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Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War
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Posted by: RedCorn
but i think that the new ages of the brutes would be ok but the drones what do u guys think?

Not exactly sure what you're asking but it sounds like you would think that a chapter on the brute's history or inclusion in to the covenant would be cool but one on the drones would not. If that's the case, correct me if I'm wrong, then I would agree. However, Mr_Clark has already stated that the look into the past is over and with next chapter the central characters will be back in force. - LE

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  • 04.04.2005 1:36 PM PDT
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Posted by: RedCorn
but i think that the new ages of the brutes would be ok but the drones what do u guys think?

Not exactly sure what you're asking but it sounds like you would think that a chapter on the brute's history or inclusion in to the covenant would be cool but one on the drones would not. If that's the case, correct me if I'm wrong, then I would agree. However, Mr_Clark has already stated that the look into the past is over and with next chapter the central characters will be back in force. - LE


thats exactly what i think im just not good at expressing my feelings!!!!

  • 04.04.2005 2:11 PM PDT

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Yeah, I want a big, explosive next chapter including the MC and Arbiter!
ACTION, ACTION, ACTION ! ! ! ! !

(sorry, i have been spending too much time watching those cool drag car races where the guy on the microphone repeats everything)

Hey guys, a little question - Should I buy Star Wars: Republic commando?
I know it's a tactical, squad-based 1st person shooter and I enjoyed playing the game Brothers in Arms. Will I enjoy Rep. commando?

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  • 04.05.2005 6:43 AM PDT
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When is the new chapter come out?

  • 04.05.2005 6:20 PM PDT
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i'm sorry the computer i'm on wouldn't register it i don't know why i tripled post if it was possible casue i checked the page like eightimes and it finnaly pops up

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  • 04.05.2005 6:20 PM PDT
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i don't think the drones would have an age cause i have the impression that they are like robotish things. Brutes i believe were there for a while but were only introduced in combat till like first strike

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  • 04.05.2005 6:24 PM PDT
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I will always place the mission first.
I will never accept defeat.
I will never quit.
I will never leave a fallen comrade.

Republic Commando was an awesome game. I think you would like it.

  • 04.05.2005 6:45 PM PDT
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I think the title means that the Arbiter will have to do some time as a slave or locked away in a jail cell and he will get tortured. Thats what it sounds like. Mr. Clark if i'm right can you tell us

  • 04.05.2005 6:46 PM PDT
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Auuu, things have been weird over the past few days. I go pick up Doom 3, and a bunch of Japanese games I ordered arrived, so my gaming has been taken care of. Beat Splinter Cell just in time too, so that's good.

As for Chapter 15, because of work, and a reshuffling of work hours and such, I'm a little swamped, but I'm still working hard. I haven't even popped Doom 3 in yet, and that co-op mode is just screaming at me.

The forums were down for awhile, and things are little more colorful now.

Anyways, long story short, I'm tight lipped over the details of Chapter 15, so whatever your musings and assumptions are, will have to wait to be proven.

  • 04.05.2005 9:18 PM PDT
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Posted by: Mr_Clark
Auuu, things have been weird over the past few days. I go pick up Doom 3, and a bunch of Japanese games I ordered arrived, so my gaming has been taken care of. Beat Splinter Cell just in time too, so that's good.

As for Chapter 15, because of work, and a reshuffling of work hours and such, I'm a little swamped, but I'm still working hard. I haven't even popped Doom 3 in yet, and that co-op mode is just screaming at me.

The forums were down for awhile, and things are little more colorful now.

Anyways, long story short, I'm tight lipped over the details of Chapter 15, so whatever your musings and assumptions are, will have to wait to be proven.

So, have u decided on what you're going to say about my offer to edit your chapters for you? I mean, you don't have to, but I'd love it if you did. Every time I notice an error in any of your chapters I'm just dying to fix it, and this way I might just get that chance. Anyways, if you want to, you can PM me or message me on AIM/MSN.

AIM: iBangH0Tch1cks
MSN: danx15@msn.com

P.S. I'd appreciate it if I didn't get flamed over my AIM sn. =/. It was sort of an inside joke with someone, but I decided to keep it, so yeah.

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  • 04.06.2005 12:54 AM PDT

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Posted by: Master Chief 719
Republic Commando was an awesome game. I think you would like it.


Wow, it is a good game. I just bought it today and it's really good. It flows along at a nice pace and contolling your squad is really easy. Nice graphics and gameplay.
It gets 9/10 from me.

