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Very nice chapter. I may have missed some parts, because my eyes got sore. But what happened with the Arbiter and Mc, as i remember they were heading to the Elite Homeplanet to stop an invasion.

  • 06.18.2005 8:02 PM PDT
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HOLY GOD, i am speechless, this is so heartwrenching that i cannot stand it.
Truly a masterpiece.
Now only doom awaits.

  • 06.18.2005 8:32 PM PDT
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Damn Mr. Clark. That chapter was huge. I wasn't expecting the spartans to get turned into flood and Sgt. Johnson is hardcore. He cut his own arm off with a knife, how hardcore is that. Once again an excellent chapter, it was definitely worth the wait. Can't wait till the next chapter is done especially after the Prophet of Truth saw the Forerunner.

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  • 06.18.2005 9:05 PM PDT
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I will always place the mission first.
I will never accept defeat.
I will never quit.
I will never leave a fallen comrade.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You killed the spartans, I was afraid you were going to do that, when Jan saw the blood and the goo I was like he wont, he wont dare kill them off and then the goo dripped down and I was like NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO you killed them, I hate the flood even more, THEY DESERVE TO BURN.

Oh sorry about that Mr. Clark I was so shocked and angry that the flood killed the spartans, now the Master Chief is truely the last Spartan alive or is he?

I knew Johnson was going to grow tentacles when his arm started hurting.

That was an awesome chapter Mr. Clark i enjoyed it very much, now excuse me I have to go kill some flood on Halo 2.

Thanks for the PM Mr. Clark.

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  • 06.18.2005 9:31 PM PDT
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If there is one thing I hate about good literature, it would be the fact that it is impossible to draw your eyes away from it and you suffer from intense cravings when you are away from it.

I crave for the next chapter!!!

  • 06.18.2005 9:37 PM PDT
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as I was lying on my bed at the night gazing the stars wondering one thing; Where the hell my roof went.

I am a Zombie.
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Again that was so damn good Mr_C.
God i love the way you are leading us to our doom. There is only one way to stop this and we'll know what is it, or do we?

The chatter! I can call him!

The sound of static and nothing else flooded her senses, and Jan stared down at the device in shock.

“It…it doesn’t work?” Jan said in disbelief.


That was best part of the story, it was so obvious, yet still unexpected.

For some reason, this story reminds me from those comic books *Aliens* where Aliens finally ttacked Earth.

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  • 06.18.2005 11:21 PM PDT
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Wow, another awsome chapter Mr.C although the only problem i had with it is that, Three flood possesed spartans shouldnt go down with a few handgun rounds. I wish you made the fight a bit more dramatic, oh well other then that, awsome chapter.

  • 06.19.2005 12:49 AM PDT
Subject: Info on new chap?

I share pies.

I know it's early, but can you give us any hints or time range of Chapter 19?

  • 06.19.2005 1:12 AM PDT
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Oh my god. Truly the most emotional peice of literature I have ever read. The poor humans, blown away by the Covies, than attacked on a second front by the Flood. It would appear that the future holds no good for any species.

COME ON CHAPTER 19!

  • 06.19.2005 1:16 AM PDT

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I got his sarcasm...one person has to implement sarcasm and then you get a pile of terrorist chipmunks crashing your party, not fun at all..

Why did you have to take Linda, Fred and Will away. What have they done to you. WHY??????

(Sobs wildly)

  • 06.19.2005 3:36 AM PDT
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(This is the same review as I left on ff.net, but hey)

A true masterpiece.
Amazingly well done, I had this wierd 'wow, what an insane, crazy, kick-ass plot twist' thing throughout the entire chapter.
That Ackerson of a -blam!- is going to die, by your pen/typingfingers or I will throw myself into the story and strangle him, slice the -blam!-'s neck, and leave him to rot on the fields of eternity....

Amazing, wonderful, beyond what I could ever expect from someone other than J.R.R Tolkien.

