- last post: 01.01.0001 12:00 AM PDT
Posted by: gnomefriend
that's an awesome idea, i loved marathon almost as much as halo, it would be so cool if they upgraded the graphics and added a multiplayerYou have eight errors in such a short sentence. Here’s how I would write it:That's an awesome idea! I loved Marathon almost as much as Halo. It would be so cool if they upgraded the graphics and added a multiplayer.Just a few little things. Like using a period and capitalized word instead of a comma.