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Clark i like the book but what ever happened to the ark i mean it was suppose to be of great importantce early in the book but somehow its just disappeared. That was what i just waned to know about the book. and the one other thing the half breeds and majal are getting a little tough to follow.. the Cyriacus guy is a bit tough to follow as well but i like the suit and the power. So will there be more action after the forerunner chronicles. Because you can't end a story with just dialogue you gotta have a last epic battle. The half breed against Cyriacus. it'd be sweeeeett!!!!!!! One more thing i gotta know is what do you think of halo 3 i mean here you have this great book you have been working on since halo 2 and then halo 3 comes in and its not like your book at all. i mean doesnt that feel weird to you. your watching (and playing) a completely different story unfold on how earth ends unlike yours i just wanted to know what you thought of it and i just had a few questions about your book.

  • 07.18.2006 8:53 AM PDT
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No offense but it feels like the story is pullin away from the actual halo. i mean i like the new armor but i hate the guy that takes over MC. I mean come on guys nobody can take over the MC. He is practically a god. You dont control the MC he controls you!!!! But i liked the covie history and the forerunner history in progres. But whatever happened to the ark. I mean love this story even though no offense to mr. clark i just feel its knda pullin away from halo altogether ean in the begging that was what they were all after but now its just a whisper in the wind. Mr. clark you gotta find MC a woman. Seriously the guy has gone forty sumthin years without any. I mean he saved the earth on a daily basis the guy deservews sometthin. But then you can kill her off cuz it can make the MC go on a rampage. Dont ya know a death of a loved one by the enemy always makes for good revenge. so just sendin some i deas your way Mr. Clark

  • 07.18.2006 9:11 AM PDT
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ihave loved this story since the begining. i have stuck to this story but now it just feels like its starting to pull away from the haloverse i mean like the new armor but i dont like that cyriacus guy. i mean you cant control the MC. He is a god among men. The MC contols you!!!!!!!! But i got 2 questions that i gotta ask that all you guys especially you Mr Clark can answer how ever you want. One is what happend to the ark i mean in the begining of the story it was all important but where'd it go. And the next question what aboutHalo 3 comin out wont it be weird for u i mean you've been writting this story since halo 2 came out and then bungie pops out and makes the last one and it probably is gonna come out completely different from your book. i just thought it would be a good topic to talk about for you. Becuz i love your story and i love the book but its gonna be hard to pick who will have the better ending. just wanted to know these things plz give me some answers soon man i'd love to know your thought on this

  • 07.18.2006 9:39 AM PDT

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Ya this is really good writing, ive not seen all the pages as it would take me ages, and this question may have been asked before, but has a publisher seen this story yet? its worthy of publication IMO

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  • 07.18.2006 10:07 AM PDT
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I'll quickly answer this for Mr Clark...

The publishing of such a story would be subject to copywright protection laws and punishable by a large fine, imprisonment, and a slap by Bungie employees...

So in short, Mr Clark cannot get this awesome story published

  • 07.18.2006 11:16 AM PDT
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Master Peanut,

While I do share your concerns as to the whereabouts of the Arc and the actual role this Cyrius will play...

I must remind you that Mr Clark is a very talented writer with a great story going, whom loves to play with people's minds. So I suggest you be patient and wait for the next chapter.

Finish the whole story before making constructive criticism... if at all

  • 07.18.2006 11:19 AM PDT
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Master peanut

why did you write basicaly the same thing three times in a row

  • 07.18.2006 12:13 PM PDT
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Posted by: Hogarth316
I'll quickly answer this for Mr Clark...

The publishing of such a story would be subject to copywright protection laws and punishable by a large fine, imprisonment, and a slap by Bungie employees...

So in short, Mr Clark cannot get this awesome story published


LOL, it would be kind of hard for Clark to post from inside a prison cell...........particularly if his cell mate was a butch 7ft 240lb Rugby/Football player....

  • 07.18.2006 12:24 PM PDT
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The Master Chief is a loser.

[Edited on 7/18/2006]

  • 07.18.2006 2:33 PM PDT
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I was surfing the forums, seen you had posted thought it was a new chapter. Big disappointment to me.

  • 07.18.2006 2:54 PM PDT
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So does this mean no chapter?

  • 07.18.2006 9:51 PM PDT
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Posted by: Mr_Clark
The Master Chief is a loser.


Now Clark, while I admire your writing ablilites and the story you have been feeding us... I must ask you to withdraw this heresy immediately.

[Edited on 7/18/2006]

  • 07.18.2006 10:12 PM PDT
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Posted by: Mr_Clark
The Master Chief is a loser.