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  • 06.19.2005 3:51 AM PDT
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Hey I just realised about Ackerson. Me thinks he will be going the same route as Halsey. Remember folks theres still one left. I don't care how long you take, so long as it gets here. Also, am I correct in saying the next chapter will be enitirely chief based?

  • 06.19.2005 3:55 AM PDT
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I finally am able to post. I loved the chapter yet sadly it took me forever to read. When it got to the part with the flood with rockets i was like no!!!! cause in every thing i read or see i like this one character and then is brutally killed off or kills him self to save someone else

  • 06.19.2005 7:51 AM PDT
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I haven't posted in quite a while here, but I have read, and loved, every single chapter.
When I think of the Halo storyline, it is as if your fan fiction is the proper timeline of events, as if this is what Halo 3 will be like.
I am loving the whole story, the death of the thre Spartans was heart-wrenching, but I think it was neccesary, in order to make the story more serious, and more understandable.
The thing which just Owned it for me last chapter was the inclusion of the Forerunner at the end. When the Prophet of Truth is standing there, bricking it, you can clearly picture the scene, the desert, with a figure in flowing robes on the dune, truly fantasic.
It really was worth the wait- so bring on chapter nineteen!!!

  • 06.19.2005 8:31 AM PDT

I share pies.

....Maybe the spartans aren't dead....
....I shall say no more

  • 06.19.2005 8:48 AM PDT
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Hmm. I hate to be the one to break the chain of extravagent praise, but I dunno about this chapter. I mean, don't get me wrong, it was good and all, but it didn't have the same feel as the others. It lacked a certain... I don't know what (Dr. Evil styley). I can't place what it was - I think some of the characters just didn't fit as well as they have before, for example, some of the stuff Johnson said - mainly during cruiser episode - didn't quite fit, and that fella - Landon I think isn't it? - just didn't have the right feel to him, like he didn't fit the marine bill as it were.

On the other hand, the first bit with Jan in the cafe and such - that was great, I loved that part.

Incidentally is that Lieutenant (?) Morallis the same Morallis as is in ILoveBees, or is it just a convenient name?

Again, I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but someone's gotta say something at least a little detrimental - surely it's better for it to be constructive criticism than some retard going: THIZ IZ THE WURS STRY EVA!!!!!!!! BRILINTS IZ WAAAAAAY BETR, GET A LIFE U -blam!-!!!!!!! or something along those lines.


p.s. please don't crucify me for this

  • 06.19.2005 10:42 AM PDT
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Crucify?! You?!

Yeah !, thanks for the idea.

We were gonna kill the thieves that detained the story, but we can always shift perspective.

And besides we gotta find something to do while we're waiting for the next chapter.

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  • 06.19.2005 10:49 AM PDT
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nooooooo they killed the other spartans.

  • 06.19.2005 11:28 AM PDT
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Hey Mr Clark I thought you were going tp regail us all about what happened at your place of work. You said it was quite amusing.

  • 06.19.2005 11:43 AM PDT

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Yes please do....

  • 06.19.2005 12:04 PM PDT
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Well, after a long rest I think I'm resembling a human being once more. I was quite worried yesterday that I was going to post it in the wrong order or something, but it looks like I did things right.

As for the robbery tale, I figure it'll be better to post it on the blog thing, cause it really is quite off topic, so just check my blog sometime later tonight or tomorrow to read up on what happened the other night.

Chapter 19, I'm not sure when I can give you a good idea about when it'll be released. It's still in the planning phase, I have to figure out exactly what is happening in the chapter, and then format it all so things flow smoothly.

Don't worry though, I'm quite certain I won't be taking another month-long hiatus.

  • 06.19.2005 1:09 PM PDT
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great chapter, i like how you added that bit about chesty puller.

  • 06.19.2005 1:13 PM PDT
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Chapter 19 waiting paranoia is already setting in.

  • 06.19.2005 1:45 PM PDT