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Why not just move the discussion. Just let Clark post his stuff here and post the comments and other random stuff on this thread. Solves the off topicness and clears this thread up... see you on the other side.


Official Mr. Clark Halo Story Community Thread. Fans talking randomly!!

  • 01.31.2006 6:56 PM PDT
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Uhmm, NM... Locked before I could even post the link. Sorry for the misundestanding... I guess I'll return to silence.

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  • 01.31.2006 6:57 PM PDT
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Moderator Note: Don't go off topic in this thread agian.

[Edited on 2/1/2006 by dmbfan09]

  • 02.01.2006 3:21 AM PDT
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Chapter 23 Information

It seems like forever since I've done one of these posts, and actually it probably has been forever. Or three months, whatever comes first.

Anyways, I should say this right away, there are only two scenes in this chapter. The first scene lasts maybe two pages, while the second scene will go on for more than likely, twenty.

That's because this is the chapter where I lay the cards on the table in regards to the history of the Forerunners, the Majal, the Half-Breeds, the Pure Bloods, and all the other words I've used to describe basically the same thing. So yes, I'm putting you guys out of your misery which I'm sure will trigger cheers in the streets and stop the burning of effigies built to look like myself.

I'm trying to keep the more serious tone I had with the side story in regards to the workings of this chapter, so expect a more or less, tense situation when Fasul spills the beans on the genocide of the universe.

That's not to say there isn't more to come in regards to the story, plot-wise. We've still got Ackerson wandering the universe, along with Truth and the Forerunner on their way to Danrun, and lets not forget that the Flood are still a major player in this story and if you stretch your mind far enough, I'm sure you'll recall that when Johnson killed the Gravemind seed back on Earth, 2401 Penitent Tangent was not around then.

We're looking at a chapter that's going to be sans Master Chief/Cyriacus, that's for sure. This is a dialogue chapter. Think of it like the Council of Elrond chapter in The Fellowship of the Ring. Nothing but talking and grumbling.

In regards to how much more of this story we've got left, I'll throw out a number and say I'm likely going to wrap things up in four more chapters. I've got a few loose ends to tie up on Danrun, then there's going to be the big explosive chapter that will likely be Chapter 25, followed by the receding action of Chapter 26, and then the last shall be Chapter 27, followed by a short epilogue, styled after the Johnson side story, but more than likely using a different character.

I can't say what occurs in Chapter 24, that's very hush hush around here. Let's just say things happen, and the biggest secret housed within the Covenant is exposed. Speculate away, but I am 100% certain no one will know as of right now. Perhaps after Chapter 23 hits its likely release date this weekend someone might get on the right track.

  • 02.01.2006 5:14 AM PDT
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Sweet, that's gotta be some kind of a record or something, like 2 weeks between chapters/side story. "So the " speculation "begins." -edited Sean Connery quote from Clancy or Bond or something. Majal seem to be purebloods i think and half breeds are that, majal + like other races or even flood, most likely flood though because they "harvest" food and stuff :)

  • 02.01.2006 10:52 AM PDT
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i can't wait it will be nice ,also do you plan on makeing another story

  • 02.01.2006 3:48 PM PDT
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a story by this weekend,,, very nice, VERY NICE

  • 02.01.2006 5:20 PM PDT

Phoenix is dead, long live Phoenix!
Is it?

Nuts Im going to miss the next chapter cause im going to be away,
I have a feeling to where this is going but have no clear idea to what the end is going to be like.
"And so it begins" is a LOTR TT quote: Theoden.
Another side story, that will be cool, I think Jan will be a good person or Keyes, but you'll have to get the female thing right...
I'll be back tuesday NZ (Monday US)
{EDIT} lol just read last page kinda agree with the mod on some things

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  • 02.02.2006 1:51 AM PDT
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Moderator Note: You were warned. 7 days.

[Edited on 2/4/2006 by dmbfan09]

  • 02.03.2006 7:52 AM PDT
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Cool, this bodes well in my book.

  • 02.03.2006 9:32 PM PDT
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im waiting.......

  • 02.04.2006 5:40 PM PDT
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You guys should know better then to think my first ambiguous date for a chapter will actually come through.

I'm so disappointed.

NO CHAPTER THIS WEEKEND!

Reasons are varied and odd. Please resume your normal antagonistic ways. I shall return at a later time to give what I'd imagine will be a much more solid release date.

  • 02.05.2006 5:07 AM PDT
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XD i belived u.

  • 02.05.2006 8:51 AM PDT
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some one has ALOT of time on there hands!

  • 02.05.2006 10:30 AM PDT
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I was so excited and then i was struck down. Oh well life goes on. Superbowl today!!!!!!!

Go steelers

  • 02.05.2006 11:18 AM PDT
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that sucks,hopefully we get a chap by winter break

  • 02.06.2006 5:49 PM PDT
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anticipation led me astray, geez clark, next time wont u say "guys ill have the chapter done this weekend but really not i just wanted to get u guys excited and i wanted to waste ur time by checking on this site to see if i got the chapter done" ..... i should have known better, next time u say this weekend i expect it in another 2 or 3 weekends.

ends on a friendly note.

  • 02.07.2006 11:10 AM PDT
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i have just read when sarge shoot gravemind and he heals and there was a massivive punch up!! GO SARGE!!!! GO SARGE!!!!

  • 02.07.2006 1:36 PM PDT
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PHEW panic over! after reading page 7 i thought sargey died! NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
but hes invincible sargent johnson dundun dun dundun (to tune of captain scarlet lol)

  • 02.07.2006 1:45 PM PDT
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Yeah it's geat and everything, but you didn't capture a main idea of Halo's plot. At the beginning you say that they were going to glass the planet. Have you payed any attention Clark? In Halo 2 you are told of things like "no human presence was foretold." The prophet of truth is going to Earth for a reason. Why would he go kill the humans for the heck of it if his primary goal is to activate the rings (however, I still wonder if the prophet of truth knows the actual function of the rings and not only tricked the covenant to joining him, but wishes to gain power for himself through the rings even if it means destroying everything.)

Obviously, the question of "where is this arc?" is answered the second the prophet's forerunner ship arrives at Earth out of slipstream. The arc is on Earth and the Covenent already knows where Earth is. They didn't know, however, that humans live there. The covenant has been wiping out the humans from the outer colonies to the inner because they are wiping the humans out from around the arc bit-by-bit. THERE!!!

-Scorch out-

  • 02.07.2006 2:12 PM PDT
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I have just finished reading the last chapter and wat can i say?Pure gold,Mr Clark truly is a genious.Cant wait till the next one, keep it up.

  • 02.07.2006 2:30 PM PDT

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I am back... Time to read the new chapter.


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Or not i guess, just read Mr. Clarks last post. I am so sad.

[Edited on 2/7/2006]

  • 02.07.2006 2:44 PM PDT