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Subject: agent404's poetry corner #5
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"DR. WEIRD'S PINEAPPLES"
*standard ATHF intro*
"Gentlemen, behold!" Dr.Weird shouted
"Pineapples? Oh what now?" his assistan Steve pouted
"These aren't pineapples, they're pineapple grenades"
Dr. Weird threw one while Steve was drinking lemonades
Steve explodes all over the place
"Now to make some with a face!!!!"

STUPID RABBITS
Damn those rabbits are dumb
I think their brains went numb
All they do is eat cabbage and old Carrots
They're 10 times dumber than dumbass ferrets
They always run into an electical fence
I don't think they have any common sense
I'm surprised they're not all dead
But they are dead in the head

Next week: Sorry, no poetry next week. I will be in Durango, Colorado on my Church's Youth ministry trip. A 12 hour busride means I get to take on the role the annoying guy who talks nonstop about boring stuff the whole trip and makes others bang their heaads against the windows.

  • 07.02.2004 7:56 PM PDT
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kickass. go pro.

  • 07.02.2004 8:06 PM PDT
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turn it into a song

  • 07.02.2004 9:08 PM PDT
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I'm a poet not a musician

[Edited on 7/2/2004 9:39:05 PM]

  • 07.02.2004 9:38 PM PDT
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nice poetry but i myself am an artist

  • 07.02.2004 9:45 PM PDT
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Well I'm a poet, musician, and artist. And I'm going to write a book someday soon.

But to continue the poetry....

Apathy

What good does the flea
as he whines unto the snake

the forest is a place of peril
foolish is the snake
who dwindles on the cry of the flea

the serpent will live or die
based upon how he strives to survive
but the flea drains the life of others
look at how inept and useless he is

let us focus on bettering ourselves
as a whole rather than wasting
away with illogical behavior

let them die; let them burn;
it is of no consequence

-blam!- your apathy


heres a song actually, its called Satyr
I know its angry, and not very creative, but I just love to show off stuff I do. Its a result of being very bored at work.

Consequentially
your going to have to die
just a little incentive
to never question why

forget your faith
you'll answer to me
i am the sun the earth the stars
i am infinity

i command
the tilting of the earth
i control you
you'll get what you deserve

i will douse you in acid
and laugh as you fall a-part
I've always been your satyr
since the very start

this is my elation

my drug, my blackest harmony

my most blissful allegation
...its nothing without me!

i will douse you in acid
i will piss on your ashes
eradicate your bloodline
you will fall in time

Everything I stand for-
is nothing short of war
anything i stand for
is something you will die for

[Edited on 7/2/2004 10:12:48 PM]

  • 07.02.2004 10:04 PM PDT
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Click on my name in my sig and go to the Writings section. I think I have almost 100 poems on there along with some other writings.

  • 07.02.2004 10:23 PM PDT
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Posted by: Excommunicado
Well I'm a poet, musician, and artist. And I'm going to write a book someday soon.

But to continue the poetry....

Apathy

What good does the flea
as he whines unto the snake

the forest is a place of peril
foolish is the snake
who dwindles on the cry of the flea

the serpent will live or die
based upon how he strives to survive
but the flea drains the life of others
look at how inept and useless he is

let us focus on bettering ourselves
as a whole rather than wasting
away with illogical behavior

let them die; let them burn;
it is of no consequence

-blam!- your apathy


heres a song actually, its called Satyr
I know its angry, and not very creative, but I just love to show off stuff I do. Its a result of being very bored at work.

Consequentially
your going to have to die
just a little incentive
to never question why

forget your faith
you'll answer to me
i am the sun the earth the stars
i am infinity

i command
the tilting of the earth
i control you
you'll get what you deserve

i will douse you in acid
and laugh as you fall a-part
I've always been your satyr
since the very start

this is my elation

my drug, my blackest harmony

my most blissful allegation
...its nothing without me!

i will douse you in acid
i will piss on your ashes
eradicate your bloodline
you will fall in time

Everything I stand for-
is nothing short of war
anything i stand for
is something you will die for

I can't understand alot of that, because I am more illogical I guess (please don't kill me like you do in your poem!) and it didn't ryhme but it was still good. Not as funny as mine, but obviously more sophisticated.

  • 07.02.2004 10:56 PM PDT