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Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War
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Posted by: Commander Watson
..........This Sucks! I hate it when writers dont give the chapters when they say they are!


Posted by: Mr_Clark
I'll try to finish Chapter 21 for Sunday, but my colds are notorious for receding into the hallowed halls of my body, licking the wounds as my immune system finally fought them off, only to return at a later date, experienced in the art of war and bloodthirsty for revenge against the beings who slaughtered their brother bacteria upon the field of battle.


[Edited on 9/11/2005]

  • 09.11.2005 6:00 PM PDT

"It's like a cake filled with pies." -Pete "Mango" Parsons

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guys give him time, go do something else.

  • 09.11.2005 6:22 PM PDT
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I know, i should. It just kind of buggs me. Like when someone sings "I know a song that gets on everybodys nerves" But Clark, when will we see the next chap?



PS: Why is your name Mr Clark? Is it your real name? I think it would be cooler if it was like Master Clark or somfin. Sounds a bit more Haloish.

  • 09.11.2005 7:16 PM PDT
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He named himself after a charcter in a Tom Clancy series novel, starring Jack Ryan. Anyway, take your time Clark, no rush is needed

  • 09.11.2005 7:19 PM PDT

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haha a new member to the thread and he has stated that b4. his real name is there only if u look close enough. cant wait for ur next chapter Mr_Clark, take ur time as always.

  • 09.11.2005 7:39 PM PDT

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yes sunday night cant wait no matter how long it takes to get it out ill read it ROCK ON MR_CLARK

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Posted by: Commander Watson
PS: Why is your name Mr Clark? Is it your real name? I think it would be cooler if it was like Master Clark or somfin. Sounds a bit more Haloish.

Holy -???- Nothing, nothing is cooler than the Mr John Clark. If you just read Tom Clancy's stuff, you know what I mean.

On a less literature note(!?) I'll just join the others and say: Don't rush it. Or, don't give in immune system! Or, Chill, go write your book. Just pick one.

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  • 09.12.2005 7:01 AM PDT
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Yeah, i read in an intro thread about that

  • 09.12.2005 8:17 AM PDT
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Im not new! I have been reading this for a while now. On my other account. That was like......what 6,7 months ago? Just because im not the first one to reply to fanfics doesnt mean im new to them! So when do you know when the chapters coming out Clark? I hope today. Souls, and Clarks on the same day. What a great day to read!

  • 09.12.2005 1:14 PM PDT
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I will always place the mission first.
I will never accept defeat.
I will never quit.
I will never leave a fallen comrade.

Mr. John Clark or also known as Rainbow Six. I am busy with Precalculus right now so I can wait for the chapter.

Mr. Clark I am just wondering are in college or did you realize you are so good at writing you decided the hell with college and start writing professionally?

Did anyone here get Rainbow Six: Lockdown?

  • 09.12.2005 2:23 PM PDT
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Mr. John Clark or also known as Rainbow Six. I am busy with Precalculus right now so I can wait for the chapter.

Mr. Clark I am just wondering are in college or did you realize you are so good at writing you decided the hell with college and start writing professionally?

Did anyone here get Rainbow Six: Lockdown?


I am not in college, I've decided to skip the whole process. High School taught me enough things I don't need to know. Haha, oh boy I'm not going to be a very good role model later in life.

Though I'd say the main reason I'm not going is because I live in Edmonton, Alberta. Here, you literally have to sign over your soul to pay for University. Seriously, my parents aren't nice enough to pay for anything like that, so by the time I finish any kind of degree I would literally be around $30,000-$40,000 in debt. That's not something I'm real keen on experiencing.

Rainbow Six Lockdown = Buggiest game ever. Does Ubi Soft even do testing anymore?

I'll post Chapter 21 tomorrow afternoon (that's my time). Right now I'm busy watching something *cough*adventchildren*cough*

...what? You mean that hasn't been released yet? Hmmm....troubling.

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  • 09.12.2005 4:28 PM PDT

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Nice stuff you got here Clark keep up the good work and don't rush the chapter if you don't want to. Please take your time, the longer we wait the better it's goin be.

P.S. I want to make sure this is alright with you first, but I would really like to use some of your quotes and base some things off your story to use for my movie series I'm whipping up.

  • 09.12.2005 5:08 PM PDT
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Posted by: Mizbehavin
P.S. I want to make sure this is alright with you first, but I would really like to use some of your quotes and base some things off your story to use for my movie series I'm whipping up.


No problem, just include me in the credits somewhere if that's possible.