Now Clark, while I admire your writing ablilites and the story you have been feeding us... I must ask you to withdraw this heresy immediately.

i have to agree

  • 07.18.2006 10:31 PM PDT
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i really hope that clark holds true to his promise this one time and posts it by 1159 PDT so i can read it on my 14 hour road trip tomorrow to NC

  • 07.18.2006 10:54 PM PDT
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Clark says it'll be late, and his reason is actually valid, suprisingly. The cable lines in his area got molested, so now he's without access.

For any unbelievers, he says he has photographic proof, and as soon as he's back up on running, he'll post both the chapter and the evidence.

Personally, I'm going to bed, but I can't help but wonder what that photo contains.

  • 07.19.2006 12:44 AM PDT
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Posted by: Konoka_chan
Clark says it'll be late, and his reason is actually valid, suprisingly. The cable lines in his area got molested, so now he's without access.

For any unbelievers, he says he has photographic proof, and as soon as he's back up on running, he'll post both the chapter and the evidence.

Personally, I'm going to bed, but I can't help but wonder what that photo contains.


As we all know deep downt this is just Mr_Clark playing with our minds. He is teasing and tormenting us. I believe this as i believe that the pictures will show Mr_Clark cutting the cables himself lol.... I kid you not. LOL

ok so i am joking i dont know what the Pictures will contain but i hope we get the chapter soon..

Please Mr_Clark we need it.

  • 07.19.2006 6:43 AM PDT

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I got his sarcasm...one person has to implement sarcasm and then you get a pile of terrorist chipmunks crashing your party, not fun at all..

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Posted by: Konoka_chan
Clark says it'll be late, and his reason is actually valid, suprisingly. The cable lines in his area got molested, so now he's without access.

For any unbelievers, he says he has photographic proof, and as soon as he's back up on running, he'll post both the chapter and the evidence.

Personally, I'm going to bed, but I can't help but wonder what that photo contains.


As we all know deep downt this is just Mr_Clark playing with our minds. He is teasing and tormenting us. I believe this as i believe that the pictures will show Mr_Clark cutting the cables himself lol.... I kid you not. LOL

ok so i am joking i dont know what the Pictures will contain but i hope we get the chapter soon..

Please Mr_Clark we need it.


No Take your time. The amount of stress we put on him is tremendous. He is just one man (with incredibly great storywriting ability) trying to live.

  • 07.19.2006 6:59 AM PDT
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i just wanted to know what was goin on guys no disrespect i been readin it and it just felt like that for me. i mean good story good story but hogarth is right on the book it would be a huge slap and a huge fine and llawsuit. good writing though. but are there gonna be more chapters of the conflict going on with danrun and the prophet of truth? because i cant wait for the prophet of truth to be devoured and cyriacus and the half breed duke out as the final battle over the universe and any clues on if your gonna involve the flood and earth in any more of the story like cyriacus comes to earth and finishes off the flood on earth to let humanity start over and cyriacus finds some good stuff inside the ark so he can get along with humans and the elites.

  • 07.19.2006 8:58 AM PDT
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Master Peanut, reading your posts would be much so more enjoiable and easier if you used punctuation; instead of rambling on like my girlfriend after she's had too much caffene/alcohol.

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  • 07.19.2006 9:34 AM PDT
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look all im doin is just seeing if any "fans" can give the guy help with making chapters and finishing his book thats all jeez.

  • 07.19.2006 9:45 AM PDT
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and besides what are you my english teacher ur whining about my punctuations who cares about them u can read what im sayin cant u

  • 07.19.2006 9:49 AM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War
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There has only been 1 fanfic i have seen in .PDF format, i was wondering... could u transform this one too?

  • 07.19.2006 10:06 AM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War (Forerunner Chronicles: Part One: Pag...
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Dude, Clark has done everything so far without fan help, and it's bloody brilliant.
But about ur punctuation......i was bein sarcastic dude, my girlfriend's 10 times worse (LOL).

  • 07.19.2006 10:29 AM PDT
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lol ya sry myself my gf is pretty naggy to but Clark has asked us to throw out some ideas and i was just doin simply that i mean i have a feeling that the half breed and Cyriacus (MC) will fight when the half breed gets to danrun. but i guess ur right it is his story and he can do wut ever and ill still like it but i cant believe its been this long and the story isnt finished yet but i gues good story take time and thats what this one is doing.

  • 07.19.2006 10:33 AM PDT
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LOL, yeah even if does take Clark a year and a day to post...........

BTW, if any1 listens 2 Aiden, ACDC, Avenged Sevenfold, Atreyu, Bullet for my Valentine, Trivium, Evanescence, Lacuna Coil, Lost Prophets, Chimaira, Slipknot, My Chemical Romance, In Flames, Rye Coalation, Muse, Foo Fighters, H.I.M., Kilswitch Engage and Metalica..............then respect u hav good taste

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  • 07.19.2006 10:41 AM PDT