- last post: 01.01.0001 12:00 AM PDT
I just have to say again Mr Clark, your chapters are top class. I know your not trying to, but don't put yourself down. Nylund and Deitz, as professional as they are, write stories no more interesting than yours. What I suggest though, something you have left out, is enemy dialouge. One of the most exciting aspects of First Strike and The Flood is the enemy's story, the interaction between the Elite's, and as you have said, the Grunts. I think you should include some Brute stories, something along the lines of their reaction to losing Tartarus, condeming the Arbiter, just before him and The Cheif bust in and Own the life out of them all.
Just a suggestion, but it was a very enjoyable aspect of the books.
Nevertheles, KEEP IT UP, WE LOVE YOU!!!
YYEEEAAHHH!!!
GO CLARK, GO CLARK, IT'S YA BIRTHDAY, IT'S YA BIRTHDAY!!!!
Ahem....sorry...