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Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War
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Fabulous stuff Mr_Clark.

  • 02.27.2005 12:20 PM PDT
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Best chapter yet Mr. Clark, keep it up.

  • 02.27.2005 12:30 PM PDT
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Amazing chapter once again Mr. C.

Also, I think I know what your going to do for the next chapter, and if I'm right, then you are absolutely amazing.

  • 02.27.2005 12:48 PM PDT
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I actually have no idea whatsoever where you are going with this....should I feel stupid?

Also, if you are going to tell the history of the covenant, check out this site:

http://nikon.bungie.org/misc/hallofmurals.html

The murals are interesting to speculate on, and might lead to inspiration of some kind...Def. worth checking out!

  • 02.27.2005 12:56 PM PDT
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Wow, thanks for the PM. Awesome read as usual. Really looking forward to your continued work. Thanks!!

  • 02.27.2005 1:04 PM PDT

It is the soldier, not the reporter, who has given us freedom of the press. It is the soldier, not the poet, who has given us freedom of speech. It is the soldier, not the campus organizer, who has given us the freedom to demonstrate. It is the soldier, not the lawyer, who has given us the right to a fair trial. And it is the soldier who salutes the flag, who serves the flag, whose coffin is draped in the flag that allows the protester to burn the flag.Father Dennis Edward O'Brien, USMC

Nice one

  • 02.27.2005 1:10 PM PDT

I share pies.

Go mister C

  • 02.27.2005 1:19 PM PDT
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I will always place the mission first.
I will never accept defeat.
I will never quit.
I will never leave a fallen comrade.

Thanks for the PM again and great chapter.

  • 02.27.2005 1:21 PM PDT
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Great chapter Mr_Clark.
There is one major problem though......wen have to wait AGAIN for another chapter.
Its gonna be a loooooooooooong week (or however long it takes you).

  • 02.27.2005 1:56 PM PDT
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Great chapter once again. Your writing style is amazing, and it never fails to keep my attention.

I admit I don't know what your planning either, but if its anything like what you've done so far, I'm not worried about how it might change the story.

Looking forward to Chapter 12

  • 02.27.2005 2:11 PM PDT
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nice chap man. i realy hope you get published some day.

  • 02.27.2005 3:09 PM PDT

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Great chapter.

And I love what you are doing with the Arbitor. You are really turning him into one of my favorite character. (Johhson, Chief, Kelly, Arbitor, and Cortana).
I love the direction you're going, and it's exciting and scarry. But I have the utmost faith that you can do it justice. Hell, you may even teach the Bungie writers a thing or two about it.

Right Marines?
"OOHRAH!"

*twidles thumbs and patiently waits to see what happens*

  • 02.27.2005 3:12 PM PDT
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Great chapter Mr. Clark.

  • 02.27.2005 3:16 PM PDT
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Ah! The new chapters only been out a couple days, and already i can't wait for the next chapter. Ihate to ask this so early after releasing a new one, but when's the next one gonna be out?

  • 02.27.2005 3:19 PM PDT
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Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god! That's the best chapter ever. The ending left me more pissed off than the ending of Halo 2. I'm just dying with anticipation.

Let me guess, the Colonel who called MC a freak was Ackerson, right? Man, that guy needs to be taught a lesson. Bravo my man, bravo! If you ever publish any sort of book please notify me of it; I'll buy it instantly. You are one of the greatest writers I've ever seen. You know how to build up a plot perfectly and your execution is excellent. Once again, bravo!

Do you have AIM/MSN? If you do, can you PM me your SN? I'd really like to talk to you over an IM.

[Edited on 2/27/2005 3:43:21 PM]

  • 02.27.2005 3:42 PM PDT
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Thanks for the pm. Wonderful chapter!!! I loved the brutes name.

  • 02.27.2005 4:29 PM PDT
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That was the best chapter yet and thanks for the PM Mr. Clark.

  • 02.27.2005 4:56 PM PDT
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Great chapter and especially great cliffhanger, i cant wait for the next history of the covenant chapter

  • 02.27.2005 6:04 PM PDT
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great chapter ounce again mr_clark and thx for the pm. i'm just wondering but how long does it take to send out all the mpms?

and dominic24 asking that should be considered a complement that he is doing a good job with the story. and i too wish to know the answer to that

  • 02.27.2005 6:46 PM PDT
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Man the Oscars are really boring. I suppose that's a direct result of not having any Lord of the Rings films to cheer for. That and most of the movies up for nomination in practically every category were pretty horrible.

Anyways, thanks for the praise everyone. I myself enjoyed Chapter 11 very much, one of my better pieces of writing I think. No worries about asking for Chapter 12, its expected after a cliffhanger. The answer however I cannot say. I've been writing a lot the last few weeks, which comes with having such great feedback from you guys, but I think I need to take a little break. Nothin more than a few days though, so don't go thinking I'll be dissapearing for a few months.

Chapter 12 is going to be different, I'm warning you all right now, whatever your expecting, its probably off the mark. I think it'll be a great addition to the story however.

And also, 'The End of a War' has hit the 100 review mark on fanfiction.net, which is awesome.

  • 02.27.2005 7:26 PM PDT
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if i were standing by u i would give u a pat on the back

great job

Briar

  • 02.27.2005 7:39 PM PDT
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great chapter thought it wasn't much of a surprise that Gravemind survived.

  • 02.27.2005 8:12 PM PDT
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Take your time Mr. Clark. You deserve a rest... but I am still
looking forward to the next chapter! Good job and keep up
the good work!!!

  • 02.27.2005 8:55 PM PDT
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Great work, great work. This is more interesting than the stroyline of Halo 2.

Keep 'em coming, Mr_Clark!!!

  • 02.27.2005 10:01 PM PDT
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you, my friend, are simply great... no other words are appropriate.... * tear *


"There is no spoon..."

  • 02.27.2005 10:15 PM PDT