  • 04.06.2005 11:50 AM PDT
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Posted by: Halo3plzzz xP
So, have u decided on what you're going to say about my offer to edit your chapters for you? I mean, you don't have to, but I'd love it if you did. Every time I notice an error in any of your chapters I'm just dying to fix it, and this way I might just get that chance.


Actually I received an e-mail a very short while ago, and Hellmunky had taken it upon himself to edit all of my chapters. So right now I have all the updated chapters, its just that re-uploading them will take forever so I've got to set aside a large chunk of time to reupload them all. Thanks for the offer though, that you guys are willing to undergo such huge mind-numbing tasks is really flattering.

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  • 04.06.2005 1:36 PM PDT
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when is the next chapter comming along?

  • 04.06.2005 1:52 PM PDT
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i don't know if i should buy doom or Splinter cell cause i don't have live anymore and i just play it constantly at friends house ( parents took my live away and my friend took his splinter cell back)

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  • 04.06.2005 1:53 PM PDT
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come out with the chapter i need something to read.

  • 04.06.2005 2:12 PM PDT
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Not to be a jerk or anything, but as other people have said, I do have a life outside of writing. Friends, work, girlfriend, and games, those four things right there take up a lot of time. I put a lot of effort into my writing to make sure its up to par before I can release a chapter, and sometimes that means it can be up to two or even three weeks until I get around to releasing a new chapter.

I do try and spend a fair chunk of my free time writing however, and because of that I'm able to churn out those large chapters faster than other people might be able to. I'm 18 years old however, fresh out of high school and trying to avoid the university scene.

Sooooo, just be patient with me, I've suddenly found a few new things dumped on my lap that have been really eating up my free time, and that means less time for me to write. I don't have a solid release date for Chapter 15 yet, as I'm only a few pages into it by now. Check back Thursday and I should be able to have a better idea of when I'm gonna have some time to really get down and do some writing.

Edit: Did anyone else pick up Close Combat: First to Fight today? My copies in but I'm a tad busy so I was just wondering what anybodies initial impressions are?

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  • 04.06.2005 3:55 PM PDT
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I will always place the mission first.
I will never accept defeat.
I will never quit.
I will never leave a fallen comrade.

Hey Mr. Clark it's ok if you take a break for a little, you deserve it. You never did take that break you said you were going to take some time ago, so take one now. Relax and play video games or hang out with your friends or girl friend, you shouldn't have to write during all your free time. Everyone takes a break some time.

  • 04.06.2005 4:36 PM PDT
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Dang, Mr. Clark, I dare say I dare say you buy a LOT of games. Are you rich or something?

Every post I see from you, it seems like you've bought yet another new game. How do you find the time to play them all?

I've given up on buying games now. Every time I buy a new one I just play it like CRAZY for a few days, then put it down, and never touch it again. It's a big, big waste of $50; for me anyway.

The only game I'm actually going to buy from this point forward is the potential Halo 3.

  • 04.06.2005 5:25 PM PDT
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I die a little everytime i log on to bungie.net and find that another chapter has yet to be posted. but i gusse you deserve the break.

  • 04.06.2005 7:06 PM PDT
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he does deserve the break i mean i read some of these other amatures post their fanfic's and i can say that none of them compare to the one you have gifted us with mr. clark. if i could have thumbs on my comp i would give you 2 thumbs up.

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  • 04.06.2005 8:23 PM PDT
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Mr.Clark is not a fan fic writer. he is an author.

  • 04.06.2005 8:56 PM PDT
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he's not an author, he's the man!

  • 04.07.2005 2:43 AM PDT
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He also is an 18 year old guy who is capable of having fun outside these forums...
Take your time Mr_Clark, quit writing the End of a War and go write your other novel for all I care...... <hmmm..... actually... don't listen to that last part....

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  • 04.07.2005 7:56 AM PDT
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Yea, Mr_C. you really do time off from writing. After all, its you who
decides if you are even going to write at all. Anyways, take as much time as you need.
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He also is an 18 year old guy who is capable of having fun outside these forums...
Take your time Mr_Clark, quit writing the End of a War and go write your other novel for all I care...... <hmmm..... actually... don't listen to that last part....

  • 04.07.2005 10:28 AM PDT
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Its ok for you to take a break mr. c. I mean you have been working pretty hard on this story for a while now.

  • 04.07.2005 3:05 PM PDT