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Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of World War Fifteen
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I will always place the mission first.
I will never accept defeat.
I will never quit.
I will never leave a fallen comrade.

Posted by: Mr_Clark
Posted by: zalworP
just have an explosion happen or summin so fasul has to shut up.


That's the smartest damn thing I've heard in years.

i hope that is sarcasm, never listen to prowlass

[Edited on 9/4/2006]

  • 09.04.2006 8:42 PM PDT
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I know I may not have much authority/street credit in your forum clark but begrudge a dedicated fan his opinion.
I think fasul's story is fascinating. It is the first fanfic i've read with a viable theory about the forerunners and a good one on top of that. Not including some portion of their heritage and motives would detract from the story in no small way. But that is just my opinion. The only "flaw" with it might be it's position in the story. Coming directly after one of if not the most suspensful and exciting MC portions of the story might not be the best idea. Sure that makes poor souls like me hopelessly searching for the conclusion of the other stroyline, but is that a good thing or a bad thing? I'll leave that one up to you because I don't know. I think it might be more interesting to further define fasul's relationship with Cyriacus (If one exists) in the last chapter of the Forerunnner Chronicles and leave it at that. But don't sell that story short because truth be told that's the one that spawned all the rest. How can you understand the last chapter if you haven't read the first? Gotta respect a guy who asks the fans. Good luck!!!

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  • 09.04.2006 8:55 PM PDT

“But I will for their sakes remember the covenant of their ancestors, whom I brought forth out of the land of Egypt in the sight of the heathen, that I might be their God..."

Fasul: I think we are all missing the point of the in-depth character development that Clark has written. Fasul is our first connection into what and more importantly, WHO the Forerunner were. This portion of "history" is literally the key to everything in the future. How can we understand why the covenant have reacted in the fashion that they have? How can we understand what the Flood really are? We all want our Hero(s) to shine in one momentus finale, but how much richer will it be understanding the plight that the Forerunners had and have left us in? Clark wants us to feel the pain and the desperation felt by so many generations before.

Clark: Bring on the pain. History is absolutely necessary since we are destined to repeat it. Exciting, somewhat. Revealing, YES!




  • 09.05.2006 9:26 AM PDT
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Rampant: Thats exactly what I was trying to say. Good form.

Zalwor: Thanks.

Clark: You da man.

  • 09.05.2006 4:57 PM PDT

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since i've been gona all weekend

"thats our clark"

*laughs for 3 minutes and feels better*

now, I wanna know more about fasul that not interuptted by a big explosion.

Now back to my forever long waiting of the next chapter.

  • 09.05.2006 5:17 PM PDT

Phoenix is dead, long live Phoenix!
Is it?

Your Verdict Mr Clark?

  • 09.05.2006 10:47 PM PDT
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Your Verdict Mr Clark?

You guys are nuts.

  • 09.06.2006 5:32 AM PDT

Posted by: Mr_Clark
Your Verdict Mr Clark?

You guys are nuts.


Thanks for stating the obvious.

:-)

  • 09.06.2006 6:46 AM PDT

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Posted by: sir_brilliant
Posted by: Mr_Clark
Your Verdict Mr Clark?

You guys are nuts.


Thanks for stating the obvious.

:-)


I second that. (meaning I am nuts, and so are all of us) Gotta love this stuff.

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  • 09.06.2006 11:08 AM PDT

Phoenix is dead, long live Phoenix!
Is it?

That wasn't what I was expecting...

  • 09.06.2006 12:38 PM PDT

“But I will for their sakes remember the covenant of their ancestors, whom I brought forth out of the land of Egypt in the sight of the heathen, that I might be their God..."

hhhh..... so much for poor ol' Fasul

  • 09.06.2006 2:30 PM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War
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Damn, all ur chapters r very good writed. U played halo 2 a lot to writed this stuff i suppose.
Well im boring of halo 2 im waiting for halo 3, i'm sure halo 3 will be better than halo 2 for the graphics and the design of the xbox 360.
If u write all the story of Halo 3 i will read it, so play a lot men, answer me will u do it?
If u write this maybe you can write all the story of halo 3.

  • 09.06.2006 2:38 PM PDT

Phoenix is dead, long live Phoenix!
Is it?

If you get bored of Halo 2 play halo Combat Evolved. So much fun with the scopable pistol.

Mr Clark What on Earth was that post about? A hint at when the next chapter is coming out?

  • 09.06.2006 4:54 PM PDT
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This is an EPIC page to the thread. Absolutely awesome.

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Mr Clark What on Earth was that post about? A hint at when the next chapter is coming out?

If you can actually gleam some kind of release date hints from that post, I crown you my intellectual superior.

Keep in mind, the chapter is actually finished, I'm just trying to make it not so shibadful, which is Clark-speak for "OMGWTF?".

When I get some free time off of work, I'll be editing like an editor guy.

  • 09.06.2006 5:12 PM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of World War Fifteen
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I will always place the mission first.
I will never accept defeat.
I will never quit.
I will never leave a fallen comrade.

Posted by: zalworP
2.suck my dick spart it seems to make time go by faster...

i thought you were -blam!- prowlaz now you just proved me right
Posted by: Mr_Clark
Your Verdict Mr Clark?

You guys are nuts.

i guess we are

[Edited on 9/6/2006]

  • 09.06.2006 5:55 PM PDT

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Posted by: zalworP
2.suck my dick spart it seems to make time go by faster...


again?

last night wasn't good enough?

  • 09.06.2006 9:36 PM PDT

Phoenix is dead, long live Phoenix!
Is it?

Prowlaz, enough.

  • 09.06.2006 11:25 PM PDT
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I will always place the mission first.
I will never accept defeat.
I will never quit.
I will never leave a fallen comrade.

Posted by: spartakus14
Posted by: zalworP
2.suck my dick spart it seems to make time go by faster...


again?

last night wasn't good enough?

spartakus you just made it worse

  • 09.07.2006 7:30 AM PDT
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The only -blam!- vulgarities in this thread should be when I have semi-erotic moments between Cyriacus and Fasul. Sheesh, I thought that was a given guys.

EDIT: Seriously? They won't let me say that word? Man, science just got beat down hard.

[Edited on 9/7/2006]

  • 09.07.2006 10:29 AM PDT
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BLARG!!!

i got blacklisted for calling someone a noob.

im so sick of that rule...


>_>


SOOO you almost done with ur pointless editing clark? im going to need a picker upper tomorrow night im sure.

  • 09.07.2006 5:19 PM PDT

Phoenix is dead, long live Phoenix!
Is it?

what word?

  • 09.07.2006 9:28 PM PDT