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Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War
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My band teacher gave us some of those about a month ago, but i never took them seriously, so i have never played them.

  • 10.26.2005 9:52 AM PDT

Official Town Drunk of Sandwichia. Nation of the Flood.
MBT - Impossible Just Happened
* How is it that "Fat Chance" and "Slim Chance" mean the same thing?
* If you choke a Smurf, what color will it turn?

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i h8 those so much. i got one in math and ended up just not doing it. but great chapter MC

  • 10.26.2005 5:18 PM PDT
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?this seems a reasonable ? So how did the mc get the new armor if the first reclaimer died trying to find his new born daughter and wife or wait soon to be but wouldn’t that armor still be there unless Fasul went down and got it after he died in the fight. Witch is highly unlikely I think there would still be flood half-breeds still there so fasul going down there to get is unlikely . The only thing I can think of is that. Is that Fasul race witch I cannot remember the name but I think after his race fired the halos he must have went back to see if the suit was still there what do you guys think about this theory

  • 10.26.2005 5:24 PM PDT
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i can never seem to get thoses crossward things ether they are why to hard for me



P.S if eny one is in an active group and could use a good member i need an active group becouse i got ousted form one of my other groups

  • 10.26.2005 6:30 PM PDT
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any one who writes about HALO is a really big frickin nerd with no life. sorry

  • 10.26.2005 6:34 PM PDT
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Posted by: NXC GLADIATOR
I am a loser that has no life


Fix'd

  • 10.26.2005 6:40 PM PDT

Official Town Drunk of Sandwichia. Nation of the Flood.
MBT - Impossible Just Happened
* How is it that "Fat Chance" and "Slim Chance" mean the same thing?
* If you choke a Smurf, what color will it turn?

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lol thats right way to fix it. lots of fun in making negative stuff against u into negative stuff against them.

  • 10.26.2005 8:06 PM PDT
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Posted by: Mr_Clark
Posted by: NXC GLADIATOR
I am a loser that has no life


Fix'd


lol, very nice Clark.

  • 10.26.2005 8:35 PM PDT

Phoenix is dead, long live Phoenix!
Is it?

Posted by: NXC GLADIATOR
any one who writes about HALO is a really big frickin nerd with no life. sorry


then why are you appologising???
any way
first, they are not, there just talented,
secondly, I cant wait for prowlaz to read that, just out of interest has he been blacklisted? cause his kirbey dance has dissapeared along with his posts.
and thirdly, read the bungie rules, i think it says something about flaming (but not counter flaming)
good bye and get off this thread/forum/website/web...
(-.-)
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  • 10.26.2005 8:43 PM PDT
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Posted by: JTisaBeEg
Excuse me Mr. Clark our master, but any word or hints on the next chapter?


Well, I haven't officially started work on it just yet, but its been rolling around in my head for the last couple of days.

I'm not sure what I'm going to do with the chapter. I want it to include probably the most pivital scene of the entire story, but I know that scene itself is going to be huge. And long... Probably almost twenty pages by itself. It could literally be a chapter all by itself.

The chapter will, I'm certain, at least answer some of those questions you've had tickling the back of your mind:

How could John be a descendant of Cyriacus, when it was stated that Chrysanthe and Laelia perished?

Why is Clark introducing such an important character so late in the story? What malevolence does his being preclude? Could he truly be so important?

Is John going to emerge from his stasis? What exactly is his current status?

Why was the Covenant formed? Why did the Prophets betray their creators?

Where does the Prophet of Law fit into everything? Is he truly the power holder in the Covenan?

The Prophet of Truth, and what appears to be a Forerunner are headed for Danrun, what is their goal? More importantly, is the Forerunner truly a Half-Breed? What exactly is a Half-Breed?

What is Kelly and Dr. Halsey's intention? Their mission that they have been trying to complete for so long? What exists on Danrun that is so important?

The Majal and the Forerunner, two separate entities? Or two of the same breed? Where does the Flood fit in, and Gravemind?

Those are just some of the questions that should, and mose likely will get answered come Chapter 23's release.

Ugh, I just looked over that list. *sob* I have way too much writing ahead of me.


Yeah I think I have been losing my mind over the Prophet of Law and Gravemind. And something I have thought of was in the once chapter that had a fairly short section where all that happened was thoughts and nobody knew who said them. After I read 22 I thought it may be thoughts in the back of the Chief's head that may originate from Cyriacus, but it didnt fit because he needed the suit to gain his thoughts and emotions.

