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Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War
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Good stuff Clark. Keep it up, and can I borrow the Reclaimer armor when your done with it? hehehe...

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  • 08.28.2006 9:51 AM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War (NEW CHAPTER! Page 191)

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Posted by: Mr_Clark
Why do you care that these guys care about this stupid chapter crap? Just curious.


O BURN!!!

  • 08.28.2006 9:57 AM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War Printable Version?
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i really wish there was a printable version for this story. i so badly want to read this off paper and it is a waste of paper to try and print it off these pages. lookin at the computer screen is frying my eyes lol. i think this work is superb. keep up the awesome work Clark.

  • 08.28.2006 6:56 PM PDT
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  • 08.28.2006 7:03 PM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of World War Fifteen

Phoenix is dead, long live Phoenix!
Is it?

First letter of each line.
M A W
MAW is semi-phenetic for MORE

So the code is "more".

Now the question is more what?
More Fic
More Idiocy
More "I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER"

  • 08.28.2006 9:27 PM PDT
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Posted by: x Lai Tasha x
First letter of each line.
M A W
MAW is semi-phenetic for MORE

So the code is "more".

Now the question is more what?
More Fic
More Idiocy
More "I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER"


You spelt Phonetic wrong; and it IS phonetic not semi phonetic.

Sorry for being a perfectionist, but i'm in a bit of a pedantic mood at the mo.

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  • 08.29.2006 1:51 AM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War
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B00M HEADSH0T!!!!1!!!one!eleven!1

this is so freakin cool... I like this story...

  • 08.29.2006 11:04 AM PDT
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Posted by: zalworP
you spelled moment wrong...

>_>






"MOOOOOORE??"


LOL

  • 08.30.2006 7:24 AM PDT
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Hey havent signed on for a while but am still enjoying your story cant wait for the next chapter.

[Edited on 8/30/2006]

  • 08.30.2006 1:24 PM PDT

Official Town Drunk of Sandwichia. Nation of the Flood.
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Posted by: Atlantan Wraith
Posted by: x Lai Tasha x
First letter of each line.
M A W
MAW is semi-phenetic for MORE

So the code is "more".

Now the question is more what?
More Fic
More Idiocy
More "I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER"


You spelt Phonetic wrong; and it IS phonetic not semi phonetic.

Sorry for being a perfectionist, but i'm in a bit of a pedantic mood at the mo.


Mo is not a word.

Spelt is well...spelled wrong.

now go back to your horrible perfectionist ways, which your still having problems doing obviously.

  • 08.30.2006 6:05 PM PDT
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I picked up a lot of extra shifts this week, which included today, tomorrow, and the other 4 days I had off, so the chapter will be, how they say, delayed. Somewhere on the weekend I'd say. See the universe didn't work against me for making that declaritive statement about the release date, myself and the fact that living means having money forced this turn of events. So wait a bit, and instead of complaining loudly, say something like, "That's our Clark!" and laugh for three minutes. You'll feel a lot better.

As an aside, has anyone else read "Fiasco" by Thomas E. Ricks. An awesome book in my opinion. Helped fill in a lot of gaps in my mind in the world of American politics and the such. Highest recommendation from a guy who is always late.

  • 08.31.2006 10:01 PM PDT

Phoenix is dead, long live Phoenix!
Is it?

Mr Clark late, never.

  • 08.31.2006 11:34 PM PDT
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i dont know if this has been stated as i dont read all of the posts, but Mr. Clark the link to the uninterupted story isnt working

  • 09.02.2006 5:33 PM PDT

Phoenix is dead, long live Phoenix!
Is it?

It hasn't just go to http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2168082/1/

  • 09.02.2006 8:55 PM PDT
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So here's a quick impromptu question:

How many of you are in love with Fasul?

See, I'm in a rut so to speak, I ended up reading over this story again the other day and as typical of when I read my own work, I was disgusted with how pedestrian it read. The last few chapters in particular, they're awful. They read like something I would have written in Grade 4 Language Arts.

So, suitably depressed I read over the last installment of the Forerunner Chronicles and...well let's just say I didn't suddenly get a change of opinion.

Rather than wallow in my own self-pity, which admittingly is what I typically do at times like these, I'm trying to narrow down what it is about the Forerunner Chronicles in particular that is tying me down. Some of the conclusions I've come to is that I have not been entirely miserable while writing these chapters. My artistic license is grown and nurtured by personal suffering which is lacking these days. I've been disgustingly amused most of the time and happy, which is not a good place for me, I need to be taken down a few pegs.

Other than that rather ambiguous problem, I've come to wonder if writing for a character like Fasul has simply become too boring. Three chapters in a row is taxing, and it shows. That observation leads quite naturally into my question for you, the much-abused public.

Would that I could throw aside my personal torment for a moment, I ask the light-hearted question, if I were to completely disregard Fasul, at least in the terms of forming scenes around his perspective, would you find it cumbersome? Shall I merely be creating more problems than I solve by say, shifting the focus to Cyriacus entirely?

ANSWER IN A TIMELY FASHION! OTHERWISE I WILL CRY!

  • 09.03.2006 8:52 PM PDT

Phoenix is dead, long live Phoenix!
Is it?

Soz, start crying. To be honest I think using both characters would be awsome. Cyriacus and Fasul. But the Fasul we have in the AI, not the one we have at the moment. This chapter I cannot wait for, and to have say 50% in each characters viewpoint would be awsome.

  • 09.03.2006 9:18 PM PDT
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I agree with Lai Tasha.

It may be best to quickly wrap up fasuls story and then continue on with master chiefs situation.

  • 09.03.2006 10:14 PM PDT
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Posted by: zalworP
just have an explosion happen or summin so fasul has to shut up.


That's the smartest damn thing I've heard in years.

  • 09.04.2006 6:23 PM PDT