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"Ohhh lawd, it's soulguard again..."
I've missed a lot, been busy, but it was great seeing that PM, thanks for that Mr_C.
These past two chapters were breathtaking. I went back and read chapter 11 and then 12 and I thought they flowed flawlessly into one another. My heart dropped with every discription of the Elite (Sanghelli) discriptions. You captured their words, actions, and gestures, and put them to paper like nothing I've ever read. A wonderful job. And it's interesting to note that you didn't bother to give a time frame for how far back in time this happened. Some may argue agaisnt that but it was a nice touch.
Like everyone has said, this chapter could very much stand alone, and could be quite a powerful story on it's own. But I have to say, I'm a huge fan of the Elite's back story.... so reading this chapter was a dream come true.
Added bonus: You are the first to mention any word of Elite's having family and mates (at least in my knowledge, tell me where if I'm mistaking). Bravo, it was a very nice, yet sutal, touch. Keep it coming.
Just Another huge fan.