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Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War

"It's like a cake filled with pies." -Pete "Mango" Parsons

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by far the best. i think we should vote on which age u should cover next, maybe the taming of the hunter??.

awsome work clark.

  • 03.09.2005 4:44 PM PDT
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Posted by: ODST1125
by far the best. i think we should vote on which age u should cover next, maybe the taming of the hunter??.

awsome work clark.

Letting the foolish majority have control might end up screwing his plans.
So no

  • 03.09.2005 4:53 PM PDT
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I wouldn't mind seeing what Ages you guys would like to see covered. I've already chosen the ones I will be doing, but it would be interesting to see what you guys think.

Also, it would have the additional effect of having those who aren't too well verse on the Covie history will get a nice summary.

  • 03.09.2005 5:46 PM PDT

"It's like a cake filled with pies." -Pete "Mango" Parsons

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i know about the taming of the hunters, but how and when did it happen? and clark please go more in dept with Hunters, their background and history. just a thought.

  • 03.09.2005 6:40 PM PDT
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If you think im annoying u r probably right though, i mean come on i have no idea who doctor hasley is andhow come ive never really seen his face or that stuff! and whats halo delta? whats reach? where r those things? and an A1 called melissa?

  • 03.09.2005 7:17 PM PDT
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oh yeah and whats wrong with double posts? u cant really blame me for being stupid cuz im 12. hey! i have the same pic as someone else!!!!!!!!!!

  • 03.09.2005 7:20 PM PDT
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Amazing, possibly ur best writing. To tell you the truth though, i think this should be a different book entirly. I was hoping u continued the original mc story. That was awesome though and im still applauding you. I suggest u post another thread just for the "covenant history". Just a thought though.
I think u should continue your original story though. Do something like.... mc, "covenent history," MC, "covenant history" and keep switching. Anyways ur amazing and i know that u know whats best. Keep up the good work.

  • 03.09.2005 7:39 PM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War (Chapter 12 Released)
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Thats pretty damn good man. You're a genius.

  • 03.09.2005 7:52 PM PDT
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Posted by: flashbang6
If you think im annoying u r probably right though, i mean come on i have no idea who doctor hasley is andhow come ive never really seen his face or that stuff! and whats halo delta? whats reach? where r those things? and an A1 called melissa?


I don't think your annoying, just not knowledged in the history of Halo.

Head to this site here

Read up on the great universe that is Halo and I'm sure all of your questions will be answered.

Edit: Also, if you'll remember Chapter 11 ended with Arbiter saying:

"Then so be it, I shall tell you how the Covenant came to be."

What I'm doing here is giving us all a nice introspective look into the history of the Covenant, with some insights that not even the Arbiter and the other Covenant members know. There's several grandly important items that are in the final few bits of Chapter 12 that will come up later on in this story.

This isn't really a separate story at all. As were getting this look into the Covenant's past, the Arbiter is relating these facts (albeit, ommitting several details he never knew) to the Section III Admirals.


[Edited on 3/9/2005 8:06:16 PM]

  • 03.09.2005 7:59 PM PDT

"It's like a cake filled with pies." -Pete "Mango" Parsons

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so r not gona tell us what u are gona write about next, what age and stuff?

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well dont rush him hes a busy man and so is everyone. well i just have to say this: when the sangheili landed at the ruins, they were talking about vermin, were these vermin prophet soldiers? And the ships that can sail in the sky, r they phantoms?

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Posted by: ODST1125
so r not gona tell us what u are gona write about next, what age and stuff?


Nope, I gotta keep you guys guessing. Knowing everything that happens would take the fun out of it.


Posted by: flashbang6
well dont rush him hes a busy man and so is everyone. well i just have to say this: when the sangheili landed at the ruins, they were talking about vermin, were these vermin prophet soldiers? And the ships that can sail in the sky, r they phantoms?


The Sangheili were talking about the Prophets. At the point where Chapter 12 takes place, the Elites and Prophets have been at war for a while. They don't like each other too much.

As for the ships, those are the Forerunner ships the Prophets recovered from their home planet. They left their home world to search for other Forerunner planets, as well as escape the 'purification' and 'cleansing' of their home planet.

  • 03.09.2005 10:33 PM PDT

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"Ohhh lawd, it's soulguard again..."

I've missed a lot, been busy, but it was great seeing that PM, thanks for that Mr_C.

These past two chapters were breathtaking. I went back and read chapter 11 and then 12 and I thought they flowed flawlessly into one another. My heart dropped with every discription of the Elite (Sanghelli) discriptions. You captured their words, actions, and gestures, and put them to paper like nothing I've ever read. A wonderful job. And it's interesting to note that you didn't bother to give a time frame for how far back in time this happened. Some may argue agaisnt that but it was a nice touch.

Like everyone has said, this chapter could very much stand alone, and could be quite a powerful story on it's own. But I have to say, I'm a huge fan of the Elite's back story.... so reading this chapter was a dream come true.