After I decided to stick with my first instinct and think that its the P.o.L. But like many theories about this story, our master Mr. Clark will probably baffle me once again.

Boy do I love this fanfic.

  • 10.26.2005 8:46 PM PDT
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Anyone who comes to Bungie.net to tell someone that they are a nerd because he writes about Halo is a nerd... and a jerk... and has no life.

Clark is our master, we are his loyal subjects. But he might as well make you a peasant servant...

EDIT: Hey Clark, another question, where did you come up with the name Cyriacus??

[Edited on 10/26/2005]

  • 10.26.2005 8:50 PM PDT
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so how do you think the fasul got that armor for the mc

  • 10.27.2005 4:13 AM PDT
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I will always place the mission first.
I will never accept defeat.
I will never quit.
I will never leave a fallen comrade.

they could have made an extra one just in case they needed another

  • 10.27.2005 1:36 PM PDT

Official Town Drunk of Sandwichia. Nation of the Flood.
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* How is it that "Fat Chance" and "Slim Chance" mean the same thing?
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it couldnt have been another one because in the chapter it says that it was the same armour that cyriacus used.

  • 10.27.2005 2:43 PM PDT
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Hey Clark, did you know this story is being reviewed on the Official Fanfic Group?

Here's a link to the group if you guys haven't joined it yet.

I gave you a five, cause I'm such a nice girl.

  • 10.27.2005 3:12 PM PDT
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Eh? Which group? Wait let me go check.

Edit: Wow, no kidding. Hmm, so far nothing below a four, that's pretty cool. Nice waxing poetic there Konoka_chan.

Sooo, you guys wanna go rate it? It'd certainly be interesting to see what everyone thinks, and after my detractors get through with the ratings, something tells me I'll need you guys to help boost me up, lol.

Follow the link Konoka_chan gave and either join the group if you haven't yet, or if you already have just go to the forum and find the thread asking to rate Mr. Clark's story.

I'll be your best friend if you do.

[Edited on 10/27/2005]

  • 10.27.2005 3:18 PM PDT
Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War (Chapter 22 Released! Page 137!)
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Love the fanfics...but youres rocks!!!

  • 10.27.2005 3:34 PM PDT
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i voted it as a five becouse thats what it should get

  • 10.27.2005 5:21 PM PDT
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Yes I think fusal must have went back for it after the rings fired. wouldn’t the other reclamers of Fusal race been good enough to kill the half breed and flood and the forrunners I mean if the guy controlling our beloved master chief was so good would they all be really go just like him

  • 10.27.2005 5:34 PM PDT

I shall cut into 343 Industries Headquarters, retrieve the Halo Bible and burn any 343 Industries employee that stands in my way.

Grand Hierarch of the Covenant Elite Community!

I'm sorry that i'm a bit late, but it took a while to read Chapter 22.

This is must have been the longest chapter in B.Net history. But it was the best i have read so far. The MC being a descendant of the first Reclaimer, him getting the Reclaimer armor, whiping out the 900.000 Covenant forces, the destruction of the two Forerunner ships. It's just awesome!!!

The only bad thing was that i didn't got a PM. :-( I discovered yesterday that you released Chapter 22 , so if it is possible, could you send me a PM the next time you release a chapter? Thank you!

Keep writing chapters like this, Mr_Clark!

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  • 10.28.2005 2:50 AM PDT
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Unfortunately Master Lucky, I've retired the PM alert system for now, mainly because dedicating over an hour at any time to alert people is too taxing, which sounds incredibly lazy to everyone I'm guessing, but I seriously have time management issues these days.

Linkage once more. This Fanfic is still being reviewed over in the Official Fanfiction Group, and per request from some of the members, I'll be linking to it for the next while until the polls close. I'm sure this should help rise their member list higher, and also generate more input into the actual "review" process.

So if you have the time, stop by, rate this story out of five, and shed a few words of enlightenment upon the rest of those weary souls. Even if its something so deliciously verbose as:

"This story = teh greatness!"

or

"Clark sux, he kiled mah dog!"

Granted I'm certain I've never seen your dog, so my ending its life might be hard to do, though I have been known to possess psychokenetic powers, so perhaps I may have inadvertantly killed it, and if that's the case I'm truly sorry.

Oh yes, and a last little few words for everyone.

I 100% understand some of the mixed reactions to Chapter 22. Even I didn't like it too much. As it is now, I feel it to be a shell of what it once was. We all can remember all the terrible sordid details that resulted in Chapter 22's lateness, and many many many many rewrites. They were horrid, and that leaked into my writing. The bane terror that is my hatred.

