- last post: 01.01.0001 12:00 AM PDT
Hmm, it seems I've been exposed. Ah well, if I really cared that much I wouldn't have put all of it into my profile.
Anyways, just wanted to address a few things. I'm not sure if its common knowledge, but the character Gravemind speaks in iambic septameter, which is basically a poetic way of speaking with seven beats per line.
Now if you observe the conversations and instances throughout this story where Gravemind speaks, he most certainly is not speaking like this, which can be attributed to my being lazy and not having the time to format everything he says. It might be something I could do on future re-writes though, if I ever decide to revisit this story and give it a face-lift once its been completed.
As for the monitors, 343 Guilty Spark, 2401 Penitent Tangent, and 'The First' Atoning Deviant, they will play a large role in the end of the story. If you're familiar with some of the deeper inner roles of the Halo lore and speculation, than you just might guess what their actions might be.