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Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War

I shall cut into 343 Industries Headquarters, retrieve the Halo Bible and burn any 343 Industries employee that stands in my way.

Grand Hierarch of the Covenant Elite Community!

Nice History Chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter. I want to know everything about the Majal, the Half-Breeds and the Flood. It really adds something to the story.

Keep it up, Mr_Clark!

  • 02.20.2006 2:23 AM PDT
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Thanks for the advice, I'll be needing it

and whos konoka? (or however you spell it)

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  • 02.20.2006 9:17 AM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War (CHAPTER 23: Page 171)
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Hello MR_Clark your a good writer and how do you get all this halo stuff from have you completed halo2? i am on Oracle
You'r gonna become a famous Bungie Halo Writer If you keep on getting stories/doing this!

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  • 02.20.2006 11:44 AM PDT
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Stay on topic.

[Edited on 2/21/2006 by dmbfan09]

  • 02.20.2006 12:38 PM PDT
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ravikiran:

We've been ordered, so to speak, that we must keep all posts relavant to the story, so we cannot assist you. It would be better to check out one of the other forum categories to get an answer to your problem.

HaloXenon:

The next two or three chapters are going to be Foreurnner History chapters. They are meant not only to explain the history of the Halo Universe, but to add depth to the Fasul character, as well as Cyriacus (OMG! a spoiler!).

As for everyone else, remember Clark's away for this week, so he won't be around to answer all the questions.

  • 02.20.2006 3:30 PM PDT

Phoenix is dead, long live Phoenix!
Is it?

Konoka_Chan emergies from the dead.
Anyway the point of this on topic post is.

Are the forerunner chapters going to be together? because I thought that they were going to be evenly distributed.

Cyriacus chapter Cool?

  • 02.20.2006 10:21 PM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War

"Hey! I heard you fellas taste.... just like chicken!!"

Im stunned, this is awesome writing as if Eric Nylund himself was behind it. Keep it up, its very interesting to read.
Awesome!!!!!!!! =D

  • 02.21.2006 4:17 AM PDT

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"Tag, you're it!" Agreed that we don't seem to comment much on each others works, but we both linger in the background, watching with child like anticipation for the next installment. So here I am, after a looong absence, about to stir up your hornest nest and pick at your brain, about the underlining points within your story.

You never cease to amaze. I could go on and on about how great, wonderful and talented you are, but instead, I'll focus on the story.

First I want to look at this:“I have heard of you,” Fasul spoke, using the tongue of the Sangheili, “Arbiter of the tamed dogs. You met the one of whom darkness cannot keep hidden. The prisoner of time and malice, one that fate has deemed to play out a part in this act, that has yet to be seen or realized.” And then to unite that with this: “You judge me do you? That is your right I suppose, as you were once mere lapdogs to the Prophets, bowing beneath them in the hopes of being passed scraps when you became lustful for attention. You looked at the Majal as Gods did you? I suppose it is always the deepest wound when one discovers that those they’ve placed upon an alter have feet of clay. Funny is it not, that you would presume that the error my people made was any less innocent than the one your own forefathers made when the Prophets first offered their hands to pull you from your barbaric ways, while fingering the blade at their side, imagining the moment when they would be given the chance to plunge it into your back. Shall I judge you then, Arbiter? You are a brave Sangheili, but your blind fanaticism led to the deaths of so many. How many times did you stand on the bridge of your ship, watching with malice as the Covenant fleets burned those human settlements, giving no care that innocent people dwelt there, and that their lives were being erased? It is easy to look down at my people, as we made mistakes greater than any that came before and afterwards, but you are not without sin.”

I see something promising here, a very alluring history of the Prophets and Sanghelii. I just wanted to reference this, and I honestly don't know why. It grabbed me from the moment I saw it, and in my mind (which appears to in some way model your own) will come back to bite us. It was so sutle, so small and quickly refrenced, yet has the potential to be a major tool in the interactions of the Majal and Half-breeds, as well as the Prophets.

It appears that you have big plans for the Sangheili... or am I being to picky? After all, this isn't the first time you mentioned how the Sangheili and Prophets connected. I think back to when the Arbiter first met with the UNSC and gave the story of his kin... how dark a tale that was. And now this. A sutle reminder that the Prophets and Sangheili are inter connected, since the very beginning of the covenant. Again, I maybe bitting too hard on false meat, but yet, it teases me so much that I can't let go.

Believe me when I say.. I'm always reading, waiting, and eager for more.
~soulguard


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  • 02.21.2006 7:04 AM PDT
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-blam!- me your a good writer.

  • 02.21.2006 8:38 AM PDT
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i don't know clark has a lot of things to build up so i think you idea is going to have atleast some significance.

  • 02.22.2006 4:31 PM PDT

"I hope nothing, I fear nothing, I am free"
"A person needs a little madness, or else they never dare cut the rope and be free." - Nikos Kazantzakis
"The ink of the scholar is more holy than the blood of martyrs" - Hasan al-Basri
Black Chapter, for all religious and political debate that doesn't fit in the Flood.

His name comes from Mr Clark, one of tom clancys characters from his series of books - first shows up in clear and present danger, along with chavez, then there is an in depth history of him and how he became Mr Clark in Without Remorse, hes pretty consistent in showing up in books after that, mainly working with Chavez, who later becomes his son in law, then heading Rainbow Six.

