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Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War (CHAPTER 23: Page 171)
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wow that was realy good I hope I can read more

  • 03.22.2006 3:57 PM PDT
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sorry Mr_Clark i forgot about your two jobs

  • 03.22.2006 5:33 PM PDT
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sweet 35 pages i wonder how many pages in all it will be in all

  • 03.23.2006 3:26 AM PDT
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Posted by: greelantern
sweet 35 pages i wonder how many pages in all it will be in all


That's 35 pages for an independant project, not involved with this fanfic. I did two sentences at most on this story during the weekend.

  • 03.23.2006 4:17 AM PDT
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as I was lying on my bed at the night gazing the stars wondering one thing; Where the hell my roof went.

I am a Zombie.
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Good to see that you have least started the new chapter.
We'll I just leave the place until you have some major news about next chapter or story or something else.

See ya C.

  • 03.23.2006 4:20 AM PDT

"I hope nothing, I fear nothing, I am free"
"A person needs a little madness, or else they never dare cut the rope and be free." - Nikos Kazantzakis
"The ink of the scholar is more holy than the blood of martyrs" - Hasan al-Basri
Black Chapter, for all religious and political debate that doesn't fit in the Flood.

Ah, Mr Clarks got Oblivion....

Okay, I'll be back in about 3 months, no chance anyone would get anything done with that game out... : p

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  • 03.23.2006 5:49 AM PDT
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i saw him and many other of my friends playing it, dang 35 page report, thats alot, hmm
well we can wait for a chap

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  • 03.24.2006 2:20 PM PDT
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we've had longer waits, i have a felling a may come out soon, maby

  • 03.27.2006 1:45 PM PDT

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Longer waits. Hmm might that have been the chapter 21 wait i do believe in which it took almost a full 4 months?

  • 03.27.2006 3:07 PM PDT

Phoenix is dead, long live Phoenix!
Is it?

I cant remember, atleast he is still doing it though.

Any News Mr_Clark?

  • 03.29.2006 1:31 AM PDT
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There was a time when Patience ceased to be a virtue. It was long ago.

I have been ravaged by the gaming bug. Oblivion's only been out for a week, and I've all ready logged over 50 hours. I rarely play games even half that length. I also finally finished Shadow of the Colossus on Hard Time Attack, getting all the cool weapons and stuff. That took a fair chunk of time. Then finally there's Tetris DS. I love it to pieces. I take it everywhere I go, uncaring of the strange looks I receive whilst playing it in public places, letting the classic Nintendo themes run rampant through the air. Oh yes, and the Battlefield 2 demo hit the marketplace yesterday too, that one I'm looking forward to, big time.

Its been a long time since I've gamed this much. I've missed it so much. Because of how rare it is, almost every free moment I have is spent playing games, which is amazingly fun and envigorating.

Don't fret, the chapter is about at the 18-page mark. That's over half done. Right now I'm having trouble because there are two significant shifts in time during the chapter, and integrating them so they flow seamlessly is harder than I originally imagined.

I'm working on it, that's just about all I can say. Even if I wished to rush the chapter out the door, I doubt I could pull myself away from this glorious, white box of love long enough to post it at the moment.

  • 03.30.2006 4:31 AM PDT
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Hey Clark, I totally understand what you mean about playing so much. I just got Oblivion last night and would have stayed up all night, but my brother was watching me and I knew that he really needed to go to bed. And that was certainly not going to happen while I kept playing, but even then I was up until 1:30. I would like to see your new chapter out pobably about as much as anyone, but I know it will be better in the end if it has been done because you wanted to do it, rather than felt like you had to because everyone was bugging you. I know that from personal experience. So, I just wanted to encourage you to hang in there, keep up the great work, and have a wonderful day!

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  • 03.30.2006 7:15 AM PDT
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yeah, everywon on my FL is obssesed with it to, none of my friends told me how oblivion is, so i'll wait till i get a response

  • 03.30.2006 1:44 PM PDT
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Wish I had Oblivion.
Does it command all in time and space to its will, and render all others useless?

  • 03.30.2006 2:21 PM PDT

Phoenix is dead, long live Phoenix!
Is it?

I have Oblivion, and Patience but i also have curiosity.

Thanks anyway Mr_Clark

  • 03.30.2006 8:19 PM PDT
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i wish i had oblivion, i saw the demo on xbl marketplace

  • 04.01.2006 7:01 AM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War
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Sweet...

  • 04.01.2006 7:13 AM PDT

"I hope nothing, I fear nothing, I am free"
"A person needs a little madness, or else they never dare cut the rope and be free." - Nikos Kazantzakis
"The ink of the scholar is more holy than the blood of martyrs" - Hasan al-Basri
Black Chapter, for all religious and political debate that doesn't fit in the Flood.

Oblivion rocks :) so much to do on it... ive had it a week and ive clocked.. umm... 50 hours on it.

and i havent even done much on the main quest... life is good...

anyway, ill return at some later date in search of chapterage, no point rushing a man with good games.

- Primum

  • 04.01.2006 8:17 AM PDT
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I just got it, HUZZAH!! OBLIVION!!
It has gone above and beyond the call of gaming, and I award it with the awesomenessness award for awesomeness.

  • 04.04.2006 9:49 AM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War (CHAPTER 23: Page 171)
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Mediocre writing at best. Sorry. To many things don't fit. I won't run through then all but "shook the cobwebs from his head" jumps to mind. Certain coments like that don't make sence when talking about the Covenant. That in particular is a very human figure of speach. Keep working on it though. ;)

  • 04.04.2006 10:19 AM PDT
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so that one little thing qualifies it as mediocre?
i like this story because Clark has chose some pretty interesting story choices (the klling of the entire human race) to keep the reader entertained

  • 04.05.2006 2:40 PM PDT
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When is the next Chapter!!!???!!!

  • 04.05.2006 4:14 PM PDT