- last post: 01.01.0001 12:00 AM PDT
This is the same as the review on fanfiction.net, but I just though I'd make my appearance here as well, or I might disappear from the PM list.
Well... what is there to say? Something original... hmm.... Well, once again you prove yourself to be a true plot-manager. You keep everything under tight control while the story continues, the friendship between John and Aonlum, just well done. No loose plot twists, but everything seems to come together.
I love how sinister you make the Master Chief appear before the Sangheili, realistic. The coolness of a soldier, and a Spartan-II at that. Another superb chapter, I expected to see nothing less, I am already looking forward to the next. You live up to the title of 'Mr', Mr_Clark.