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Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War
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Great job yet again. I want another chapter damt! lol

Edit: Yeah new page!

[Edited on 2/11/2005 10:29:14 PM]

  • 02.11.2005 10:28 PM PDT
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Thanks everyone, I think I worked myself back into a better style with Chapter 8, something I hope to continue once work on Chapter 9 resumes. I'm leaving the release date for the next chapter up in the air for now, since while I have been churning out chapters pretty fast lately, I don't know when the muse might dissapear, as it has sadly been known to do quite suddenly.

Don't be too worried about this story ending any time soon. I've got, shall we say, several "tricks" up my sleeve as well as a few twists that I'm sure will come as quite a surprise.

Look for the introduction of a new character in the next chapter. I don't think I should call the character 'new' though, if you catch my drift. Heh heh.

Also, wow, over 170 posts in a little over a week, and its all still on topic. That's gotta be a record.

  • 02.12.2005 12:04 AM PDT

I shall cut into 343 Industries Headquarters, retrieve the Halo Bible and burn any 343 Industries employee that stands in my way.

Grand Hierarch of the Covenant Elite Community!

Again a very good chapter. Keep up the good work, Mr_Clark.

And thanks for the PM.

  • 02.12.2005 1:32 AM PDT
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thanks for the PM (even though i didnt ask!) that was a great chapter, ive got three words for you

GET THIS PUBLISHED!

  • 02.12.2005 4:34 AM PDT
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Good story man there was one miniscule problem: The Cheif and the Covenant forces would most likely not know about the split withen the Covenant. The brutes might have been told of the victory but they would still send elites and the others to their grave by using them to fight for them.There would be numerouse ways that humanity and the Covenant in that system might find out so I suppose it doesnt matter.
Thanks for remembering to PM me.
And other than that I bet Nylund is reading this an sobbing <Nylund bangs head against keyboard and screams: AN 18 YEAR OLD BEAT ME AT MY OWN GAME!!!!!!>

  • 02.12.2005 8:25 AM PDT
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<Mr_Clark>Must fake...humility must not seem like a pompouse know it alll
<everyone of us> Great book man! Its better than Nylunds
<Mr_Clark>Head.....getting bigger must take tylonol and post next chapter

  • 02.12.2005 8:58 AM PDT
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Have you posted this on HBO?
If you havnt you should there are alot of people their who would love this...

  • 02.12.2005 9:28 AM PDT

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by far the best fan fic ever. I would not be surprised if bungie chooses u to write the next book. Keep up the great stuff.

  • 02.12.2005 9:31 AM PDT
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by far the best fan fic ever. I would not be surprised if bungie chooses u to write the next book. Keep up the great stuff.

<Eric Nylund> Ow my head hurts from banging my head on the key board so much I cant remember what upset me.....<looks at computer screen> HOLY CRAP AN 18 YEAR OLD WRITES BETTER THAN ME!!!!!!<continues banging head against key board>
<Mr_Clark>Wow my head is swelling with pride and the compliments of others.....Im finding it even harder to resist the urge to gloat to other authors.....

  • 02.12.2005 9:39 AM PDT
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lol

great chapter mr clark
keep it up

  • 02.12.2005 10:11 AM PDT
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I will always place the mission first.
I will never accept defeat.
I will never quit.
I will never leave a fallen comrade.

Thanks for the PM and great chapter, keep up the great work.

  • 02.12.2005 10:14 AM PDT
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HOLY CRAP THAT WAS AWSOME!!!

  • 02.12.2005 10:18 AM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War (Chapter 8 Released)
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Seems great so far.

  • 02.12.2005 10:33 AM PDT
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=0 ive sat here since the beginning reading ive joined the group but never post id just like to say OMFG this is the best thing ive ever read johnson is frikin kick ass so send me a pm for the next one plz =0

  • 02.12.2005 12:26 PM PDT
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clarke you relly shuld send this to bungie man. i know id buy it if they pubslhed it.

