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Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War (Chapter 22 Released! Page 137!)
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how do we see chapter 6 through 22 i justr read the prologue

  • 11.10.2005 6:17 PM PDT
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im still confused is it going to be called halo 3 or 2 1/2

  • 11.10.2005 6:20 PM PDT
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i also agree with that that xbox 360 will cost alot anyways are they makin it only for xbox 360 (halo 3))

  • 11.10.2005 6:22 PM PDT
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how come im the only one replying


beats me

  • 11.10.2005 6:26 PM PDT
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Wow. This is great. Keep writing this, then send it in to Bungie. Great job.

  • 11.10.2005 6:27 PM PDT
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where'd u find the other chapters hes says page 137 relased but ive only read one

  • 11.10.2005 6:30 PM PDT

"It's like a cake filled with pies." -Pete "Mango" Parsons

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SharpSHooter118, please do NOT bump threads. This kind of action can only lead in one direction. There is a nice little feature called "Edit" use that to put all the stuff you forgot to put in before. For the other chapters you will need to go to Page 1 to find out where the other chapters are located.

  • 11.10.2005 6:51 PM PDT
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keep it up Mr C just started reading this stuff and its awsom

  • 11.10.2005 6:57 PM PDT

Phoenix is dead, long live Phoenix!
Is it?

Wow the next chapter is going to be awsome!!! Cant wait for it, must have it....etc.
Also who here is only going to buy the xbox 360 for halo 3 when it comes out? or am I just the only one that will be that "smart"?
Finaly where is the best place to go for information on the Halo movie because that script looks cool (follow Mr_Clarks link to latinoreview) even if it isn't the real script.

  • 11.10.2005 8:24 PM PDT
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I will always place the mission first.
I will never accept defeat.
I will never quit.
I will never leave a fallen comrade.

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Wow the next chapter is going to be awsome!!! Cant wait for it, must have it....etc.
Also who here is only going to buy the xbox 360 for halo 3 when it comes out? or am I just the only one that will be that "smart"?
Finaly where is the best place to go for information on the Halo movie because that script looks cool (follow Mr_Clarks link to latinoreview) even if it isn't the real script.


That really is the number one reason I am buying it, but I will also get other games like Ghost Recon, which looks awesome by the way, and maybe DOA 4

  • 11.11.2005 6:33 AM PDT
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ill prolly do the same just but xbox 360 for halo 3 and you know i might get a few other games..maybe gears of war or perfect dark 2

by the way mr c great job on this fanfic you could make some money off of your stories

  • 11.11.2005 6:45 AM PDT

I share pies.

This Fanfic is all over the place but somehow organised, how do you do it?

  • 11.11.2005 7:41 AM PDT

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This Fanfic is all over the place but somehow organised, how do you do it?


Hes amazing thats how

  • 11.11.2005 10:08 PM PDT
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Chapter Information

Or lack thereof....

So yes, I'm sitting here, about to nod off after a rather physically exhausting night, and then I glance over and see that my laptop has not been touched in awhile. That line of thinking also goes towards the chapter.

Confession Time!

I have done somewhere between zero and point-zero-one of work on the chapter in the last while. My thoughts moved elsewhere at the start of last weekend, and by Wednesday, all was lost.

Yes indeed, I am slowly learning how to drive. An odd statement coming from an admitted nineteen year old male. By the time the average person hits my age they've already competed in drag races and fought to the death on "Dead Man's Curve" up on old McGreggor's Canyon. Unfortunately for me, I decided to skip those simple, lifelong excursions and simply rely on others for my transportation needs.

I'm no stranger to these beasts called automobiles though. In fact, throughout my High School life I participated in the Automotives program that was offered (though admittingly since it offered some easy credits in order to graduate, that might have enticed the deal), where I took apart and put back together again, many important facets of the modern car. There were problems.

Yes, one of the more amusing stories from my youth involves a car I had been working on that belonged to a teacher. Let's just say off the record here, that said car's drive shaft was not reassembled in the prescribed manner (despite the fact that the automotive instructor oversaw this process the entire time), and then this teacher who owned the car then took it out onto the freeway. After that, let's just say an accident occurred, where let's say hypothetically, that the entire rear axel of the car tore itself apart, and the teacher's car careened into a ditch, where it narrowly missed falling into a nearby lake.

The problem I suppose with my deciding to learn the intricacies of actually operating one of these behemoths, is that I chose to do so now, at the beginning of winter here in Edmonton. It's already snowed in the last week, and this has not helped my nerves when driver's notice that I am in fact a Learner, where they then proceed to do everything possible to make me crash and kill both myself and the instructor. Jerks...

Add to this, once the temperature drops below -5 degrees celcius at any point, I become a sniveling wreck, unable to stop my teeth from chattering and knocking together while I vainly wrap blankets around my beleaguered body.

Some rather unfortunate attempts at embracing this cold weather have left me with a severe flu, one of which has actually managed to take away my voice. I can only emit struggled squeaks and horrible hacking coughs that sound as if my larynx has been caught in a vice. Woe is the one who must ask me a question, for it takes nearly ten minutes before they can understand my hand gestures. When my sister asked me where I had put my PSP, I drew elaborate maps in the air with my hands, hoping that she would catch on, but unfortunately it was not to be, so I had to rouse myself from my pitiable state and go on a manhunt for it.