Added bonus: You are the first to mention any word of Elite's having family and mates (at least in my knowledge, tell me where if I'm mistaking). Bravo, it was a very nice, yet sutal, touch. Keep it coming.

Just Another huge fan.

  • 03.09.2005 10:42 PM PDT
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I think your right soulguard, I haven't seen anybody else talk about the Elite's upbringing or families either.

Just another thing that makes Mr. C great.

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I think your right soulguard, I haven't seen anybody else talk about the Elite's upbringing or families either.

Posted by: soulguard
Added bonus: You are the first to mention any word of Elite's having family and mates (at least in my knowledge, tell me where if I'm mistaking). Bravo, it was a very nice, yet sutal, touch. Keep it coming.


I believe it was mentioned in the 'Flood'. I can't remember the elite's name, was it Zamamee (sp?)? He reminisced about his father and upbringing on his home planet. Maybe someone else has better info. Unfortunately, I don't have time to go reread the 'Flood' to find it.

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I agree Konoka_chan, Mr_Clark is a great young author. I'm really looking forward to reading his future paper backs, if he chooses to seek a career in writing.

Hmm.. that is correct LE. I also don't have time to reread it, but I may thumb through it tonight before I sleep and try to find it. But as for Mates and children, perhaps Mr_C is the frist. Anyone else have any references worth checking? Mr_Clark?

I love the mystery behind the Elites, and how much they Mirror "Predators" (the exception being that Predators are hunters while Elites are Warriors (fighters with a cause) ). Perhaps there are Female warrior sects within the Elites and stuff like that. So mysterious.

[Edited on 3/10/2005 6:17:07 AM]

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Posted by: soulguard

I love the mystery behind the Elites, and how much they Mirror "Predators" (the exception being that Predators are hunters while Elites are Warriors (fighters with a cause) ). Perhaps there are Female warrior sects within the Elites and stuff like that. So mysterious.


Yeah, it would be really cool know how their social lives are built up.

I'm sorry to ask this Mr_C, I know you're probably too busy, but have you read my little prologue yet? I'm not sure if you know it but I've sent it in a PM.
I wanted to ask you this before in a PM but PM'ing you did not seem a very good idea since you're receiving so many already.

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Posted by: soulguard
Hmm.. that is correct LE. I also don't have time to reread it, but I may thumb through it tonight before I sleep and try to find it. But as for Mates and children, perhaps Mr_C is the frist. Anyone else have any references worth checking? Mr_Clark?

I don't believe it mentions anything about mates but I do believe that it stated something to the effect that he was a child. Other than that, I can't recall seeing anything else that relates to elite society. I don't have the LE DVD so I'm not sure if there is anything there.
Thanks, LE

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Posted by: soulguard
Hmm.. that is correct LE. I also don't have time to reread it, but I may thumb through it tonight before I sleep and try to find it. But as for Mates and children, perhaps Mr_C is the frist. Anyone else have any references worth checking? Mr_Clark?

I don't believe it mentions anything about mates but I do believe that it stated something to the effect that he was a child. Other than that, I can't recall seeing anything else that relates to elite society. I don't have the LE DVD so I'm not sure if there is anything there.
Thanks, LE


I know that they have sons and fathers but would the Elite society hhold any females?

  • 03.10.2005 7:47 AM PDT
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guys we all know mr c is a fanominal writer the way he draws you in

i think the elites would have sons and daughters but i think they stay home and look after the kids type thing and never go to battle ( i don't think ive killed a female elite)

and i would like to see the taming of the hunters the grunt rebellion and i would also like too know how the brutes were let in i think it was a mistake not too wipe them out instead of giving them membership

[Edited on 3/10/2005 9:30:25 AM]

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Just a few things. I would personally like to see the grunts rebellion as they were always deemed cannon fodder by the covennt and they rebelled which would definetley make for an interesting read. Plus will we see any arbiters? i first thought that the main charcter of chapter 12 (sorry forgot!) son would have been the arbiter (blame star wars) but then i remembered that the covenant had been going a long time and that there had been many arbiters so that it could not of been his son. the arbiters could make for a great character as they all died (except for the current one.) in heroic combat.

ps. Mr_Clark is 18! wow thats something i did not know. such talent at such a young age.

[Edited on 3/10/2005 11:48:19 AM]

  • 03.10.2005 11:43 AM PDT
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great chapter Mr. C

  • 03.10.2005 1:48 PM PDT
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If this is stupid say so but Mr._Clark=M.C.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Get it? Master Chief!!!!!!!!!He's the best!WOOT!

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Posted by: flashbang6
If this is stupid say so but Mr._Clark=M.C.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Get it? Master Chief!!!!!!!!!He's the best!WOOT!

ima tell you, that was stupid dont waste space.

  • 03.10.2005 7:26 PM PDT