide from the Flood and Covenant, where they would hopefully be able to last while the Master Chief and the Arbiter tried to finish off the Covenant.

Captain Keyes was then ordered by Lord Hood to follow the Master Chief, thereby guaranteeing that even if humanity was overrun on Earth, there was a chance that they would survive with their hopes pinned on Keyes' crew. Hood and General Strauss were the only soldiers that actually knew of the true orders that were delivered to Keyes. Once they had departed the two would tell the other Admiralty and ONI that the Lewis Puller had been assigned the task of hunting down the fugitive Colonel Ackerson.

The Master Chief and the Arbiter are now heading to Silone after destroying a Brute Fleet that had been assigned the task of intercepting the Attrition, a ship piloted by Lan 'Eranumee, a pilot that had been fighting on Danrun, now tasked with informing the Elders on Silone about the betrayal of the Prophets.

Meanwhile the Prophet of Truth is stranded on the Prophet's home world, being interrogated by what Truth described as a Forerunner.

Finally, Dr. Halsey and Kelly, have emerged from Slip Space and found a deserted Forerunner installation (not a Halo). They have apparently been galavanting around, as in their company is Atoning Deviant, monitor of Halo Installation 01. Halsey informs the monitor that if it helps them with the Forerunner devices and security measures in the installation, she will help him with his containment problems. Whether this means she will be helping the monitor with the Flood outbreak on Installation 01 that was seen in the final Covenant history chapter, or perhaps some other containment issue remains to be seen.

That's about it I think.

I've been working on Chapter 20, and I'd just like to make the odd statement that, once the chapter has been finished, I would ask everyone to not speculate on certain things that will be revealed about the Forerunner.

I'm not sure if anyone will actually link some of the hints together given in this chapter regarding the Forerunner, but some of you are pretty clever, so I'm not sure. That said, since the true origins of the Prophets/Forerunner history are my main secret in this story, I'd rather like everyone to keep their speculation to themselves, or at least keep it limited to PM's to me. I will not under any circumstances actually tell you if any of your guesses are correct, but I might throw you a bone or two.

  • 08.22.2005 4:39 PM PDT
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Thanks, always nice to hear about someone that braved my earlier efforts.

Just a wee update to the other post. Inside Chapter 20 is another occurrance I'm sure you've all been looking forward to.

I will reveal a certain someone's real name. Shouldn't be too hard to guess who that's going to be.

Also, I still stand by my belief that the road I've taken with the Forerunners is truly and wholly original. I've done my best to scour other sites and everything that catalogue people's theories and so far I think I'm in the clear. I guess this is one of the reasons I'm content to take my time with the story. I'm not too worried about someone else coming along and posting a nigh-identicle theory to mine, and beating me to the punch.

  • 08.22.2005 5:17 PM PDT

"It's like a cake filled with pies." -Pete "Mango" Parsons

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hmm so u will reveal the name of arbiter?? thats cool. so can u still make the wednesday deadline or what. nonetheless take ur time

  • 08.22.2005 5:48 PM PDT

He watches every Hodgetwin video they put up...on ALL their channels. He calls them the Hodge Triplets, and considers himself the 3rd triplet. He's started talking and acting like them now. Every other line out of his mouth "Thaaas some BULLLLLL**** maaayne" or "Gotta make dem gainzzzz". He calls his biceps "gains". When he eats post-workout, he talks to his biceps, "Don't worry gains, I'm feeding you. Daddys gonna feed you, gainz *kisses biceps*".

*slowly flops around like fish out of water* kill.... for..... chapter....... guh......... every time you put another hint in, Clark, the more I want that darn chapter of yours.

  • 08.22.2005 7:35 PM PDT

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Nice. I'm still as giddy as I was when I first started reading this story.
Can't wait. *^_^*

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  • 08.22.2005 8:17 PM PDT

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Hey everyone, I´m on holiday right now, and I´m using this funny Spanish keyboard where all the symbols are in different places.

Just thought I´d check in on this thread. Can´t wait till chapter 20!

  • 08.23.2005 1:49 AM PDT