I noticed the other day on fanfiction.net that some stories have been taking a lot of lines out of this story, and don't bother giving me at least a passing mention, which is quite annoying.

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next clark will wont to right a movie witch i would watch

  • 09.12.2005 6:39 PM PDT
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Mr.Clark i was reading your blog and i must say i was quite impressed with what you wrote, i totally agree with you and your views about how videogames are supposedly "corrupting" our youth and such. being only fourteen these, "play gta as a child and youll be come a mass murder!" claims have become quite annoying. as well as this whole over se-xulization in video games, i mean comon, GTA san andreas had a big sticker that said se-xualContent" on the back.

Also Parents dont go to congress with this stupid topic, seriously, im sure there going to put aside the war and other important matters pressing our country to regulate some kind of measure to prevent violent videogames to minors just because your too lazy to read a big M on the front of a box.

Also if your kid is stupid enough to try to imitate a video game in the first place, by say, grabbing a chain saw and mowing down a croweded intersection, well then that kids a basket case and should be locked up, also the apple obviously didnt fall far from the tree sso you yourself are obviously a crazy as$hole! who let there kid play the game in the first place. so no more of this video game violence BS

i swear to god if it were up to paretnts and politicians, games would be no more fun or original then the speak N spell i played with as a two year old.

End of long stupid rant.... let the flaming begin.



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i dont kno why hardly anyone cant keep busy...its not that hard. im sure if you really think about it you can find something else to do. for example. whoever is in school do hw. who ever is not in school..watch movies or work. or dare i say play video games.i kno what poeple say about the older poeple that play video games."wow your what 30 and you still play video games???what are you a loser?" no its not true. see whn you see those little ratings on the cover of a game that have an M...it stands for mature 17+. i have heard 5 year old kids for cussing me out. but to stay on topic Mr. Clark can take all the time he needs to make his chapter the BEST one yet.

  • 09.12.2005 8:08 PM PDT

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rock on Mr_clark cant wait for thenext chapter

  • 09.12.2005 8:22 PM PDT
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Posted by: Mr_Clark
I'll post Chapter 21 tomorrow afternoon (that's my time). Right now I'm busy watching something *cough*adventchildren*cough*

...what? You mean that hasn't been released yet? Hmmm....troubling.


Ooooh, Clark your baaaaad! Tsk tsk, you shouldn't do stuff like that.

Now that my moral objections have been made, can I come and watch it too? Is it good? Did you love it? Was Cloud cute!? Ooooh don't spoil anything! Disregard all those questions I really don't want to hear anything about it!

  • 09.12.2005 8:25 PM PDT
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Posted by: Konoka_chan
Now that my moral objections have been made, can I come and watch it too? Is it good? Did you love it? Was Cloud cute!? Ooooh don't spoil anything! Disregard all those questions I really don't want to hear anything about it!


At precisely 5 am I realized the true extent of Konoka's fangirlism towards FFVII.

I am scared, and you all should be too. I'll post Chapter 21 once I get some rest.

  • 09.13.2005 4:14 AM PDT
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so the chapter is coming out today then?

  • 09.13.2005 11:51 AM PDT

He watches every Hodgetwin video they put up...on ALL their channels. He calls them the Hodge Triplets, and considers himself the 3rd triplet. He's started talking and acting like them now. Every other line out of his mouth "Thaaas some BULLLLLL**** maaayne" or "Gotta make dem gainzzzz". He calls his biceps "gains". When he eats post-workout, he talks to his biceps, "Don't worry gains, I'm feeding you. Daddys gonna feed you, gainz *kisses biceps*".

What the hell is advent children?

  • 09.13.2005 12:51 PM PDT
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I will always place the mission first.
I will never accept defeat.
I will never quit.
I will never leave a fallen comrade.

They could have made the single player in Rainbow Six: Lockdown a lot better, but the multiplayer I hear is pretty good, I just wish I had Xbox Live. I wish they had more weapons to choose from.

  • 09.13.2005 1:24 PM PDT
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I hope thats soon Clark. Post it in your title when its out.

  • 09.13.2005 1:38 PM PDT

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Posted by: Uberdawg
What the hell is advent children?


aparently its FFVII and rest up b4 posting ur chapter and cant wait. o -blam!- its comming out today??? niiiiice.

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Posted by: Uberdawg
What the hell is advent children?

It's a movie that takes place two years after the events that occured during FFVII (Final Fantasy 7).

I'd explain more but uhh, I wouldn't want to spoil it for you guys. =)

  • 09.13.2005 3:06 PM PDT