- last post: 01.01.0001 12:00 AM PDT
Posted by: Nedus
i improved it. i put in some more stuff.i think youll like it. i already PM'd it to Frankie
about 50 dropships land on the beach and discharge marines and the remaining Spartans.the Pelicns open up with their 70mm chin guns,taking out guard towers and turrets before retreating.the Covenant Shades begin to open fire on the UNSC forces,but the snipers and rocket jockeys take them out quickly. The soldiers begin to make their advance on the Covenant fortification,and this is where the casualties begin to start. Bullets and plasma bolts criss-cross the beach,and soon the sand is littered with bodies of marines and Covenant alike.Undaunted,the Marines continue their assault.Snipers take beads on hapless targets,the steady crack crack of their rifles echoing in the Covenant's ears before the 14mm bullets snatch away their lives in a spray of gore.Covenant troops are torn to pieces by frag grenadesSome Marines grab fallen MA5B's to dual wield and start unloading.Warthogs run victims down and fire rockets at the Covenant..a couple Scorpion tanks begin to open up on the remaining guard towers.The Covenant's pathetic response to this assault is to send out a force of about 50 Ghosts.they are ripped to pieces in minutes by the sudden barrage of 90mm shells,7.62mm bullets,and Warthog rockets that comes their way.The Spartans meanwhile,are flanking the Covenant while they are distracted. They then make their move. they rush into the main Covenant bunker with SMG's blazing,shredding the Covenant in seconds. they then proceed to rig the complex with satchels of C-7 foaming explosive and Fury-Tac nukes. the Spartans evacuate the complex and go to help with the battle outside. The Spartans draw out their Battle rifles and pick off the Covenant leaders and Shade gunners,which causes the enemy's organization to fall apart.the marines then pull together and open fire all at once,emptying their clips,hammering the Covenant position with a hailstorm of 7.62mm and PDW.the remaining Covenant forces are decimated in a matter of seconds. Any remaining Covenant cowering in the complex are flash-vaporized by the ensuing explosion. Mission accomplished.
that's even better, but read Draerden's post above about the EGM article on the matter, but anyway that was awesome and i think you should keep expanding on it
[Edited on 6/30/2004 10:06:53 PM]