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Subject: Alone
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You can not comprehend alone

deep in the cold dead night

they walk in the shadows...

...do you walk in the valley of the shadow of death

do you feel them, they move around you

...waitting to taste the sweet blood rushing in your veins

them...

a chill runs down your spine as there breath moves closer...

...and closer

you cant stop them...voices sing

can you hear it...

...a childs voice screaming while the moon passes over the sky

the thought of them brings the strong men's bones to a crackel

evil is not a strong enough word for there terror

they -blam!- your flesh of your skin with the very blink of an eye..

you face them now

they are there...them

[Edited on 6/29/2004 3:44:22 AM]

  • 06.29.2004 1:56 AM PDT
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dont look behind you...

they are there

  • 06.29.2004 1:58 AM PDT

"My knee is bleeding, can I have a bandaid?" "Today its your knee, and in 10 years it'll be your wrists, why are you making this my problem?"

Do this again and I'll brand your ass with the banning prod

I know, there is sitting one next to me, oh wait thats my brother. My mistake.

  • 06.29.2004 1:58 AM PDT
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are you trying to scare me because its working

  • 06.29.2004 2:01 AM PDT
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no man i wrote this a while ago and found it in my room i thought id share it with you

  • 06.29.2004 2:05 AM PDT
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ohh ok

  • 06.29.2004 2:12 AM PDT
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i ummm....cant sleep

i updated it so its alot better now

please post what you think...

...i like these three dots...
its like pausing but your still reading
makes it better

  • 06.29.2004 3:46 AM PDT
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I think it's awesome. I just can't seem to find any rhythm though...

  • 06.29.2004 8:27 AM PDT