I rushed scenes, cut elaboration, and generally kicked the chapter out the door as soon as humanly possible. This was the right decision for me, as I'm sure the chapter would have otherwise turned into a snuff fic, where I kill everyone and everything...(not that it won't wind up happening anyway though..heheh)

Unfortunately that also led to a great deal of confusion over the one greatest aspect of Chapter 22. Cyriacus' awakening and overwhelming of John's body and senses. The character we see from the halfway point onward, is not the Master Chief, he is something new. Will he stick around for awhile longer? Maybe, maybe not. John has to get back into the story don't you think, and one of the main focus' of Chapter 23 will be John's fight for control over his consciousness. Anticipate much symbolism and allusion, much to I'm sure, some of your chagrin.

And yes, I have officially started Chapter 23. It's release date is so convoluted that were I to give you an estimate, I believe it would be in the year 1976. Yes, I have the power to release chapters before you were even born! Or at least that's what my mind seems to think when its deprived of sleep.

Oh wondrous sleep, I miss thee.

Yeah, that's my cue to exit.

  • 10.28.2005 4:34 AM PDT

I share pies.

Posted by: Mr_Clark


"Clark sux, he liked mah sister!"


Hehe

Over 70% of the votes are ***** (5 stars I'm not swearing....yet)
I think they like you

Lookin' forward to the next chap.

[Edited on 10/28/2005]

  • 10.28.2005 7:12 AM PDT

Posted by: LIME31
I got his sarcasm...one person has to implement sarcasm and then you get a pile of terrorist chipmunks crashing your party, not fun at all..

Posted by: Mr_Clark
Unfortunately Master Lucky, I've retired the PM alert system for now, mainly because dedicating over an hour at any time to alert people is too taxing, which sounds incredibly lazy to everyone I'm guessing, but I seriously have time management issues these days.

Linkage once more. This Fanfic is still being reviewed over in the Official Fanfiction Group, and per request from some of the members, I'll be linking to it for the next while until the polls close. I'm sure this should help rise their member list higher, and also generate more input into the actual "review" process.

So if you have the time, stop by, rate this story out of five, and shed a few words of enlightenment upon the rest of those weary souls. Even if its something so deliciously verbose as:

"This story = teh greatness!"

or

"Clark sux, he kiled mah dog!"

Granted I'm certain I've never seen your dog, so my ending its life might be hard to do, though I have been known to possess psychokenetic powers, so perhaps I may have inadvertantly killed it, and if that's the case I'm truly sorry.

Oh yes, and a last little few words for everyone.

I 100% understand some of the mixed reactions to Chapter 22. Even I didn't like it too much. As it is now, I feel it to be a shell of what it once was. We all can remember all the terrible sordid details that resulted in Chapter 22's lateness, and many many many many rewrites. They were horrid, and that leaked into my writing. The bane terror that is my hatred.

I rushed scenes, cut elaboration, and generally kicked the chapter out the door as soon as humanly possible. This was the right decision for me, as I'm sure the chapter would have otherwise turned into a snuff fic, where I kill everyone and everything...(not that it won't wind up happening anyway though..heheh)

Unfortunately that also led to a great deal of confusion over the one greatest aspect of Chapter 22. Cyriacus' awakening and overwhelming of John's body and senses. The character we see from the halfway point onward, is not the Master Chief, he is something new. Will he stick around for awhile longer? Maybe, maybe not. John has to get back into the story don't you think, and one of the main focus' of Chapter 23 will be John's fight for control over his consciousness. Anticipate much symbolism and allusion, much to I'm sure, some of your chagrin.

And yes, I have officially started Chapter 23. It's release date is so convoluted that were I to give you an estimate, I believe it would be in the year 1976. Yes, I have the power to release chapters before you were even born! Or at least that's what my mind seems to think when its deprived of sleep.

Oh wondrous sleep, I miss thee.

Yeah, that's my cue to exit.


Hey clark we all can wait for a chapter. Go ahead and sleep for a whole day. Then start it whater pace you want. I mean you cant push yourself for people like us.

  • 10.28.2005 7:57 AM PDT
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Yes, take your time Clark.

  • 10.28.2005 8:45 AM PDT
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good chapter Mr.Clark. i havent been able to post cause i was blacklisted for 2 and a half weeks lol

  • 10.28.2005 10:40 AM PDT