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Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War

"It's like a cake filled with pies." -Pete "Mango" Parsons

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yeah right click on the file and then go to open as notepad. that might do it.

  • 08.26.2005 8:13 PM PDT

He watches every Hodgetwin video they put up...on ALL their channels. He calls them the Hodge Triplets, and considers himself the 3rd triplet. He's started talking and acting like them now. Every other line out of his mouth "Thaaas some BULLLLLL**** maaayne" or "Gotta make dem gainzzzz". He calls his biceps "gains". When he eats post-workout, he talks to his biceps, "Don't worry gains, I'm feeding you. Daddys gonna feed you, gainz *kisses biceps*".

Tell me you -blam!- printed the -blam!- thing out... I'm going to -blam!- cry myself to sleep if I don't get that -blam!- chapter... -blam!-...

  • 08.26.2005 9:16 PM PDT

"It's like a cake filled with pies." -Pete "Mango" Parsons

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haha chill uberdawg. hopefully u are just joking if not then u have problems lol. well damn what can we say. everything bad is happening to Mr_Clark and we just cant do anything about it but support him.

  • 08.26.2005 9:22 PM PDT
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There is nothing that can cause such thigh stabbing rage as a computer that does not do as it is told.

  • 08.26.2005 10:55 PM PDT
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if you cant get it to open you should send it to one of us to try and get it..... ill do whatever i can to get that -blam!- open

  • 08.26.2005 11:02 PM PDT
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He must be so accurate to the Halo Bible that Bungie is sabotaging(sp?) him!

Good luck Mr_Clark.

  • 08.27.2005 12:47 AM PDT

If a deaf kid swears, does he get his hands washed with soap?

why are The Guardians doing everything possible to prevent the release of this chapter?!?!...!

  • 08.27.2005 12:49 AM PDT
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LINK TO CHAPTER 20! GO HERE TO READ THE NEWEST CHAPTER!

I will post the chapter on the forums and send the PM's later today. I need sleep, my head feels like I've developed a tumor or something.


glurururururghhhhh.

  • 08.27.2005 7:12 AM PDT
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Great, its out! I had a bit of a scare when it said that the link was outdated, but I refreshed and everything worked properly. Anyways I'm off to read.

  • 08.27.2005 7:23 AM PDT
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sornos it says the same for me but refreshing does not do 1 thing some 1 helpppppppppp

sornos thanks, Mr.Clark great chapter as usual

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  • 08.27.2005 7:28 AM PDT
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Wow, that's quite a chapter. As it appears that the Flood are not the .....I will refrain from wild speculations. Anyways, Intelo, go to Fanfiction.net, and search for Mr.Clark. Click on this Fanfic, and go to chapter Twenty. If that does not work, this is the URL I used : here.
Edit: Just one little point about the Forerunner; it appears they are more sinister than the Oracles let on...

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  • 08.27.2005 8:00 AM PDT

I share pies.

it doesn't work... :(

EDIT:

Sweet.

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  • 08.27.2005 9:04 AM PDT
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That. Was. AWESOME!. Jeez Clark, I'm blown away by that. It took you a while, but it paid off. And now that that is out, I can focus more clearly on my senior project. And do you know what it is?!? A Fanfic. Gotta Go now. More work for my 3rd chapter now.

  • 08.27.2005 9:05 AM PDT
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Great Chapter Mr. Clark. Can't wait for the next one.

  • 08.27.2005 11:22 AM PDT
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This is the same as the review on fanfiction.net, but I just though I'd make my appearance here as well, or I might disappear from the PM list.

Well... what is there to say? Something original... hmm.... Well, once again you prove yourself to be a true plot-manager. You keep everything under tight control while the story continues, the friendship between John and Aonlum, just well done. No loose plot twists, but everything seems to come together.
I love how sinister you make the Master Chief appear before the Sangheili, realistic. The coolness of a soldier, and a Spartan-II at that. Another superb chapter, I expected to see nothing less, I am already looking forward to the next. You live up to the title of 'Mr', Mr_Clark.