  • 02.12.2005 2:21 PM PDT
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Y in the hell arent u on bungie's doorstep applying for a job as the writer of the rest of the halo books. U and Nylund would be one kick ass team of authors if u ask me but i have only seen one problem with chapter 6 and its the part were Jan whoops on 2 ODST marines and in my opinion that seems 100% completely impossible unless she was like a former ODST herself and was the best soldier in her battalion then the chances of this evnt become more reasonable but otherwise there is no way in mgod damn mother-blam!- hell that she could beat up 2 ODST marines untouched theres just no -blam!- way.

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  • 02.12.2005 3:15 PM PDT
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Don't forget, Jan's a 'one point one' and she could probably give the Master Chief a couple of surprises in a fight.

  • 02.12.2005 3:36 PM PDT

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Great. Thanks for the PM. You Rock. Awesome Chapter. .... it's like crack.. I ... need ...
I need more..
haha.

And I think the chief was made aware of the covenant split when He arrived on High Charity (Halo 2) and saw the brutes and Elites fighting. Of course he may not have know much of the details about why they were fighting. So this is a good point. I'll have to double check and play that level again... but right now, I don't care. This... IS A GREAT READ.
It's going to be interesting to see Johnson and the Arbitor get along. Looks like the Arbitor is really starting to admire Johnson. HELL YEAH!! Even the strongest of the Elites recognizes how awesome Johnson is.

.... Can't wait to see how their connection will build. And Jan is become more and more interesting. (Sorry, Never did the "I love Bees" thing.)
Keep it coming.

  • 02.12.2005 5:34 PM PDT
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Hmmm, glad everyones enjoying my depiction of Johnson. He's hogging the spotlight though, people might start to think he's the main character.

Bah, anyways, I think I've hammered out what the rest of this story is gonna look like, which means I've come to my conclusion regarding the other Spartans as well as Dr. Halsey and even Colonel Ackerson.

Alright then, what's today? Oh, well its Sunday now, so I'm gonna have to say......

Chapter 9 release set for Wednesday.

That should give me enough time to churn it out. I'll be keeping the same PM system I had in place for chapter 8, with the send the PM's first along with the specified release time and a link to the chapter. It worked quite well this time so I'll keep it around.

And yes, instead of searching for those that requested a PM, I simply organized it by anyone that replied to this thread with a positive comment, or PM'd me, I sent a Chapter 8 Release private message. So, if you've already told me how much you adore this mediocore piece of writing or PM'd me with a response or question, you'll get a PM.

If you want a PM for the Chapter 9 release, simply reply with something positive. Hell say this story sucks, but keep a positive tone with it and I'll still send one. Or just PM asking for one, and I'll ship one out to you when the chapters ready for delivery.

  • 02.13.2005 1:00 AM PDT
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Seriously your story is much better than eric nylund or sir brilliant, and it was a wise decision to keep the other spartans out of the story.

  • 02.13.2005 5:37 AM PDT
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clack i love you like a brother

  • 02.13.2005 11:22 AM PDT
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Well I'll be damned....that was a very interesting chapter. I guess they just put his arm in cold storage now, right? You'd think 500 years in the future they'd be able to sew that right up. Oh, wait....ingenious idea coming....they give Johson a robotic combat-enhanced arm! Imagine how unbelievably badass it would be, if he had a Spartan-like appendege!

Anyways, looking forward to who this new character is, (is it ILB?). And thanks for the PM, I feel special now.

  • 02.13.2005 12:53 PM PDT
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Well I'll be damned....that was a very interesting chapter. I guess they just put his arm in cold storage now, right? You'd think 500 years in the future they'd be able to sew that right up. Oh, wait....ingenious idea coming....they give Johson a robotic combat-enhanced arm! Imagine how unbelievably badass it would be, if he had a Spartan-like appendege!

Anyways, looking forward to who this new character is, (is it ILB?). And thanks for the PM, I feel special now.



Yeah and it could have a buster cannon in it and everything......

  • 02.13.2005 2:13 PM PDT

I share pies.

Damn son,
took me a good 2 hrs to read through all that
you should seriosly take this up with a publisher....forget bungie forums

i'll rate it 12/10......yes 2 above what you can get
keep it up
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  • 02.13.2005 2:22 PM PDT
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I hope grave mind realy didnt die.
I mean i was hopping their would be so much more to the caracter than that

  • 02.13.2005 2:47 PM PDT