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Subject: Halo Fanfic: The End of a War
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very nice history there

very good as usual, however i thought it was somewhat dragged out in certain parts, like they didnt really fit too well

i and im sure everyone else is looking forward to the next part and i hope it is up soon as you only have not much more to go

  • 05.18.2006 5:10 PM PDT
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Dude This stuff is nice. Nice Nice Nice!

  • 05.18.2006 6:22 PM PDT
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A book on the forums.

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  • 05.18.2006 6:23 PM PDT

Phoenix is dead, long live Phoenix!
Is it?

C'est hypercool

yes thats french

  • 05.18.2006 10:46 PM PDT
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I actually figured everyone would hate what I've thrown out there. I always thought it was pretty boring, but I guess you guys are so eager you just ate it all up. Either that or you're trying to be nice. Not sure which one I'd prefer.....

I'm not healed per se, but I am on the mend I believe. I've dropped from the 'Crazy-Remote-Island-Illness' setting and have settled on just something similar to the flu. That I can handle. I've run marathons with a flu before.

Don't think my bad luck has ended or anything like that. Just last night, when I was rolling around on my bed wondering why it was 25 degrees celcius, my Nintendo DS A/C Adapter slipped off the chair in my room somehow, and with startling accuracy, fell into a cup filled with water. This caused a series of noises and weird smells to arise immediately, so I luckily got to it and pulled it free before anything terribly serious could happen. Had I been asleep however, I'd imagine that right now I'd be a crispy corpse, and that would suck. The adapter was plugged in by the way, so sparks and such were there, and my chair is made out of flammable materials I believe. Its not metal or something like that. The adapter was ruined though, and just when I got my hands on New Super Mario Bros too. I was more sad over that fact than my potential fiery death, I think my priorities are messed up.

That incident aside, I thought I might inform everyone, since I saw that some people are still mulling over a statement I made in the past.

It involved me saying that I wasn't going to continue this story once the summer started, on account of my move. Time has passed since I made that mind-boggling statement, and by now I've re-thought my position. Basically I've come to believe that I was crazy, or at least mentally unaware at the time of saying that.

There's no way I'll finish this story in a month and a half, and there's equally no way that I'm just going to abandon it. Where's the point in doing that? That'd just be stupid, and while I am under the impression that I am a very stupid person, I'm not that dumb.

So fret not, kind souls, I will not slip away into the night. I will finish this story for better or for worse.

  • 05.18.2006 11:10 PM PDT
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Rejoice!!!

Clark is the man!

  • 05.18.2006 11:46 PM PDT

Phoenix is dead, long live Phoenix!
Is it?

Posted by: JTisaBeEg
Rejoice!!!

Clark is the man!

  • 05.19.2006 1:25 AM PDT
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Get it out!!! u cant stop now! if ur gonna stop soon then u hav 2 think up a dramatic ending! and of course good luck =)

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  • 05.19.2006 4:43 AM PDT
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3 words.
So Friggin' Good.

  • 05.19.2006 5:51 AM PDT
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Posted by: funkybro117
Get it out!!! u cant stop now! if ur gonna stop soon then u hav 2 think up a dramatic ending! and of course good luck =)


Whom is stopping? I just put something out two days ago......

  • 05.19.2006 10:30 AM PDT
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I will always place the mission first.
I will never accept defeat.
I will never quit.
I will never leave a fallen comrade.

Posted by: Mr_Clark
So fret not, kind souls, I will not slip away into the night. I will finish this story for better or for worse.


sweet

  • 05.19.2006 1:01 PM PDT
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i have no friends

  • 05.19.2006 1:53 PM PDT

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* How is it that "Fat Chance" and "Slim Chance" mean the same thing?
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Posted by: Antibrute
3 words.
So Friggin' Good.


I got better.

*Announcers voice*

Un-freakin Believable.

  • 05.19.2006 2:10 PM PDT
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~I was born for the storm, and a calm does not suit me~

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מִכְמַן

Glad you are okay Clark...

  • 05.19.2006 6:15 PM PDT
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Posted by: spartakus14
Posted by: Antibrute
3 words.
So Friggin' Good.


I got better.

*Announcers voice*

Un-freakin Believable.


Hey!

  • 05.19.2006 7:27 PM PDT
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Excellent chapter, hey what you consider bad is A+ writing to everyone else and what you consider excellent is god-like in writing terms. :)

Still you gotta love all the history, its just great and it's amazing how you can create such good history that sounds like it is the forrunners history.

Plus wow, a millionth of our modern cars pollution, we still have the hydrogen fuel cell cars though, even at at amount of pollution, you still can't beat no pollution at all though. :)

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  • 05.19.2006 8:16 PM PDT

Posted by: LIME31
I got his sarcasm...one person has to implement sarcasm and then you get a pile of terrorist chipmunks crashing your party, not fun at all..

Once again Mr Clark, nothing short of amazing

  • 05.20.2006 11:18 AM PDT
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a few words ever thought of getting this published

  • 05.20.2006 1:23 PM PDT

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All I can say is this: KICK ASS!!!

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  • 05.20.2006 6:04 PM PDT

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Posted by: whoppersandwich
Once again Mr Clark, nothing short of amazing


actually amazing's stocks dropped a bit so this would now be above amazing.

  • 05.20.2006 6:26 PM PDT
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Woohoo!!! Excellent work Mr._Clark!!!

Keep it up!

  • 05.21.2006 1:43 AM PDT

Posted by: LIME31
I got his sarcasm...one person has to implement sarcasm and then you get a pile of terrorist chipmunks crashing your party, not fun at all..

Theres no such thing a worse when it comes to you Mr Clark.
I bet you Mr Clark has 100 halo loving women constantly ringing his doorbel trying to hook with him. But Mr Clark is modest enough to not make a big deal

  • 05.21.2006 3:03 AM PDT
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JUST PLAIN AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep it coming, keep it coming

  • 05.21.2006 6:07 AM PDT
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Very nice history! The way you use those terms and definitions is amazing! I hope to hear more from u Mr. Clark! The story was so awesome!

  • 05.21.2006 8:48 AM PDT
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dude thats awsome

  • 05.21.2006 10:25 AM PDT