  • 08.27.2005 11:41 AM PDT
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He who makes a beast out of himself, gets rid of the pain of being a man.

Another extremely well written chapter; The story definitely had a good feel to it in that chapter, and I loved that Truth was scared blam!-less. The Arb-er, Aonlum was awesome in front of the Council when he threw off his ceremonial armor and got in to Forsun's face. The Master Chief and Aonlum seem to be getting along quite well; and it was quite comical when one of the elites tried to take down the Chief and got beat down. Well I can't wait for the next chapter to come out, and hopefully it won't take as long to get out as this chapter did. Anyways good luck Mr. Clark and keep writing...

  • 08.27.2005 12:17 PM PDT

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Rember the days when people thought Halo 2 would come out on August 24th and DLC would come on Feb 9. Yeah those were the days.

NRS High School

Wow! That was Great Clark. If you ever write a non-fanfiction book, I'm so buying it.

  • 08.27.2005 12:38 PM PDT
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yea with Caster Meaf!

  • 08.27.2005 1:41 PM PDT
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Bungie Crossword Solver.
UNSCDF Supreme Commander

★★★★★
In terms of FPS Games:
PC > Xbox360, PC > PS3.

YEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSS!!!!

  • 08.27.2005 1:46 PM PDT
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Just a quick update before I disappear again.

The station Halsey and Kelly are in is of course the exact same station the Covenant discovered back in the Second Covenant History Chapter. Remember the Forerunner A.I they discovered? Exact same one. I figure the line about the two Elite bodies in the room would have tipped some people off.

Yes the hints about the Forerunner are obscure, I'll point out that some of Halsey's lines and the Prophet of Truth's are the biggest ones out there.

I really am going to try and finish Chapter 21 as quickly as possible. The longer than anticipated wait for Chapter 20 was annoying for myself, and I can imagine it was even worse for you guys.

It was indeed Soulguard's fanfic "If I were your hero". One of his latest chapters ended with Halsey and another Elite encountering a Forerunner A.I. Chapter 20 had already been planned to end in much the same manner, and I was remiss at first about how to alter my own chapter to rectify any similarities. In the end I added a bit as well as the scene with Truth and the Forerunner.

As for the computer problem last night, I thank you all profusely for the assistance, but nothing worked, and I was quite depressed as I trudged off to work. When I got home I jumped onto the desktop pc and to my surprise I found a Chapter 20 file sitting there. Granted it was only half done, but it was certainly better than having to rewrite the entire damn chapter.

I did it in about 6 hours, so obviously there's likely to be several problems in there. It was shorter than the first version as well, but I think its a little more sound than the original chapter.

That's about it I think. I'll post the chapter on the forums and send the PM's later tonight I'd imagine.

  • 08.27.2005 2:10 PM PDT
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I will always place the mission first.
I will never accept defeat.
I will never quit.
I will never leave a fallen comrade.

The link wont work, so it looks like I am going have to wait, I am so angry right now, I am going to take my anger out playing Halo.

  • 08.27.2005 2:29 PM PDT

He watches every Hodgetwin video they put up...on ALL their channels. He calls them the Hodge Triplets, and considers himself the 3rd triplet. He's started talking and acting like them now. Every other line out of his mouth "Thaaas some BULLLLLL**** maaayne" or "Gotta make dem gainzzzz". He calls his biceps "gains". When he eats post-workout, he talks to his biceps, "Don't worry gains, I'm feeding you. Daddys gonna feed you, gainz *kisses biceps*".

Amazing, brilliant, and awesome are the three words that come to mind once again, Mr. Clark. Though I find the true greatness of your writing to be displayed the most in dealing with the Arbiter, I can hardly even think about that when I know of all the huge plot developements having to do with the Prophet of Truth and Halsey. Great stuff.

  • 08.27.2005 5:28 PM PDT