If you need to know more, read the goddamn books :p

Glad to hear theres more history chapters coming, its nice to have a reference to whats happened in the past, and, of course, its nice to have a definate idea of how long the wait will be before the end... bets anyone? hehe

For those who havent read them, i picked up the first 4 books of the dark tower series by steven king, theyre good, dont be put off by the round about way of getting anywhere in the Gunslinger, the Drawing of the Three makes a lot more sense.. well, if you can think abstractly.

- Primum

  • 02.25.2006 12:42 PM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War (CHAPTER 23: Page 171)
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Posted by: grunt pimpa
1.Konoka chan is a personal friend of clark's who he has known since he was a kid. i personally beleive there is more between them than what they admit but im just observing.she sometimes gets to see clark's stuff before he is finished and even once or twice has helped. she is real cool and if you keep coming here youll see her.
2. also buddy you gotta remember allot of people here are from the netherlands. such as hold the line i think he is from england mabe or something... i dunno.
3.im Prowlaz by the way. i just use this account because the other was perma banned so i like to be called Prowlaz.


kinda funny. so many of the guys from my generation are gone... now nothing but a bunch of nubs. sad really.

england?!?!?! i'm from new york why do you lie to him, is this story going to go into the summer? at this rate it will be a while

  • 02.26.2006 7:55 AM PDT
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Hey! Look, I know you people don't know me at all, because this is my first reply to someone who can truly write. I'm in awe by the way Mr. Clark can make an amazing story that can be a novel, movie, or hell, even a game! Mr. Clark, you continue from the end of the game in Halo 2 and continued on with character development. I mean diving into the past of what the Arbiter knows about the past of his kind, Master Chief on board the Forerunner ship, destorying it in the process and surviving the explosion! I mean, holy crap! The story you make can get anyone hooked on this!
I just finished reading all the chapters today. Are you an author or something? If not, you should be, because I mean, look at the story you just made, man! I was so freakin' excited to read every chapter in the forum, that I don't ever want the story to end! If the rating between 1-10 were to see how well the story is, I would rate you a 100! New characters after every chapter, new twist, the Spartans surviving, Master Chief's new armor and he gets taken over by another being..., dude you seriously got to publish this stuff! I'm going crazy waiting for the next chapter to come out. Mr. Clark, you got a really great talent that only a true author can have.
If this is a book that you already made, you got to tell me were to get it! It's really cool to read a story with exciting twists and turns.

P.S., Do you know how to get the IWHBYD skull? It's really hard!

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  • 02.26.2006 9:45 PM PDT
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What the? I leave for a week and Scorptank closes up shop? That sucks! Now I've gotta survive off of soulguard's work, but aside from occasional side stories, it looks like he's gonna be laying low until he's ready to complete the trilogy.

Weep Halo Fanfic world, for it is now a darker place....

And I would ask all of you to sincerely pray that this story doesn't drag into the summer, cause that means you will never ever read another page. I'm closing up shop and moving this summer, striking it out on my own, and when that time comes it'll be like I'm not even existing in the online world since working full time and household management duties will likely overtake me.

Once I'm out of this city, I'm cutting all ties to the fanfic world and devoting my time to actual original works that I can publish and see sitting on the bookshelves one day.

In actual chapter news, I'm dearly enjoying this first history chapter, mainly because I have almost 100% freedom in whatever I want to put in. I could throw in dragons for no reason, and still somehow warp the history enough that it all makes sense. Maybe some kind of crazy pseudo-mechanical world where there are no living things.

Of course I'm not doing anything like that.

I'll have an actual release date in mind sometime this week, so look forward to that.


  • 02.27.2006 1:39 AM PDT
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go figure, you get a taste of true power and then ur like, I can add dragons!!!
i cant help but find that funny

well i would say do at l;east try to have it as good as everything else, i know you will, well i should also say that you should finish this because if you dont there will be people out there going nuts

  • 02.27.2006 10:27 AM PDT
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And I would ask all of you to sincerely pray that this story doesn't drag into the summer

Agreed.

I would really like to see the end of this story.

  • 02.27.2006 9:32 PM PDT
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LEAVE the fanfic world, nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, i can't bear it, i will fast (after dinner)

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  • 02.28.2006 1:54 PM PDT
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dude, you rock at making storys! thats just like the halo books that i read. in the next chapter i think that you should put when sergeant johnson is in the chamber, he sees another of the huge flood like in the level on halo "keyes" when theres keyes in the giant flood. that would be awesome. keep on goin! -thebrandon721

  • 02.28.2006 3:29 PM PDT
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cool this week you say

what happend to scopian tank(sp)

  • 03.01.2006 4:05 AM PDT

Phoenix is dead, long live Phoenix!
Is it?

Wow camp week was awsome, I hardly slept all week. Now I come back to Soulguard finnishing the editing of SFFH, Scorp closing up shop. Mr Clark leaving Fanfic in the summer(thats june/july right) and last of all The next chapter somewhere this week. Not to mention a $h!t load of census forms from the NZ government, makes me miss England.

Bets on when this is finished, about may would be my guess.
thanks for the quick chapters Mr_Clark in advance that is........

  • 03.02.2006 2:49 PM PDT
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Hey Clark, I would rather have you finish your story, but should bad things prevent such an occurance, would you mind if I did a Fanfic ending to your fanfic?

I need to make sure when you go for actual publishing that I find your awesome uber-skilled works.

  • 03.02.2006 11:47 PM PDT
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he would maby/probably hand it down to soulguard

  • 03.03.2006 2:02 PM PDT