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Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War
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I'm looking forward to the next chapter Clark. There's no real reason behind this post, I just wanted to have the 300th post.

  • 02.17.2005 11:18 AM PDT
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^ what an idiot ^ and thats good news mr c about not letting anyone push you for them make sure u stick to it (please)

cant wait for the next chapter

[Edited on 2/17/2005 11:26:08 AM]

  • 02.17.2005 11:24 AM PDT
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i think it would be coool for someone to put all of his work on a single page or webpage for the poeple like me who havent read it all......i read the last chapter though and it sounds badass......so if anyone can do something like that it would be sweet.

  • 02.17.2005 11:36 AM PDT
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Posted by: Sniper_744
i think it would be coool for someone to put all of his work on a single page or webpage for the poeple like me who havent read it all......i read the last chapter though and it sounds badass......so if anyone can do something like that it would be sweet.


Just head to the link in my signature. It'll take you to fanfiction.net where you'll be able to read the chapters without digging through all the posts here.

  • 02.17.2005 11:50 AM PDT
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Mr. Clark, I'll be brief, THIS ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You're even a bit better then sir brilliant, and I thought him to be a genius.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

  • 02.17.2005 12:51 PM PDT
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i was reading Sir Briliiants fan fic as well at first untill i saw your post that listed yours and chiefs fanfics and so i read yours and instantly converted to your camp because yours is so much better than sir brilliants

anyway i think posting it on fanfic was a good idea because you can read it as one complete story without any gaps except the page turnings nice idea ^_^

oh ye and any one who types my name just to save you the hassle call me brute instead of highland brute its quicker

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  • 02.17.2005 1:48 PM PDT
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i havnt posted on here but ive been readin the chapters. gah they are so good i get in trouble at school cuz im reading them instead of lookin up my research papers im supposed to be doin. haha keep it up mr clark

  • 02.17.2005 3:50 PM PDT
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Meatwad get the honeys see?
Any way I would like to thank you Mr_Clark
You have made an excellent story that surpases the novels and that surpases our expectations everytime.Not only trhat but you have decreased our attention and effenciency in school and work....And yet we love it!!!

  • 02.17.2005 3:56 PM PDT
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Mr. Clark you should try and get this published when you are done.

  • 02.17.2005 4:00 PM PDT
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I can see the next chapter now!!!!
Master Cheif looked at Jan as she unloaded a battlerifle into a squad of enemys along with a frag killing them all. She finished the last one with a head shot. She looked up at the Cheif and said "pretty good huh?" as she said that the MC felt his sex drive slowly creeping back........j/k

  • 02.17.2005 4:01 PM PDT
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*sigh* now we have to wait till Sunday.....tick....tick.....tick <bangs head against clock to somehow speed it up>

  • 02.17.2005 4:05 PM PDT

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-blam!- awsome read man. Its nice how you decided to put the spartans back in to the novel.

keep up the -blam!- awsome work.

  • 02.17.2005 4:31 PM PDT
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Once again Wow. Thats all I can say. How do you do it? Seriously

  • 02.17.2005 5:19 PM PDT
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Posted by: TheGreatestSage
I can see the next chapter now!!!!
Master Cheif looked at Jan as she unloaded a battlerifle into a squad of enemys along with a frag killing them all. She finished the last one with a head shot. She looked up at the Cheif and said "pretty good huh?" as she said that the MC felt his sex drive slowly creeping back........j/k


Oh lord! Anyways, I would think, despite years of military discipline, MC would still have a sex drive. I vaguely recall one of the augmentations having to do with him getting pumped full of testosterone, thus (you would think) he would have an increased sex drive. And a deeper voice, as he was just hitting puberty anyway. In H2, Cortana always seemed to be making little jabs at him "You always take me to such nice places," and "HE never gives me anything!" I dunno just pointing that out. I wouldn't call it sexu*l tension, but there was a guy-girl thing going on. And I now know that Bungie sensors out "sexua*l, so I learned something today.

Anyways, back on subject, that was a wicked chapter. Since you welcome critiques, here's a couple to ponder:

-I disagree with most of the people about Ackerson. While it's established that he's a jerk, I think you should round him out with emotions other than just meanness. Give him some internal self doubt about what he is doing. Give him moments when he is thinking about humanity, rather than his career. It would make him much more human, rather than a villian caricature.

-The other Spartans being on the destroyed MACs was a perfect way to cover your tracks. Tu che!

- Looks like you're going in the direction I suggested way back, with the captured Covie techs being implemented by the humans. Of course, you probably had the idea before I even suggested it, but whatever! I just think it would be badass if human ships finally had superior technology. Then the Covies attack Earth again, and the battle seems lost, when all of a sudden....A fleet of newly equipped human ships blasts out of slipspace and starts slicin and dicin! Then I supposed you could explore the doubt of the Covenent, as their religion was based around their Forerunner techs being the pinnacle of technology and have now been proven wrong.

- I still say Johnson should be fitted with a crazy super-arm.
So, just some food for thought Clark...

  • 02.17.2005 5:31 PM PDT
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No, the Spartans aren't dead, they're out of commission though. Having a bomb go off and free-falling through space for awhile is bound to at least hurt them a little.

Important Note!

As I originally expected it to, the Sunday release for Chapter 10 has been pushed back to Monday. This is regretably necessary, as my writing time over the weekend has been shortened drastically.

If I can finish it for Sunday, I'll post it, but don't get your hopes up. Chapter 10 is one of the more complex chapters I'll have to write for this story, seeing as how it is mainly dialogue based and keeping the reader's attention throughout 10 pages of it is somewhat difficult.

  • 02.17.2005 10:36 PM PDT
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Its only one extra day, shouldn't be too hard to wait.





.....is it Monday yet?

  • 02.18.2005 1:12 AM PDT
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Take your time and do it right.

  • 02.18.2005 1:16 AM PDT

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Posted by: Scorptank
Take your time and do it right.


Agreed, Scorptank.
Writing is an art. To rush such a thing, would be horrible. Hell, if you need to sit and think (brainstorm or fine tune) the story, do it. I'd wait till teusday if it meant that the story would be that much better.


Teusday??!!!??? What the hell am I saying??
*looks at calendar* WHAT, It's stttiiilll FRIDAY??

Right Marines?
"... we're tired of waiting, sir."
Ya damn right, you are.

  • 02.18.2005 6:00 AM PDT
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Mr Clark, I'll just say it again, take your time.

  • 02.18.2005 6:06 AM PDT
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Posted by: TheGreatestSage
I can see the next chapter now!!!!
Master Cheif looked at Jan as she unloaded a battlerifle into a squad of enemys along with a frag killing them all. She finished the last one with a head shot. She looked up at the Cheif and said "pretty good huh?" as she said that the MC felt his sex drive slowly creeping back........j/k

If you read Mr_Clark's post on FanFic you would know that there is nothing happening between Jen and MC. He said, and I quote:

P.S. - To reiterate, there isn’t any romance in this story, so please don’t go asking if something is brewing between Jan and the Master Chief.

So as you see nothing's going on.

  • 02.18.2005 6:08 AM PDT
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The guy sounded pretty sarcastic, I don't think he meant what he said about MC.
Besides, I don't think MC would get a chance with Jan if Cortana's close.

  • 02.18.2005 6:30 AM PDT

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All shall parish

I wonder what will it be like with Cortana as a male. The her name might be like Match, Multi assistance term computer hardware. (the term is for 7 years because thats how long they live! well possibly)

  • 02.18.2005 7:12 AM PDT

I share pies.

This time message me the chapter please =)

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  • 02.18.2005 7:17 AM PDT