I have a few days off now, and while it stands that I will likely dedicate most of my time trying to understand the intricacies of a stick-shift, and perhaps concocting a homemade remedy that might return my voice to me, it is also likely that I shall stay bed-ridden, and turn my dashed hopes to writing, which I have been dying to do.

Well, I suppose this hasn't been much of an update. I really need to catch myself up on all the other fanfics floating around on the site, I feel as if I'm being overtaken in a race that I didn't even know I was a spectator of.

  • 11.12.2005 7:46 AM PDT

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niiice, I would say to learn how to drive Stick-Shift after you have learned to drive auto. Although stick-shifts are for men but they can also be a little hard to learn specially in the snow. Anyways do whatever must be done before starting on the fanfic again.

  • 11.12.2005 8:50 AM PDT
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Dang, Cracka has some skillz. Keep it up dude this shiz is awesome. Check it over with the good lads at Bungie first though.

  • 11.12.2005 9:18 AM PDT
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winter already ? i live in New York and three days ago it was 60 degrees Farenhieght(spell) which is abnormal heat but still ,winter, man that sucks for you. I might as well be skinny dipping in a lake.

  • 11.12.2005 5:21 PM PDT

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o man mr_clark sounds pretty bad: although atleast ur old enoguh to get ur drivers because me well i can't but i could get my learners and beg my friend to let me drive his car because lets face it, who really wants to drive with there parents and actually going the speed limit instead of going about the speed limit.
I have asked my friend on multiple occasions to let me drive his car wen i get my learners but he won't let me probably because up here in Alberta theres this law that there has to be someone 21 years of age with there drivers license in the car but i am new to this because i have just moved to the cowboy province from Saskatchewan and there the other person must have had there drivers for a year so now im all confused.

But on a much lighter note i am actually passing my english with an amazing 90 and have bought myself this brand new 15" lcd monitor with a amd athlon 64 3500 + 2.2 GHz harddrive which is working quite well for me at the moment. My parents computer on the other hand isn't doing so well, dad had to take it in to get it fixed which is when i took the oppurtunity to buy this new comp. so now i have a tv xbox and computer in my room all for me and am now working on the 360 and maybe a mini-fridge and microwave so that i could actually live in here.

We all want the next chapter to come out soon but by the sounds of it you havent done much work on it during ur much needed break after writing 22 great chapter, 23 including the prologue. If this chapter doesn't come out soon i will not b able to read it because i will already have immersed myself into the xbox 360 and morwyn 2 and perfect dark 2 and maybe even ghost recon:advanced warfare if i have the money left over to buy it which i am hoping to do.

Take as much time as you need Mr_Clark and any one that says differently will be delt with very efficiently no need for u to worry bout them. We'll all be here when your done and have posted it because were all faithful fans, well i wont be here ill be on fanfiction.net reading it but ill post here after im done.

Nobody should get the 360 just for halo3 thats an injustice to all the hardwork that microsoft did into making a systme that will play halo3 you should atleast consider buying other games that have a chance of being good or you mgiht even like some of the prequels to it because so far the only games that are in the same sequel are halo and halo2 and there both pretty good; but i am having a little trouble finding my halo 1 disc at the moment and if i dont find it soon ill have to go out and buy myself a brand new one just to test one the 360 do a little campaign some multiplayer with some friends and such. then move to halo2 and do the same because im betting that it'll be amazing on the 360.

And now to the fact that PS3 is supposed to ahve 10 points more graphics then the xbox 360. IT'S TEN FREAKIN POINTS YOU WON'T KNWO THE DIFFERENCE AND YOU HAVE TO PAY PER GAME TO PLAY ONLINE FOR PS3 THATS BAD NOBODY WANTS THAT. alright now that ive got that out of the way i think i have talked about everything i need to talk about and have copme pretty close to matching Mr_clarks longest posts, other then chapters of course,a nd in words not lenght. So i bid you all a nice day and a good night and a happy christmas when it somes



and now i am off to bed.




[Edited on 11/13/2005]

  • 11.13.2005 2:08 AM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War
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holy crap nice chapter

[Edited on 11/13/2005]

  • 11.13.2005 7:16 AM PDT
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im still reading chapter 22 im in the middile with the augmantation and im wetting myself at the moment

  • 11.13.2005 8:09 AM PDT

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dont get i t all ov er your keyboard

  • 11.13.2005 10:08 AM PDT
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cool i like it

  • 11.13.2005 10:42 AM PDT
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seriously the ending was hardcore i mean the armor and OMG it is ...............must have more. I have never grined so much while reading. When do u predict the next chapter will be and u better not lose John i want him in charge of his body not some anchient warrior. The chief must be in controll!!!!!!!!!

  • 11.13.2005 11:00 AM PDT
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lol eliteslayer 66 i clicked on the nninjas thing in your name and i watched it for about half an hour yeah thats sad lol

  • 11.13.2005 6:14 PM PDT

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lol nice ninjas

  • 11.13.2005 10:07 PM PDT