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Subject: I'm writing a book and I'm going to share some of it with y...
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Poll: My book.  [closed]
good so far:  75%
(3 Votes)
Needs some work:  25%
(1 Votes)
Total Votes: 4

Note to reader:
I want to become a writer and a Chef, both objectives are in the process of being accomplished I'm already a good cook and a awesome writer.
Like I said I want to test my book(from what I have completed) on the public, my writing style is a mix of Sci-fi,Anime,Fanstasy,-blam!- intrigue,Action/Adventure, and inspiration from various things suggestions are appreciated and comments and reviews of the content I've given you is fine, also you can PM me your suggestions and I'll notify you if they will be included. I'll update regularly, and please no Flaming or spam.

  • 07.03.2004 6:30 PM PDT
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It would help if you could see the story.

  • 07.03.2004 6:54 PM PDT
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Alright now what you've been waiting for:

A Samurai's Tale: Book 1& 2

By David J. Diciedue(this is my real name)


Prologue

13 B.C. the Battle for Orandan raged for over 90 years blood-shed upon blood-shed over the once fair city, now just a pile of mass rubble and outlines of many fair stone houses and a giant huge magnificent castle now lie in rubble and many graves now lie among the city in mounds of old buried earth.......... The Battle took place in Orandan which is in a realm called Ipponatsu, which is home to the Famous Orandan Rebellion Rebels(ORR), who started the whole gruesome war and the Ipponatsu Imperial Army(IIA) which helped end the war with help from The Spartans. Basically, the War ended in two versions depending on which side of the remaining people you talk to, the 1st version is, A peace Treaty was formed and this was Highly doubtful because the ORR's and the IIA were total enemies at this period but soon ended in the New age and became friends, the 2nd version is that the Captain of the ORR 1st Battalion slayed the Commander of the IIA and took his clothes and ordered the IIA's 1st and 2nd Battalions to kill each other, even though after the ORR won the war they all mysteriously died........

More to come hang in there!

Alright, let's break it down this is a modified version of the original transcript i have originally there was no enemy for the ORR to fight(i forgot them), there might be along the way a few plot pitfalls so I will fix them while they come realized to me or you the reader notify me about these potential pitfalls alo this is just the prologue more will be explained.

  • 07.03.2004 6:57 PM PDT
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Posted by: mjolnirmarkVI
It would help if you could see the story.


I wanted to start it in a new post.

  • 07.03.2004 6:58 PM PDT
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Update 7/3/04

* Did some nitpicking and bug fixing in the storyline
* Nothing else really special
* Now adding side-notes
* Only going to post half of C1(Chapter 1)
Chapter 1: A new Era: 1103 A.D.
The Age of the
Samurai-wizard: A New Beginning
A history Lesson of the New Age

The Age of Samurai wizards was and is a beautiful age, but now changed since 1,103 years ago in a way much better than those days of old. The attire is much more mordernized than it use to be, as for an example we can now wear elven cloaks with cloaking abilities, why you might ask? They become extremely useful in bad situations as in sneaking into an enemies fortress, but enough about that back to history. now, Narcissus Onus Cassious III is the one responsible for the New age see he had a Royal order for a Revolution against the new King, The Evil King Duloc Senatu Quantetris II, Cassious prevailed against Senatu in a very vigorous Sword Fight until Senatu was struck a devestating blow to the head.

More to come, I promise!

I'll have more put up tomorrow, just keep checking in on the thread for new content. Enjoy!

[Edited on 7/4/2004 2:24:19 PM]

  • 07.03.2004 7:28 PM PDT