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Subject: My halo book called Heritic cheak it out give me some feed back
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"Egue! you fool watch are backs the humams could be lurking anywhere". "Relax Toricha you old warrior they are just outlaws, i dought they even have wepons". "Then how did they capture the minor prophet we are here to retrive, now look at my armour its gold your is only blue so im the one making the orders". "Sir! I have enemys on radar, lots of enemys". "Alert the grunts Sleath", "yes sir". Toricha drew his plasma rifle as the grunts waddeled up, "ready for action your excelency" said yumb yub the spec ops grunt as he singneld his grunts to unholster their wepons. "Sir they're here here" yelled the cammando elite as three humans appered out of the darkness and opend up with their BR55 battel rifles. "Its a trap",screamed Egue as he opened fire with his plasma rifle" its the humans". The battle group dove into cover as 9.5mm bullets pinged over their heads. Sleath ignited a plasma grenade and lobed at the humans, it melded to the middel humans face and exploded killing all three. "Lets get out of herebefore more come" yelled Toricha as he began sprinting down the hallway back to their phantom as six more humans appered and opend fire. The minor grunt named Marchie started to run but tripped and fell Egue grabbed him and started sprinting "You are the stupidest Ungoy i have ever laid eyes on" said Egue as he dove into the grav lift of the phantom pulling them into the ship. Seconds later the rest of the team were on board. "Loses yelled" yelled turicha scanning the crew. "Non sir" replied sleath as he un-activated his active cammo.Excelent.

Hope you guys like send me feed back and ill keep writing

  • 02.04.2005 8:42 PM PDT
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anybody???

  • 02.04.2005 9:52 PM PDT
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It was Kewl i guess, but i couldnt really get most of it cuz its friggin 12:00 here in minnesota.

  • 02.04.2005 10:03 PM PDT
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thx i guesse ill try to make it easier to understand thx for your input

  • 02.04.2005 10:09 PM PDT
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yea

  • 02.04.2005 10:25 PM PDT